I've engaged in discussion on this thread, but not posted my rating yet, so here goes:
Overall: 8 (Sorry, I LIKED the action in the first episode of the season - gave it a 9 - and this one was a bit less 'actiony' but still good.)
Liked:
- Pike's thoughtful decision RE: The PD applies here.
- Burnham showing she HAD learned her lesson RE: The CAPTAIN gives the order and you obey; (and that she articulated exactly that to Pike when he commended her for following his orders.) That IS character development for her, definitely.
- I liked Tilly, period.
I honestly DON'T get how people compare her to Wesley Crusher as:
i. She's not a snot nosed 14 year old super genius prodigy.
ii. She went through 4 years at Starfleet Academy and graduated BEFORE being admitted to the Command training program.
iii, She does come across strong, but UNLIKE Wesley, she will back off and apologize - and then tone it down.
Iv. YES, she's a bit socially awkward and needs to work on her interpersonal skills a bit, but NO she doesn't come across as Autistic or "On the spectrum"
v. OMG! She's good at science and highly intelligent (Something Starfleet would WANT I imagine), and that's why she was posted to Discovery
Bottom line, she AIN'T as annoying (or as whiny) as Wesley was up until say TNG in the later part of S3, and again, UNLIKE Wesley, she earned her place on the ship (IE went through Starfleet Academy) - and wasn't just a 'tag along with mom'; so no, she ain't Wesley.
I also liked that this episode moved the overarching plot along while still telling another fully contained story within it that had its own satisfying resolution.
I also liked the unexpected reveal that Pike DOES know where Spock is, etc. and in deference to Spock's wishes KEPT that knowledge secret (until he believed the Mission over-rode that confidentiality) in a way that didn't raise suspicion. Overall I LIKED these writers didn't openly telegraph it in these two episodes because in Berman /Braga era 24th century TNG Trek, we'd probably have had a cutaway to a 'locked away Spock' in the first episode. (Can't leave the audience out of a major story point.)
Disliked:
Nothing really stands out to me in the 'dislike' category on this one.
Overall, they did a nice job with the Trek elements and kept those elements nicely in the 23rd century (and didn't pull in any 24th century like character attitudes).