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Things that don't add up:

It confuses the issue a bit that half a season passes between the escape and the witnessed debilitation. Is that "a little"? Or enough for the illness to work its course? We can't easily make assumptions about the progress of the ailment - but OTOH we have no reason to think it would not worsen monotonically. Spock never gets better, after all: he only descends deeper and deeper into his madness as far as we can tell. First he's rational enough to commit himself to custody; then rational enough to illegally fight his way out; then rational enough to hide in his parents' basement, muttering to himself; then barely rational enough not to eat his own feet. And then he gets cured.

Timo Saloniemi
 
Except that it's not "other tasks" it's the same tasks that he can do perfectly at one time and not at all a little later without anything significant happening between these two moments.

The writing is disjointed and non-sensical, Discovery is a show saved by the cast they put together.
 
I can reconcile it this way: All starfleet intelligence have black combadges, thus s31, which is technically sort of part of Starfleet intelligence, sometimes use the black combadges.
Except Michael, Tyler and Pike instantly recognize the black badge as Section 31 in season 2.
Those guys guarding the spore drive in season 1 were probably some security detatchment sent by Starfleet intelligence to keep the spore drive, and any information on it secure from spies, saboteurs, etc.
If that was their job, then they totally dropped the ball by when Michael wandered into the spore chamber and checked things out. Why weren't they guarding it then?
 
Lorca wanted Burnham to wander in there.

Telling the guards to look the other way would be suspicious, though. So it's better to just assume he had already given Burnham enough privileges to get her inside the guarded sections of the ship, and the guards still stood between the secret bits and any randomly visiting lunatic killers or unprivileged scientists.

S31 would only need to be there until the Spore Drive panned out and all those other 299 experiments on how to win the war could be discontinued or moved elsewhere, of course... Beyond that point, everybody would be authorized and in the know, there only being about 135 people left aboard and all.

Timo Saloniemi
 
Except Michael, Tyler and Pike instantly recognize the black badge as Section 31 in season 2.

If that was their job, then they totally dropped the ball by when Michael wandered into the spore chamber and checked things out. Why weren't they guarding it then?
They read the script?
 
Lorca wanted Burnham to wander in there.

Yeah, it didn't make any sense. The technology and spores are right there in an unguarded engineering bay, yet the spore "plants" are guarded for some reason, with rather laughable security.
 
The point is that he's sane enough to escape and cover his tracts but then he's so helpless that he can't even say where he wants to go. Whatever happened between these two events?

Lots of people who have mental illnesses go through good periods where they are rational and understand their condition and then relapse into a state where they don't, and there are different triggers for different people depending on the illness, the person, the environment they live in etc.
 
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Lorca wanted Burnham to wander in there.
Even if we consider that, if the Black Badges in season 1 were indeed there to guard the Spore Drive, why did they completely disappear after Context is for Kings? Since Disco was then using the Spore Drive as a tactical asset against the Klingons, there would be a greater necessity for specialized security officers to guard it instead of telling them to pack up and see ya in your story arc next year.
 
So, the black badges in season 1 were there as the personal security force for the head of Starfleet intelligence, who was there as VIP to tour the ship and check out the Spore drive. When Burnham first boarded Discovery, he/she was in that room on his inspection tour. That's why we saw the black badges only in that episode.
 
Even if we consider that, if the Black Badges in season 1 were indeed there to guard the Spore Drive, why did they completely disappear after Context is for Kings? Since Disco was then using the Spore Drive as a tactical asset against the Klingons, there would be a greater necessity for specialized security officers to guard it instead of telling them to pack up and see ya in your story arc next year.

That's just it - why are the guards there originally? Because Starfleet does not trust its own in wartime, and probably rightly so, as Lorca's crew is one of intellectual screwballs, weirdos who study mushrooms or worse. The ship is running experiments to win the war, and the Spore Drive one is not a leading candidate when Lorca kidnaps Burnham. The folks two decks over studying the viability of Purple Matter or Cosmic String Knots might be making better progress, but they mustn't know about each other - for the same reason Stamets and Straal were split, but also for the better reason that if Purple Matter bombs are to be deployed, these mushroom charlatans cannot be allowed to spread the tale.

But then Spore Drive pans out, and suddenly the ship has no need for personnel who would not know what these black alerts are all about. Indeed, the giant vessel only sports a hundred-plus folks from then on. There is no need for internal security from that point on: S31 is not needed for fighting back Klingon boarding parties, as every starship by default has a perfectly regular security force for that very purpose.

