This one gets a
6/10 from me. Again, I probably would have rated it higher if NOT for the age old (and more TNG than TOS trope, although TOS had some instances) of the Alien Race being and doing UTTERLY STUPID things that spared 'our heroes' from failing miserably; being destroyed on the spot.
Liked:
- Aspects of the story setup
- That Saru tried to keep himself in check, but ultimately lost it on the Bridge.
- That Pike acted like a 23rd century Captain and recognized that the PD isn't absolute.
Disliked:
- The scene of Stamets just grinning like an idiot with what appeared to be ZERO empathy for what Culber was experiencing and describing WRT how he felt 'different'. Not to mention the insensitive way he related the story of Culber's now missing (because it's a 'pristine' body) scar that Culber KEPT because he felt it was a significant part of what molded him to be who he is. I can't believe Stamets is that clueless. IF this scene had happened immediately after Culber's 'resurrection'; I might cut Stamets reactions here a bit more slack, but it's been a good number of hours (or days) since; enough for the CMO to run every test a few times over; so yeah, sorry, but starstruck/clueless/grinning idiot Stamets is a disservice to the character by the writers here (IMO).
The COMPLETELY non-nonsensical actions of the Ba'ul. (Needed to make 'our heroes survive and the story work:
- If the Ba'ul can monitor the entire planet; they should NEVER have allowed the Discovery to beam down Saru/Burnham.
- Once Saru has surrendered himself to them; and they transport his sister to the same location the idea that "We're going to study you, THEN kill you" makes ZERO sense here. The Ba'ul KNOW EXACTLY what the Kelpians are. Hell, they're the ones who wiped out all mature Kelpians and took control. Saru and his sister were the only Kelpians 'contaminated by outside contact. Kill them both immediately and problem solved as far as the status quo and "Balance" is concerned. Yes, they might need to negotiate with Pike after that to avoid possible reprisals; but again, unless the Federation Council and Starfleet saw an advantage to the Federation and it's immediate interests, I doubt anything further would have happened beyond the Federation placing the world 'off limits' at worst.
Again, the Ba'ul knew everything. Saru wasn't "special". If they wanted to study a 'mature Kelpian, they could have picked one, beamed him to the facility; restrained him, and done all the research they needed. Saru wasn't special WRT the maturation.
- Also, come on. With ALL the tech they have the Ba'ul don't have the ability to make a device that can kill from range? (IE They have the 'flying drill' devices that coincidentally a mature Kelpian can hold and smash; and metal restraints that a mature Kelpian can easily break


. Further it seems in the entire 'Ba'ul Stronghold' they only have two of them.

<---- Hell, why didn't a swarm of those devices show up and take BOTH Saru and his sister out?
- Also, they don't have enough control over the technology in their Stronghold to block Saru's communication with Discovery so he/then CAN'T broadcast the evolution signal?
- Then once said signal was being broadcast (or said Broadcast set up) -- what happened to the 10 Ba'ul sentry ships that (until Saru surrendered himself) were prepping to blow Discovery up?
Again, the Ba'ul reaction across the board once they said "We'll study then kill you..." made ZERO sense; and it was all too pat that somehow the 'Red Angel' managed to do what Pike was going to attempt with his complement of photon torpedoes before Pike fired. And in fact that whole 'Red Angel' descending to the planet sequence was confusing in that it looked like Discovery had somehow fired a single photon torpedo that hit the exact 'right spot'.
Sorry but IMO a lot of this was a mess. The only reason I rate it as high as I did was for the production values and the acting from Anson Mount (who did a marvelous job as Pike with the scenes he was in) and Doug Jones (even though I don't care for the character of Saru much; or the contrived actions of the Ba'ul needed to allow 'our heroes' to survive and prevail.
This whole script needed another one or two polish rewrites to drop the nonsensical Ba'ul actions and reactions here.