As I have mentioned upthread (May 7), Ship of the Line is my least favourite for several reason which I didn't go into before.
First is Carey's naval slang for Bateson et al that seems totally out of place. I honestly couldn't read any further than that, it's the only book of the hundred which I have that I could not finish.
A couple of bits I picked up on by flicking through the book also make me heave, namely that Picard feels the need to go to a Kirk recreation on the holodeck to decide whether he wants to take command again?? Both captains had a good chat during Generations and Kirk told Picard what it was really like to command the Enterprise. Namely, don't let them take you away from that chair, it's where you belong. I know Carey has this delusional god-worship for Kirk and should really be sectioned for it, but it doesn't belong in a Trek book and I'm amazed that said book got through the final approvals before going to print.