That this overall would be a S31 project, no doubt recommended by Control at that, is hardly in doubt in retrospect (and no, don't confuse this with "writer intent" or other such irrelevancies!). Heck, Lorca no doubt sits where he does because he sleeps with the S31 heir apparent: Spore Drive (among others being studied aboard the Crossfields) is likely to have been rather directly overseen by Cornwell, which is how this Mirror Man was able to land on his feet and start plotting a course back home. But S31 would not have a hands-on approach to the project as such, and Lorca would want those hands off, and would get what he wants because, well, Cornwell. Hence all these easygoing science weirdos being so surprised when S31 does get its hands firmly on stuff relating to their line of work again...

As for VIP guards, the one VIP I could see lounging behind that door is Cornwell. Given her overall omnipresence and duplicity, she's the one superior officer who would not get too curious about Lorca's elaborate plot to kidnap Burnham, and might actually be deeply involved in it. But given her behavior in her introductory episode, she'd have to be even more duplicitous than otherwise seems (i.e. a better actor even vis-á-vis the man who abuses the relationship with her)... I gather Lorca just pulled the wool over her eyes thick enough to keep her off the ship until "Choose Your Pain".

Timo Saloniemi
 
When the four Admirals get killed by Control, Cornwell is quoted as next in line to command that organization. And since she's dead, Leland. And since he's dead, Tyler.

So yes. Cornwell is one of the extremely few anointed, the next in line being lowly Commanders. Not counting all those other S31 bosses no doubt also killed by Control (it must have killed three dozen ship commanders of Leland's approximate rank to gain control of those vessels, and is likely to have scored more than four kills aboard the prison satellite, too). But none of that changes the fact that Cornwell was supposed to inherit S31.

Which goes well with everything we know about her, and better still with everything we don't know. She's always there when shady things are afoot, often by unknown means. She is also the one to promote DS9 S31 style activities such as genocidal tactics for winning wars...

Timo Saloniemi
 
...And to be fair, she was only discussing planeticide, not genocide - Klingons don't all live on the Homeworld.

Calling the nuking of a city "genocide" is both semantically and technically incorrect. Offing a planet in Trek is analogous to nuking out a city, not to offing a planet, and no doubt even the most benign of cultures consider it a more or less standard maneuver in any war. Klingons did this a lot in Burnham's War, erasing the populations of worlds.

It's just that striking at a homeworld with full lethal force is an obvious no-no, as evidenced by the fact that it never happens. Why this would be is not explicated - is it the implicit orders-of-magintude greater body count compared to even the biggest known colonies, or some sort of innate sanctity of homeworlds? But not even Klingons or Feds, the two most arrogant slaughterers of the quadrant, appear to go for it. You need a bona fide madman for some reason.

Timo Saloniemi
 
...And to be fair, she was only discussing planeticide, not genocide - Klingons don't all live on the Homeworld.

Calling the nuking of a city "genocide" is both semantically and technically incorrect. Offing a planet in Trek is analogous to nuking out a city, not to offing a planet, and no doubt even the most benign of cultures consider it a more or less standard maneuver in any war. Klingons did this a lot in Burnham's War, erasing the populations of worlds.

It's just that striking at a homeworld with full lethal force is an obvious no-no, as evidenced by the fact that it never happens. Why this would be is not explicated - is it the implicit orders-of-magintude greater body count compared to even the biggest known colonies, or some sort of innate sanctity of homeworlds? But not even Klingons or Feds, the two most arrogant slaughterers of the quadrant, appear to go for it. You need a bona fide madman for some reason.

Timo Saloniemi

Yeah, no. That's nonsense. If my country had a large minority of French people, and I commit acts to kill them all, I do not have to then go to France and kill every French person there, too, in order to have committed genocide. From here:

The crime of "genocide" defined in international law (http://preventgenocide.org/genocide/officialtext.htm)

The international legal definition of the crime of genocide is found in Articles II and III of the 1948 Convention on the Prevention and Punishment of Genocide.

Article II describes two elements of the crime of genocide:

1) the mental element, meaning the "intent to destroy, in whole or in part, a national, ethnical, racial or religious group, as such", and

2) the physical element which includes five acts described in sections a, b, c, d and e. A crime must include both elements to be called "genocide."

Article III described five punishable forms of the crime of genocide: genocide; conspiracy, incitement, attempt and complicity.

And further:

The phrase "in whole or in part" is important. Perpetrators need not intend to destroy the entire group. Destruction of only part of a group (such as its educated members, or members living in one region) is also genocide. Most authorities require intent to destroy a substantial number of group members – mass murder. But an individual criminal may be guilty of genocide even if he kills only one person, so long as he knew he was participating in a larger plan to destroy the group.

