I don't get the impression that the writing this season has been compromised to win over the fans (especially as a lot of those fans were complaining about Burnham being too emotional). Despite the fact that there's a team of writers, to me the season really feels like the work of one author with a strong vision of what it should be and what themes it should cover. I think they're telling the story they want to tell at the pace they want to tell it.I sometimes wonder if the producers and writers have listened too much to the fans and a result DSC has lost something of the energy, edge and spark it had in the first two seasons (which weren’t perfect but were, in my view, much more engaging. If, as a writer, you end up second-guessing yourself all the time, you lose fidelity to your vision and end up creating something timid, and overly self conscious.
My point with @fireproof78 was that good writing makes a difference--period. And comparing one show with awesome writing to another one with lesser writing makes that point. How they obtained that writing is irrelevant to that point. Just the quality comparison. Fireproof was saying there is no incentive for better writing.
However, I disagree that you need to start with a novel to create high-quality serialized TV show. Good writers can do that themselves without a novel. Sure, they'll need to do more planning, create an outline, etc., but it is doable.
Consider that a novelist doesn't start with an existing product to adapt. Yet, novels exist! Consequently, we know that good writers can create those longer storylines from scratch themselves without outside crutches. Soooo, you just need the good writers.
Something we can agree with is they shouldn't have written out Tilly.Ever since Tilly left, the fun I had watching this show left for me as well I guess. Adira is a boring character.
if you write the whole thing *before* you start filming you can eliminate much of this issue.Novelists have the advantage of (usually) having no time constraints, so they can polish up rough drafts, go back and add foreshadowing once they know the end, that sort of thing. TV writing in contrast is on an extreme time constraint.
I wouldn't have minded if she left the show as the Starfleet Academy show was actually starting, but it seems to me it wouldn't have been too hard to throw in a couple of scenes with her on Disco in between filming the other show (if it is filming already). I miss my Tilly fix of optimism and sassy fun.Something we can agree with is they shouldn't have written out Tilly.
Well put.I really liked this episode, and I'm really liking this season as a whole. I'm not bothered by the slow pace or the emphasis on emotions. In fact, it kind of baffles me that Trek-fans would see both elements as negatives instead of positives. This season is taking a long time debating questions regarding communication, and I think it's not really about the grand story arch regarding the 10-C and the DMA: I think the moments in between are far more important. We've had so many great character arcs throughout, and I really think DSC is doing things no other ST series has ever done before: in that regard, I think DSC is the most unique, distinctive of all ST series. For some, it's for the worse, for me, it's for the better!
If this is true, and I hope you are right, then this season will get a 10 out of 10 from me.I don't get the impression that the writing this season has been compromised to win over the fans (especially as a lot of those fans were complaining about Burnham being too emotional). Despite the fact that there's a team of writers, to me the season really feels like the work of one author with a strong vision of what it should be and what themes it should cover. I think they're telling the story they want to tell at the pace they want to tell it.
Tilly was like having one of us on board. She was the fan's fan, getting to do things, not always the right things, but she was someone you had a connection with, just not someone you necessarily wanted to share a room with due to the snoring. They need to get her back asap.I wouldn't have minded if she left the show as the Starfleet Academy show was actually starting, but it seems to me it wouldn't have been too hard to throw in a couple of scenes with her on Disco in between filming the other show (if it is filming already). I miss my Tilly fix of optimism and sassy fun.
This is where I am at. I have a strong sense that the pacing is deliberately slowed, but for what reason I don't know. As I have mentioned, it feels very strongly like Netflix's Daredevil, where there is the call to action, and then more pause and self-reflection, before moving in to the big finale.I'll have a better sense once I know what the next episode is, and after I get a chance to watch all 13 episodes straight through on a binge.
Jammer, in his review, pointed out that Episodes 10 and 11 of the season could've been combined. Though I said I don't mind the slow pace, it's been slower than normal...
... which leads me to wonder about this: 13 episodes might've been ordered for the season, but then they probably realized they only had 12 episodes' worth of material, so they probably decided to stretch out these two episodes. What if that's what happened?
I'll have a better sense once I know what the next episode is, and after I get a chance to watch all 13 episodes straight through on a binge.
It could be the reverse of Season 2, where they had a 13-episode order, but 14 episodes' worth of material, leading to "Such Sweet Sorrow" being split.
I'd completely forgotten about the symbiont.Adira may be the most boring Trill character in Trek history. They just don't do anything with them.
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