I have not read all 27 pages, so I am not sure if someone has mentioned it.
One important point this episode made, was that this is NOT an alternative timeline. In other words, General Picard, is fundamentally the same as Admiral Picard, he just had a different childhood and was raised differently, with the same upbringing "our" Picard would have grown into the same adult. So, basically they are retreading the Nemesis story line, except with Nemesis I never really bought into it, since Shinzon, or better Tom Hardy's portrayal of him, was to different from Patrick Stewarts portrayal of Jean Luc. This is better. Nevertheless, we now have two iterations of Picard who where brutal murderers. I wonder if "our" Picard is aware of the demons that are inside him. They seemed to imply that his father was abusive. Perhaps it runs in the family. Furthermore, we can now reflect on other situations. Perhaps Picard is aware of his problematic DNA, and that may have influenced his choice to not have children. During his speech at the academy he seemed almost relieved that his lineage is ending. I wonder if the Picard in First Contact in the holodeck, was General Picard coming out.
One important point this episode made, was that this is NOT an alternative timeline. In other words, General Picard, is fundamentally the same as Admiral Picard, he just had a different childhood and was raised differently, with the same upbringing "our" Picard would have grown into the same adult. So, basically they are retreading the Nemesis story line, except with Nemesis I never really bought into it, since Shinzon, or better Tom Hardy's portrayal of him, was to different from Patrick Stewarts portrayal of Jean Luc. This is better. Nevertheless, we now have two iterations of Picard who where brutal murderers. I wonder if "our" Picard is aware of the demons that are inside him. They seemed to imply that his father was abusive. Perhaps it runs in the family. Furthermore, we can now reflect on other situations. Perhaps Picard is aware of his problematic DNA, and that may have influenced his choice to not have children. During his speech at the academy he seemed almost relieved that his lineage is ending. I wonder if the Picard in First Contact in the holodeck, was General Picard coming out.