Okay, I know you're done with Star Trek, and that's fine, but this is your critique? Are you serious? Gene Roddenberry based Star Trek, in part, on Horatio Hornblower. And there's no way you don't know that.You know the worst thing about this story?
The same plot could have taken place open seas in the 1600s.
Imagine it as British Fleet vs Privateers. You'd barely need any changes.
This not a sci-fi show, it's just in a sci-fi setting.
Of all the things you could've come up with to criticize SFA, that's what you come up with? Don't take this the wrong way, but you should've followed your own advice from the previous thread when you quoted Scotty.