Stream of consciousness:
Wow, Starfleet actually sent reinforcements quickly?!
Wait, transporters are working, but comms are down?!
Literally a space monster; it had a toothed mouth! It's Cthlulu crossed with a TMNT, with warp engines!
"We await your orders, sir." Isn't the role of a first officer to replace the captain on duty if something happens to the captain? Why is Kirk acting like he wasn't prepared for this?! Reminds me of that silly "Battleship" movie: "Orders, sir?!?!?!"
This doesn't look like the planet killer from "The Doomsday Machine."
Hah, a 3d chess set in Kirk's quarters.
Miracle worker Scotty already.
Ensign Miller: nice knowin' ya, for 1 second.
Ortegas: capable of doing all the wiring work on her console! I like when they show the Starfleet officers knowing everything about their station. They don't just operate it; they can rebuild it!
There are really scavenger humanoids! I thought this was a space monster and not a ship.
Oh, now we've got a spare dead ship; we're totally going to Doomsday Device this ship, aren't we. While I enjoy this show, it feels like somebody sloshed some old scripts together.
"There's no gasses in here", but they had just opened the door. Also, these invaders don't have the ability to smash/shoot a door?
The lifesigns: It's us, from the future?
Is that Sam Kirk? Oh, it's generic humans, who somehow stole warp drive with a warp-less ship, and now exist as the boogie-man for the past... 45 minutes. If we explore the edge of known space, shouldn't we have heard from all the locals about these guys before? Also, let's face it, if they're capable of making that awesome a ship, they really do sound like the best of humanity: Not morally, but the strongest.
And Pike said, "They clearly saw us." No they didn't; we were in spacesuits obscuring our faces at the time we engaged the enemy crew. They didn't see our faces at all. Wait, he ripped Pike's faceplate off, so he did see them. That's why he didn't shoot. But I mean he was still ripping the ship apart, etc. (The writers didn't want to have to explain how these guys speak Federation Standard.)
After reading the thread:
I got out of the good mentoring from Pike to Jim Kirk, that line Kirk says in TOS, "But we're not going to kill,,, [sic] today."
Everybody seems disappointed that three torpedoes did the trick, when phasers didn't. Just like The Doomsday Machine, they damage the mechanisms inside the thing. Oh, and why didn't anyone think of that before? Here's why: Because the pirate ship had been temporarily disabled this time, and maybe their weapons jamming and shields weren't fully operational? Because we only had 4 minutes left of airtime so the plot armor was only 3 torpedoes thick now?
Oh, and it's pronounced "SEH-lot," but that's only the Vulcan name. But we call ourselves "Rursum." Nobody knows that, because nobody's ever asked, and we don't actually talk much despite what the Vulcans say.
I thought it was OK, but not as memorable as some of the other ones. 5/10