Rewatching the episode with my wife last night I found it actually dragged a little compared to my first viewing. I felt whenever characters started speechifying, it didn’t really land and just seemed like empty phrases. And I can’t figure out why they wrote the debate portions the way they did. I’ve been watching a lot of formal debates over the years, mostly between atheists and Christians, and they almost never just throw Bible verses at each other, like the cadets did here with case law, paragraphs and law texts. In my mind debates are much more interesting when people are making arguments for why a proposition is moral or more convincing. It’s not about who can memorize the most paragraphs. This had the effect of not really showing Caleb as the skilled debater he was supposed to be. And I also couldn’t really figure out how the Doctor decided who won each round. Just on a whim?
One small thing that I found interesting from a world building perspective that I haven’t seen anyone touch on yet is the cadet Caleb calls a conspiracy theorist. He says: “Everyone knows they lost Qo’noS because they blew it up themselves.” To which Caleb responds: “No one needs your embarrassing conspiracy theories. That Klingon incursion into Hectaron? The
[makes air quotes] “enslavement”? Total fiction. Read a book, moron.” I have no idea what any of that means and the episode doesn’t really go into more detail, but I find it fascinating how even in the 32nd century there would still be stuff like that. Makes the universe feel that little more believable.
I think exploring the backstory of the relationship between Ake and Obel would be interesting. Sounds like they have quite the history going back a century. Maybe something for a future comic or a novel?
And on a more superficial level I found some of the design choices a little odd. Why was the Starfleet Academy recruitment thingy so damn bulky? Shouldn’t something like this have looked more appealing and less like an ancient hand grenade?

And the other thing are Jay-Den’s boots, which now that I noticed how almost comically large they are, and how the sole is split in two pieces halfway through, I just can’t unsee.