After a promising episode last week, we're largely back to Trek by numbers.
The "A plot" involving Michael and Saru on Ni'Var was way disappointing to me...other than seeing President T'Rina and Saru lowkey canoodle. I had two major issues with this plot. First, the Vulcans seemed to act out of character to me. Yes, I know that Vulcans always just use logic as a mask to cover up their emotions, but here it was presented so as starkly just "we don't trust them because feelings" without even a decent in-script rationalization to back it up. The worse aspect of this to me though was that the interesting parts of the internal conflict on Ni'Var - what the issue with the Federation really was - weren't actually explained. Instead we saw Michael somehow accepted as a neutral party (despite literally working for Starfleet) and (it appears) she mediates the conflict entirely off camera, with the last scene establishing Ni'Var has joined! Exploring what exactly the anti-Federation faction wanted - and how to solve it - was what I would consider "the good part" and it's absence was a huge downgrade for me. Maybe it will be shown in later episodes and I will reappraise this however. I also think the conflict itself comes across as a bit forced, given the Federation allowed member worlds to voluntarily leave in the past (though admittedly that was the old Federation) and the characterization of Michael as a "natural diplomat" cuts against everything we know of her up until this point.
Turning to the "B plot" with Tilly, Adira and the cadets, this is something we've seen many times before - both the shuttlecraft crash and dealing with a squabbling bunch of newbies - and unfortunately, it's been done way better elsewhere. Since it's not a new/interesting scenario, the key to these plots working is interesting character dynamics, which I felt was lacking. Seeing Tilly forced to be in a command situation with people way less experienced was interesting, though given the conclusion of the arc, I do wish they pushed her weariness/frustration with her Starfleet position a bit more. I did like they remembered Adira was joined here, and referenced it in the dialogue, though I felt they played them a bit too young given those centuries of experience they has under her belt with the symbiont. I would have enjoyed if there was even more conflict between Adira and Tilly over the course of this episode TBH, as it would have allowed for Adira to have a big fail, and then character growth ongoing across the season as a result, but after some squabbling, they mostly accepted being treated like a cadet (and didn't act too differently from the cadets, unfortunately). The biggest flaw though is the cadets themselves were largely boring non-entities. I'm not sure if the issue was the writing or the caliber of actor they got for the role, but they didn't do it for me at all. The human girl (Val Sasha) had no story purpose - she was more or less cute wallpaper, as her initial statement about not having much experience with aliens didn't go anywhere. The Orion boy (Harral) had a bit more substance, but we didn't really get to understand his character until the reveal at the end of the episode - he just acted as a punching bag for the Tellarite (Taahz Gorev) - who was the only one of the three who made any impression whatsoever. Interestingly, he's also
the actor with the largest resume on IMDB, which makes me wonder if part of it is he put in the best performance. I say if they are going ahead with the Starfleet Academy series please keep him on, but ditch or recast the other two.
Turning to what appears to be Tilly's exit from the show - think it's for the best. Tilly was a character created for a very particular role in the beginning of Season 1 (to show how bottom of the totem pole Michael was starting out again after being released from prison) and the successive writing teams have had continual issues trying to find some way to make her relevant to the series. They turned her from an assistant in the spore drive to someone who knew it better than anyone other than Stamets, had her impersonate her bloodthirsty MU alter, get sucked into the mycelial network, end up on the bridge, end up XO only to have it blow up in her face...the list goes on and on. All of this would have IMHO been fine in a series structured like an older Trek show, with 26 episodes per season and at best semi-serialization. But the limited air time available meant that limited screen time which could be used to further the seasonal arc or the plots of the weeks had to be inclusive of Tilly...no matter how weird it ended up. The show will probably be a bit more streamlined with her departure.
I will say I uncritically loved the scenes with Book and Culber - they were by far the best part of this episode. It's interesting they decided to make Culber canonically at least part Latino (like his actor) despite the Anglo-Scottish last name. But I loved these scenes were about pure character, had no exposition, and just stood on their own.