Janeway isn't close to Picard though. She had one tiny scene with him in Nemesis. … I agree that the script felt like it was written for Janeway.
Star Trek, from TNG on, has a pretty established record of strong women admirals. Even pre-dating Janeway. So I can't say I felt the scene was particularly Janeway-esque.
Why did the Commodore have to be a Vulcan? If we are having characters doing shady things that doesn't jive with Vulcan ideals, especially the IDIC on her desk. I don't think any series has done the Vulcans right outside of Spock and Tuvok.
Okay, I saw the IDIC pendant in the foreground but still thought the commodore was a Romulan. That does alter my opinion a bit and I agree it is a demerit. One of Enterprise's biggest sins, as I saw it, was the deconstructing of the Vulcans. In episode 2 of The Ready Room they do a package on the Romulan make-up and the designer says "It can go elvish real quick." My thought was always, "Exactly right!" In my imagination the Elves left middle-Earth and traveled to the planet Vulcan and colonized it. Spock (Leonard Nimoy) was every bit as cool as Legolas (Orlando Bloom) in my book.