Unrelated: I would love to read the original pilot version draft of this script. Is it anywhere online?
I've never seen this online. But I have read it at UCLA. It's certainly...interesting.
I would assume so only because we see Spock doing the FSNP ("Famous Spock Neck Pinch") AND Spock using Vulcan mind powers to influence the Kohm girl to activate the Communicator (Both abilities weren't even hinted at until far into the first season and Nimoy himself came up with the Neck Pinch during the filming of TOS S1 - "The Enemy Within" as he didn't really want to do a fight scene.)Is it very much different from what was eventually filmed? Apparently it wasn't improved enough for Bob Justman to ever consider it "good."
And it's been said (by an unreliable biographer) that the fate of the Exeter crew sprang from Shatner's unused script "Web of Death."
Heheheheh.This I can easily dismiss as false. The crew’s fate was established in the 1965 draft. And besides, it’s not even clear that “Web of Death” was actually penned by Shatner; there’s not a lot of evidence to back that up.
As for the rest of the ‘65 version... @Maurice and I might have more to say about that soon(ish).
Too many pages to see if this has been addressed already, but one line that always makes me scratch the old noggin is: "once they got over the shock of my white skin..."
The Kohms aren't gobsmacked over transporters, phasers or weirdo uniforms. They're shocked at seeing a white guy.
This I can easily dismiss as false. The crew’s fate was established in the 1965 draft. And besides, it’s not even clear that “Web of Death” was actually penned by Shatner; there’s not a lot of evidence to back that up.
As for the rest of the ‘65 version... @Maurice and I might have more to say about that soon(ish).
Spock using Vulcan mind powers to influence the Kohm girl to activate the Communicator
The Kohm girl activates the Yangunicator.The who now?
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