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Unseen TOS....

Maybe two whip antenna curved back to form a half loop to suggest a coming saucer?
We have never seen any Trek ships with such antennas on them—certainly not in TOS including the Botany Bay which Jefferies designed as a late 20th century vessel.

The important thing is you have the “V” for victory look with nacelles up versus the lower Romulan wings.
The nacelles are oriented as they are for a few reasons:
- the upper nacelles evoke the idea that eventually (most) ships will require only two nacelles set in a somewhat raised configuration. The lower nacelle evokes the eventual familiar secondary hull.
- having the nacelles oriented in a Y pattern strengthens the notion of the vessel in flight while the lower nacelle cements the idea this vehicle is never meant to land. Having the nacelles in an upside down Y pattern looks more aircraft like and lessens the idea of a space ship in flight—it also doesn’t look as cool.

The design you have here suggests a modest vessel…that’s fine.
It’s meant to be a deep space exploratory ship.

Save your big sphere-ship as the scene of the signing treaty, maybe the lower nacelle replaced with a big com-dish.
I would use a sphere only if it works design wise. There is nothing to say any pre TOS ships absolutely have to have a spherical hull. It was, after all, an idea Matt Jefferies abandoned. And to be fair very few designs with a spherical hull have actually looked good. The later retconned Deadalus-class, closely mimicking one of Jefferies’ early sketches, has never looked good—it looks awkward and ungainly and has no visual grace whatsoever. There have been occasional fan versions that have looked much better, but a sphere tends to visually undermine a design’s sense of forward motion.

My philosophy for a fictional ship design is that no matter what I’m doing it should have its own integrity and possess a measure of coolness and something of a heroic sense to it, even for enemy ships, ancient ships or lowly shuttlecraft. In hand with this philosophy, in this project, is visualizing something that would look like it belonged if we had seen it in TOS. And, as I have stated once or twice upthread, the post TOS universe does not exist for this project. The goal is to design things as if it were still the mid to late 1960s.
 
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Yep, I think this is coming along nicely. Without windows it's hard to judge scale, but windows, running lights and hull markings are next. I'm thinking this vessel is maybe 9-10 decks thick in the forward section which is the thickest part of the ship. Mind you I still envision a submarine or naval like feel to the interior of this ship—nothing like the spacious interiors of the Enterprise.

 
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I could see a variant with something like a ovoid shape, but I wouldn't loose the existing idea. Could be a team-up, an escort and a larger version with more range?
 
I could see a variant with something like a ovoid shape, but I wouldn't loose the existing idea. Could be a team-up, an escort and a larger version with more range?
I think my design underlines that a sphere with a thin dorsal neck looks…unbalanced and stupid. A moderate sphere, or ovoid, with a suitably thicker neck could work better. As such I could see a variant of my design with an ovoid front section replacing the current (moderately tapered) cylindrical hull.

I might have gotten carried away with how far I worked out my current design, although I enjoyed doing it. The exercise was to explore the next evolutionary step after the ringship. The next step, the ships that did most of the fighting for Earth during the war, would be ships with a dual, and likely cylindrical, nacelle configuration. I envision most of the ships during the war being basically cylindrical in nature, but perhaps toward the end of the conflict saucers, and maybe spheres, begin showing up.
 
I'm looking at this and I find myself thinking about how it would look with a sphere (more a rather fat ovoid) as the front section. I'm thinking it just might work particularly if you get the size just right so it isn't too large or too small.

I'd say stay with this as the ships Earth had at the breakout of the war.
 
I wanted to find a way to show an intermediate progression from an annular configuration to the eventual dual nacelle arrangement. To that end I opted to forego using more familiar cylindrical nacelles to suggest parts of an annular system rather than a complete set of rings to emit a space warp field.

This is all based on using Jefferies’ discarded ringship idea as Earth’s first major starship design, resulting in the Valiant. Of course, the Enterprise represents the latest evolutionary design (as of 1966). The tri-nacelle configuration is one of the steps along the evolutionary path. It’s quite possible there could even be a quad nacelle configuration preceding my Endurance design. It should be noted that a tri-nacelle arrangement doesn’t automatically negate e quad-nacelle one. They could co-exist with quad nacelles being generally smaller in size compared to tri or dual nacelles.

I spent more time on this then I had planned, but I felt compelled to flesh it out. And behind all this is the idea that although we likely never would see these things on TOS I hope to envision something that looks like it could have appeared convincingly on the show.
 
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I think this worked out. It looks to follow Matt Jefferies' TOS aesthetic and design sense in using largely elemental shapes tweaked to look as more than they really are. And despite the apparently straightforward design overall I've made an effort to add nuances to the shapes. This is largely a concept build because I was trying to set the stage for the next design, and to that end this design doesn’t have quite the same level of detail I could otherwise have added. Even the next design will not be detailed to the max as it only needs to appear briefly as an illustration on one of Spock’s bridge viewscreens.