Also interesting, according to the modern day definition and law, Starfleet command, Cornwell, Sarek, and Georgiou could already be put to trial since they conspired and attempted to commit genocide, which is already criminal. And they'd have gone through with it, too, if Burnham, Tilly, and Tyler hadn't remembered that the Nuremberg defense isn't in the spirit of Starfleet or the Federation.
 
And that is a bunch of nonsense. Nobody has ever gone to jail for conspiring and attempting and successfully completing citicide. Hitting a city does not seriously endanger a species or a group, not even at this day and age of urbanization.

A dead letter is a dead letter. Killing one guy does not mean an attempt to remove malekind from the surface of Earth; upping the numbers, killing a billion people of a specific skin color is not genocide any more than killing a billion people regardless of skin color.

Only "mass murder" is apt here. And people titled Admiral get medals for that.

Timo Saloniemi
 
And that is a bunch of nonsense. Nobody has ever gone to jail for conspiring and attempting and successfully completing citicide. Hitting a city does not seriously endanger a species or a group, not even at this day and age of urbanization.

A dead letter is a dead letter. Killing one guy does not mean an attempt to remove malekind from the surface of Earth; upping the numbers, killing a billion people of a specific skin color is not genocide any more than killing a billion people regardless of skin color.

Only "mass murder" is apt here. And people titled Admiral get medals for that.

Timo Saloniemi

Well, cute that you disagree with an actual used definition of what constitutes genocide in favor of your minimization.

And also, no, in a civilized society like the Federation is supposed to be, an Admiral would not get a medal for destroying "a city", or to remove your minimizing attempt at rebranding what the Federation was about to do, destroying thousands of cities filled with in all likelihood billions of civilians. Because:

A war crime is an act that constitutes a serious violation of the laws of war that gives rise to individual criminal responsibility.[1] Examples of war crimes include intentionally killing civilians or prisoners, torturing, destroying civilian property, taking hostages, performing a perfidy, raping, using child soldiers, pillaging, declaring that no quarter will be given, and seriously violating the principles of distinction and proportionality, and military necessity.

War crimes are defined in the statute that established the International Criminal Court, which includes:

  1. Grave breaches of the Geneva Conventions, such as:
    1. Willful killing, or causing great suffering or serious injury to body or health
    2. Torture or inhumane treatment
    3. Unlawful wanton destruction or appropriation of property
    4. Forcing a prisoner of war to serve in the forces of a hostile power
    5. Depriving a prisoner of war of a fair trial
    6. Unlawful deportation, confinement or transfer
    7. Taking hostages
    8. Directing attacks against civilians
    9. Directing attacks against humanitarian workers or UN peacekeepers
    10. Killing a surrendered combatant
    11. Misusing a flag of truce
    12. Settlement of occupied territory
    13. Deportation of inhabitants of occupied territory
    14. Using poison weapons
    15. Using civilians as shields
    16. Using child soldiers
    17. Firing upon a Combat Medic with clear insignia.
  2. The following acts as part of a non-international conflict:
    1. Murder, cruel or degrading treatment and torture
    2. Directing attacks against civilians, humanitarian workers or UN peacekeepers
  3. The following acts as part of an international conflict:

    According to the HRW report, "The use of indiscriminate rockets in populated areas violates international humanitarian law, or the laws of war, and may amount to war crimes."
So, no to the medal. But hey, they probably could get a bitchin' nickname like the "Butcher of Q'onoS" .
 
Well, cute that you disagree with an actual used definition of what constitutes genocide in favor of your minimization.

Well, the point there is that the entire real world out there does. The "actual" definition is never "used".

That is,

1) it is never used in the real world on folks on your own side, as those cannot err (hence Sarek and Cornwell would never get prosecuted). Only tin-plate dictators of pushover nations may be thus prosecuted, and that's not the case here.

2) it is never used in the world of Star Trek, where planeticide is an explicitly accepted and supported practice from the very get-go. Why, Kirk would be court-martialed if he didn't do it! (Heck, he even has authority at his starship captain level to decide whether or not.)

And also, no, in a civilized society like the Federation is supposed to be, an Admiral would not get a medal for destroying "a city", or to remove your minimizing attempt at rebranding what the Federation was about to do, destroying thousands of cities filled with in all likelihood billions of civilians.

Yet it's a Starfleet General Order to do exactly that. Pondering whether or not to proceed is not conspiracy to commit crime - it's a strategic decision, is all.


But Starfleet doesn't believe in war crimes. Only backward aliens do.

Timo Saloniemi
 
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