Just finished on Netflix. My show notes (by the end of scene 1 I had so many things to say I went and got a notepad. seriously.)
Open on an eye cliché.
Like the Klingon look when in context and moving. The makeup is very good quality compared to the old days. I pretty much instantly forgot the fact they look different, if I'm honest.
Desert scene - neat bit of location shooting. I guess the point of this scene is to set up Burnham/Georgiou's friendship but the dialogue is a bit clunky. There are much better friendship scenes to come.
Love the aliens.
Prime directive, anyone? No? OK. That's actually cool, I always hated the 'let them die' aspect.
This whole sequence is very reminiscent of STID's opening.
Clunky as fuck expositon - the 'explain the mission to a person already engaged in the mission' cliché.
Love the ship shot. The Shenzhou is a nice ship.
The space shots are really nice in this show. Very JJVerse, and that's a good thing. Empty starfields are nowhere to be seen.
It's the bridge - TOS sounds!
Narration is quite 'explorer' themed which I like. I liked the line about 'where the next generation (drink!) will call home'.
Workplace banter - tick although a
little forced seeming. New to Trek though.
Casual racism about Kelpians from the Captain - don't like.
SM-G's portrayal of Burnham as a human with Vulcan affectations I
really like. She shares mannerisms and traits with Spock but isn't robotic, 7 of 9ish, or boring.
Telescope! Love it.
"What will we gain?" asks the
science officer, apparently.
I love this whole sequence - We're explorers, we are here to be nosy, let's take risks to know the unknown. This is wonderful stuff.
Love the spacesuit and TMP homage. Didn't love the out of place
Matrix-y reference to 20thCentury airlines.
Radiation exposure countdown cliché - ugh.
Radiation doesn't work that way. What does the ticking clock actually add here?
Burnham's excitement and thrill at exploring the unknown, perfect.
Klingon spacesuit looks awesome although I'd have loved to have seen more detail actually visible on screen. Hopefully it will reappear.
"I've got no signal" "tech the tech, Mr Saru" "There's
no signal Captain, FFS"

Love it.
I rather like the line "I see you as you see your end". That's a cool cultural addition.
Klingon has motivation other than honour - tick
Motivation is however rather poorly explained - boo.
Love the sickbay and the medical uniforms. "Leaving against medical advice because super important stuff to do" cliché.
I like the exchange on the bridge where the Captain trusts her judgement and orders red alert. That shows their relationship much better than the desert scene did.
"Retreat is not an option" - erm, why, exactly?
Phase cannons! Drink!
Why is Starfleet being all aggressive here - lock weapons - we want them to think we are going to fire -
why? Arguably, this action is as much to blame as Burnham's later target lock for starting this shit.
The ships aren't aligned perfectly, finally!
What would that dude have done if T'Kuvma hadn't taken his hand out of the flame, just been like "OK, ow, I'll stop now. Anyone got any butter?"
Skin colour? Really?
Oh yay, more chanting.
"Retreat is no longer possible" - Again,
Why? It seems an eminently sensible plan to me.
Saru tells Burnham details about his species. She's served with him (we learn later) for 7 years - how does she not know this?
Casual racism again, from Burnham this time. Admiral even calls her on it and she makes the "culture not race" excuse. Ugh.
"What does the solider in you say?" Ugh.
Some 'TOS acting' going on when the loud noise goes off. Georgiou is really hamming it up.
"Working" says the computer. Very TOS.
Sarek was what, stood right by the phone?
Sarek calls out her racism too, and she doesn't even notice. Please tell me we're not supposed to side with Burnham in this episode?
"You cannot save lives that are already lost" - line of the episode.
"Give them a Vulcan hello"
I like the way the conflict is played between Burnham and Georgiou, although the line "how dare you challenge me" is poor, the rest of it is good leadership on Georgiou's part. But we still (sort of) see Burnham's point of view. This is the sort of exchange TNG was lacking.
Vulcan nerve pinch! WTF?!
Sudden recovery from nerve pinch is sudden.
I like the way the Klingon arrival is portrayed, it's more ominous than the trailer.
Overall for this episode: a 6. It's not a
great pilot, it's a bit shorter than I imagined, but it is entertaining, it is much more different than I expected, while still having Trek hallmarks. I adore the explorer bits, I didn't adore the casual racism. I hope this qualifies as an 'average' episode and therefore I'm giving it a score which implies a 'good end of average'.
To be continued in the other thread.....