 
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I think this worked out. It looks to follow Matt Jefferies' TOS aesthetic and design sense in using largely elemental shapes tweaked to look as more than they really are. And despite the apparently straightforward design overall I've made an effort to add nuances to the shapes. This is largely a concept build because I was trying to set the stage for the next design, and to that end this design doesn’t have quite the same level of detail I could otherwise have added. Even the next design will not be detailed to the max as it only needs to appear briefly as an illustration on one of Spock’s bridge viewscreens.

What is the total length in meters?
 
What is the total length in meters?
I haven’t measured it exactly yet, but the forward section is about the same thickness as the Enterprise’s primary saucer, about ten decks thick.

I do obsess with my designs by plotting out a rough deck layout with 8-8.5 ft. ceilings and floors 1 ft. or so thick, all so I can line up my windows convincingly.
 
I like how you can see how the design can be traced from your Valiant ring ship, with the three curved nacelles, and the ovoid nose giving you extra habitable space compared to the needle nosed Valiant. :)

Amazing work as always!
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My own backstory for the Valiant is that originally it was to be a fast relativistic sublight ship, but the advent of the FTL space warp allowed them to reconfigure the ship for FTL travel. But given early space warp travel was still (relatively) slow certain missions might still require crews in suspended animation.
 
So, what's next on the unseen list? :)
Next is the ship(s) Earth designed specifically as a combat vessel. And I’m leaning toward it having two nacelles.

When thats done I can move beyond “Balance Of Terror” to the next episode with unseen elements it might have been nice to see.


Okay, this is off the top of my head. More ideas might come to me later or someone else might think of something I've missed.

“The Galileo Seven” – We finally see the ship's hangar deck, but where does the truntable/elevator go? Okay, I have pretty much addressed this (see way upthread) although there are a few things I could add. Notably I have not yet fleshed out the fantail area underneath the flight deck and aft of the maintenance bay. I envisioned that as an area where TOS era workpods (workbees?) could be housed wherein they enter and exit through the rectangular section seen on the exterior hull under the fantail.






“Court Martial” – Should the Enterprise be docked while it's undergoing repair at Starbase 10? What might that look like?

“Arena” – The mysterious Gorn ship.

“The Return Of The Archons” – The century old lost starship Archon. Like the Columbia in “The Cage” and the Valiant in WNMHGB it isn’t really necessary to the story to know what the Archon looks like, but we’re curious. Mind you, having established what an early to mid 22nd century starship could look like something like it could serve as the Archon.



“A Taste Of Armageddon” – The second lost starship Valiant (not the same one mentioned in WNMHGB). I have already done this, but I could revisit the design.




“Errand Of Mercy” – A lesser class Klingon ship attacking the Enterprise. The Klingon D7 hasn’t been envisioned yet so what might this look like?

“Metamorphosis” – Zefram Cochrane’s space warp prototype.

"The Doomsday Machine" - Is the Constellation really supposed to be identical to the Enterprise or could that odd registry number mean we should be seeing a variation?

“Friday’s Child” – Our first time seeing a Klingon D7 battle cruiser or could this be a different design? I suspect the D7 hadn’t been finalized yet so a different design might be the way to go.

“The Trouble With Tribbles” – Cyrano Jones’ scout ship. Harry Mudd’s ship from “Mudd’s Women” could easily be reused here.

“Bread And Circuses” – The wrecked survey ship Beagle. This perhaps could be a reuse of the design used for the Antares.

“Journey To Babel” – The mysterious Orion marauder.

“A Piece Of The Action” – The old starship Horizon.

“By Any Other Name” – The Kelvan ship.

“The Ultimate Computer” – More than any other episode this makes us wonder what other Federation starship designs could be in service. Also the Woden shouldn't be a reused Botany Bay. And does the station have to be a reuse of station K7 from “The Trouble With Tribbles?”



“Spock’s Brain” – A closer look at Kara’s ship.

“The Tholian Web” – A closer look at the Tholian webspinner. And could the Defiant have been a different class of starship?

“Let That Be Your Last Battlefield” – Does Bele's ship have to be invisible? And could Lokai have stolen a different kind of Starfleet shuttlecraft?



“The Way To Eden” – Revisiting the space cruiser Aurora because a reused Tholian ship is silly.
 
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Your designs have a sharpness...I could see them on the main viewscreen. If there is ever a re-remaster, I could see ghost images of your ships in a firefight playing over Stiles' face during his history lesson lines.
 
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