What do you think of this episode title?

[Supreme Admiral]

I've added more episodes title recently, not too long time ago.

Coming this weekend, it's going to be very, very emotional for me to write two additional episodes that will brings the tears down to my face. I don't understand why I have to do this to write a very sad episodes when it comes to being too sad or having tears in my eyes.

Sixth episode titled: "Tears of unchained revenge!"

Next episode will be much different from this sixth episode, it would be very lifeless from that episode..I was thinking what's the best episode title that should be called..

"Tears of lifeless Morning" or "Tears of kingless morning".

Be honest with me, guys. What do you think?

Also, I'm looking for a very sad songs for both episodes.

 

[RJDiogenes]

I prefer "Tears Of Kingless Morning." It sounds like 60s Art Rock.

I'm not too sure about "Tears Of Unchained Revenge," though. It sounds like a 30s adventure serial crossed with a Lifetime Channel movie.

 

[Australis]

Or maybe 'Tears of Vengeance Unchained'. No exclamation mark.

And 'Tears of Unreigned Morning'. Maybe.

 

[Supreme Admiral]

All right.

Coming this September, I'll be ready to working on very sad story that I don't want to do that, so I added new episodes titles recently. Today, I'm going to find sad songs that fits for those episodes.

Seventh episode: "Tears of heaven's morning"

Eighth episode: "The eternal hall of chess' bridge"

It's going to be very much like Naruto with those beautiful soundtracks, including the piano that will be part of the story. That will brings tears down to my eyes.

Where can I find a strong sad songs?

 

[Robert Maxwell]

No offense, SA, but your titles seem pretty awful. I can't promise I can do better, but PM me and I'll see if I can help you out.

 

[Laren]

Where can I find a strong sad songs?

What kind of songs do you have in mind? Will those be part of the story?

 

[Supreme Admiral]

Where can I find a strong sad songs?

What kind of songs do you have in mind? Will those be part of the story?

I don't want to said it aloud, because it pains me to knowing that I must kill some characters in that story. It involves death and too many tears will be shed.

So I would like to find perfect song to do it.

To answer your question: Yes, those will be part of the story.

 

[sidious618]

What is this for?

 

[Shazam!]

It's a good title for an over-the-top B-movie or parody episode.

 

[Laren]

Where can I find a strong sad songs?

What kind of songs do you have in mind? Will those be part of the story?

I don't want to said it aloud, because it pains me to knowing that I must kill some characters in that story. It involves death and too many tears will be shed.

So I would like to find perfect song to do it.

To answer your question: Yes, those will be part of the story.

Well, without knowing more context it will be pretty hard to recommend any songs. Also, didn't you mention that you are deaf? By what criteria will you choose? (I don't mean to be rude, I'm just wondering.)

 

[Supreme Admiral]

What is this for?

This is for my project that I was working on. Garden Keys is the title. Garden Keys will be following in footsteps of transformers and star trek all together.

It's a good title for an over-the-top B-movie or parody episode.

No. You're all wrong on that. Why would you think that this must be some kind of low-rate project? This is very expensive project that I'm working on. I'm trying to bringing it into the life in the future.

It's going to take me five or seven years to do it. Hoping that you understand this. I'm not kidding about this. I'm very, very dead serious about it. I'm big fan of transformers and star trek, so it's good deal for me.

 

[Supreme Admiral]

What kind of songs do you have in mind? Will those be part of the story?

I don't want to said it aloud, because it pains me to knowing that I must kill some characters in that story. It involves death and too many tears will be shed.

So I would like to find perfect song to do it.

To answer your question: Yes, those will be part of the story.

Well, without knowing more context it will be pretty hard to recommend any songs. Also, didn't you mention that you are deaf? By what criteria will you choose? (I don't mean to be rude, I'm just wondering.)

Well, I found "Tears in heaven", it'll be used for that seventh episode, but I needs something pretty heavy. I mean a powerful songs about death that will brings my tears down to my face.

I know that I'm deaf, but I'm very gifted for feeling those songs.

 

[JustKate]

Exclamation marks - and I am being absolutely sincere here - are usually a very bad idea in a title. They just look so cheesy and overdone - as though you're trying to force a certain reaction out of the readers.

Think of movie titles that include exclamation marks. There aren't that many. There's a reason for this.

 

[Supreme Admiral]

Exclamation marks - and I am being absolutely sincere here - are usually a very bad idea in a title. They just look so cheesy and overdone - as though you're trying to force a certain reaction out of the readers.

Think of movie titles that include exclamation marks. There aren't that many. There's a reason for this.

Thanks for being so honest with me. I understand. *Pats your shoulder*

But why do you find that it's bad idea? I know it sounds cheesy to you, but I want to know why.

 

[Shazam!]

No. You're all wrong on that. Why would you think that this must be some kind of low-rate project?

I never assumed you were making a low rent feature : /

I just said that the title was more fitting for a B-movie because of the exclamation mark. It makes any title seem silly:

Star Trek TNG: The Best Of Both Worlds!
Star Trek: City On The Edge Of Forever!

etc

 

[Shazam!]

Think of movie titles that include exclamation marks. There aren't that many. There's a reason for this.

Mars Attacks!

 

[sidious618]

Is this supposed to be a television show?

 

[Laren]

How come so many episode titles feature the term "tears" anyway? Is that deliberate? It seems a bit redundant to me. Or do tears have a specific significance to your stories?

 

[Supreme Admiral]

Is this supposed to be a television show?

Yes. But I rather to have it on big screen. It would be much easier to having each episodes to putting up on big screen.

 

[Supreme Admiral]

How come so many episode titles feature the term "tears" anyway? Is that deliberate? It seems a bit redundant to me. Or do tears have a specific significance to your stories?

Because sixth episode, there will be revenge at first. After that, death in the end. During of Seventh episode, there will be funerals.

As goes for eighth episode, there will be aftermath. Where this robot character taught this human from 21st century about the eternal hall of chess' bridge. Like building the bridges that holds humans together in that relationship.