Getting mixed signals here.
I assume you mean this scene?:
Pod Computer: Auto navigation confirmed.
Owo: I don't like those thermals.
Detmer: The rock's under so much pressure that when the gravity field fluctuates, the debris .
Owo: You mean explodes?
Saru: Really? Are you surprised?
Burnham: I'm not detecting any pattern to these energy field detonations.
Nhan: Magnetics are messing with my nav computer.
Pike: I'm peaking, too. Switch to manual navigation.
Nhan: I'm losing control.
Burnham: These pods are built for this, Nhan. Just take the stick manually.
Nhan: You mean manually manually?
Burnham: Connolly, your field is too wide. Watch the boulders in lateral grid six.
Pike: Burnham's right, tuck in behind her.
Connally: No she's not, sir. Ooh!
Burnham: Connolly, I'm telling you your field is too wide!
Pike: Pull back, Lieutenant. That's an order!
Connally: Sir, she didn't alter the computer's flight patterns to adjust for the gravitational fluctuations. I've got this.
Burnham: You can't rely on sensors!
Connally: Don't question my calculations. My roommate at the academy
was part Caitian. And she was a year ahead of me, Burnham, but I told her what I'll tell you, just relax and let me do...
BOOM!!!!
Burnham: No!
Pike: Connolly?!
Owo: Pod three is down. Pod two has sustained structural damage.
Detmer: Navigation is off-line.
Pod Computer: Structural integrity compromised. System failure is imminent.
Pike: Initiating ejection sequence.
Pod Computer: Warning: Exo-suit initiation failure. Auto eject override.
Pike: Discovery,
I have system-wide failure. Negative on evac. I am in total free fall.
Saru: Captain Pike, we are running a remote diagnostic on your pod now.
Pike: It's dead. That's the diagnosis.
Saru: Can you eject?
Pike: No. My thruster pack's damaged. The damn helmet's stuck.
Burnham: Discovery,can you activate the captain's ejector seat remotely?
Detmer: Lot of surface distortion. I need another 30 seconds.
Owo: Without EV boosters, he'll still be in free fall.
Burnham: Not if I can catch him.
Pike: Forget it, Burnham. I already lost one officer today.
Burnham: I'm comfortable with the risk, sir.
Pike: And I'm not. If you screw this up, we're both dead. Stay on mission. That's an order.
Detmer: 2,000 feet till impact.
Burnham: You need to trust us, sir. I told you we don't abandon each other. Discovery has you. We have him, right, ladies?
Detmer & Owo: Oh, yeah. Absolutely.
Pike: Do it.
Burnham: Calculating the burn rate to stop terminal velocity. Once I eject, take control of my thruster and plot a trajectory to the captain.
Detmer: Working on it.
Owo: 20 seconds to impact!
Burnham: Nhan, stay on course o the asteroid's surface. You'll be fine. I'm going after the captain.
Nhan: Copy that. Go get 'em, Burnham.
Owo: I have a lock.
Detmer: Plotting your trajectory, Burnham. If this works, you have less than ten seconds to catch him, and then I'll hit your thrusters.
Burnham: Copy. Get ready to eject the captain on my mark. On three. One. Two. Three.
Six seconds to impact.
Five. Four.
Three.
Two. One.
Initiating maximum thrust!
Saru: Burnham?
Saru: Burnham, do you copy?
Burnham: Discovery, this is Burnham.
We have touchdown.
Some chatter, patter and jargon, but not a lot of quips or jokes-before, during or after Connally's horrific death. Everything is serious and professional. So "thumbs up?" Rather typical of DISCO action scenes. Played like most fighter jet pilot scenes from war movies.