Don't you think calling him Brannon Braga-esque is a bit much?
Not really. Braga was writing timey-wimey stories
long before Moffat wrote "Continuity Errors," though Moffat is a vastly more talented writer than Braga. But timey-wimey-ness isn't why I compared Moffat and Braga in my blog post.
Rather, I felt that "The Impossible Astronaut" aped a narrative structure that Braga pioneered on
Star Trek: Enterprise, where Braga eschewed the traditional five act structure common to television drama; rather than having rising tension and incident, ending each act (which coincides with the commerical break) on a dramatic note to hook the audience, Braga would structure his scripts so that there was no narrative momentum and no rising tension, and the story beats would be muted. And that's what bothered me about "The Impossible Astronaut"; there are events that happen, but they don't develop the narrative and push it forward, and the episode gives us no pay offs. When I describe "The Impossible Astronaut" as "incidentless," that's what I mean.
It's a two-parter for crying out loud. Can't really judge a two-parter based on the first part alone.
I disagree, because there are some things that the script could have and should have done that it didn't.
Over on Gallifrey Base, someone quotes Moffat as saying during
Confidential that "What the Silents represent is a far, far bigger deal." Really? I wish Moffat had gone to some effort in
this episode to make the Silents
any sort of deal. As it is, other than vaporizing Joy, they're just creepy aliens with a cool power.
Yes, it is a clever narrative conceit to have a "big bad" that the audience knows about but the characters don't, which is why I'm coming around to the idea that Moffat really needed to end the episode with the characters unambiguously recognizing and remembering the Silents rather than Amy shooting at a space-suited girl. (Which, by the way, I'm
not convinced is real -- a little girl wouldn't fit in that suit.)
As it is, the more I think about this episode, the more I feel like it was a wasted hour. I don't feel like the story has
started yet. And that makes me think about the classic piece of editorial advice -- if your story starts on page ten, you throw out pages one through nine. They may be cool scenes, they may have fantastic character moments, you may have had a blast writing them, but if they're not in service to your plot, they're unwanted, unnecessary, and useless. And at the end of "The Impossible Astronaut," I'm not sure what the hell the plot is. Who are the antagonists? What do they want? What are our protagonists doing to thwart them? You can't answer any of those three questions at the end of "The Impossible Astronaut" based solely on what we see in the episode. You can't even prove that the Silents are the antagonists. Even Brannon Braga, at his absolute
worst, didn't write a script as formless as this.