As I was reading through older threads in this forum I saw a post that said Peter David's dialogue sounds like it's out of a comic book. I realize that's just one person's opinion, but it scared me a bit. Now that the idea has been planted in my head, I'm afraid I'll be predisposed to be judgemental of David's dialogue.
To be honest, I came to Peter David first in prose form, when I spotted the Guardian of Forever on the cover of his TNG novel Imzadi. It was a great read when I was younger, full of action and adventure, an exploration of Riker and Troi's relationship starting, and a look one version of TNG's future that I found fun (but also with melancholy about the outcome of some things).
Peter David was always good at painting great visuals that one wouldn't see in television or in the movies in the 1980s or 1990s, and he was able to do it quick without overly long paragraphs of description, he was good at getting to the point. His dialogue always grabbed me for being funny or genuinely dramatic (some readers might fairly say melodramatic, perhaps), demonstrative of the character speaking the dialogue, and well-thought out.
I haven't read a lot of his comics until recently, and I've found him just as agreeable a comic book writer. I never felt like his writing in one storytelling form to be overly demonstrative that he's better in other forms.
A more striking example of a writer benefiting in a different form of storytelling (in my opinion) is Diane Duane, whose earlier novels seemed a bit verbose. A couple times in Duane's books she would have a sentence that became a run-on sentence because she kept on going on digressions. When I filtered out the digressions I found that the original thought of a paragraph-long sentence was incomplete! Her writing was much more focused in comic form for a couple stories she wrote for the ongoing DC TOS comic series at the time.
Here are three books I'm considering adding to my queue. Does anyone have anything good or bad to say about them?
Ship of the Line -- I believe this is the story where Picard first takes command of the E?
I'm so sorry...I would say avoid this one! It has a great cover, but it's a crushing disappointment as a novel. And I usually like many of Diane Carey's other, earlier books! Her TOS books Dreadnaught and Battlestations are very fun. Although it seems less universally praised, I'm very fond of her Final Frontier giant novel.
Diane Carey seemed to have a bias/preference for TOS characters and situations. The worst part about Ship of the Line is that her preference for TOS is there in a TNG book, at the expense of TNG characters and situations. She doesn't respect Picard, she gives him a character arc where he's supposed to grow and learn from Captain Kirk in a holodeck re-visitation of a very familiar TOS episode. The running theme seemed to be that the "soft" vibe of TNG needs to toughen up with a more TOS vibe. TNG characters are surrounded by TOS characters and situations, when the book's promised focus is the beginning of the TNG movie Enterprise's voyages.
To compare Careys depiction of the maiden voyage of two Enterprise starships, Kirk's Enterprise and the later ship introduced in the First Contact movie: Final Frontier is full of respect, reverence and awe for TOS's Enterprise. Her depiction of the First Contact Enterprise is dismissive of the ship as "very pretty" and focuses on situations that read like criticisms of TNG-era Star Trek, and stifling it with TOS characters and situations.
Resistance -- As I understand it, this is the second book post-Nemesis, but it's the first time Picard goes back to the repaired E and puts together a new crew to replace Data, Riker and Troi?
I really like J.M. Dillard's prose, and really enjoyed her novelizations of the fifth and sixth TOS movies. Her first original number ST TOS novel is a favorite of mine, though I feel mixed about her other two. As much as I like her prose her TOS novel Demons was disappointing. I think she did a good job with the TOS novel The Lost Years, really enjoyed her exploration of TOS characters right after the 5-year mission, and she does some worthwhile universe-building for Vulcan culture, IMO. I have seen mixed reviews for Resistance; beyond that I haven't actually read that one and can't fairly comment.