Dennis wrote:
"This business of The Leader being a paragon of judgment and probity that everyone looks respectfully up to at all times - Picard, in other words - is dull as dishwater."
HIjol
sorry, quote function screwed up here....
I think what you suggest as change has potential for some higher level writing and performing, Dennis, but what of the (first time I am going to use this word) "trope" of what Harvey Keitel (Chief Klough) said to Matthew McConaughey (Lt. Andrew Tyler) in U-571:
"You're the skipper now. And the skipper always knows what to do - whether he does or not!"
"This business of The Leader being a paragon of judgment and probity that everyone looks respectfully up to at all times - Picard, in other words - is dull as dishwater."
HIjol
sorry, quote function screwed up here....
I think what you suggest as change has potential for some higher level writing and performing, Dennis, but what of the (first time I am going to use this word) "trope" of what Harvey Keitel (Chief Klough) said to Matthew McConaughey (Lt. Andrew Tyler) in U-571:
"You're the skipper now. And the skipper always knows what to do - whether he does or not!"