ThankQ said:
Guys, time travel works when it serves the plot, but doesn't work well when it is the plot. Yesterday's Enterprise wasn't about time travel, it was about bravery, intuition and trust. It was wonderful. City on the Edge of Forever was about balancing love with responsibility, helped along by friendship. Good stuff. STIV was about all kinds of good things, none of them being time travel.
The Temporal Cold War was about being a Temporal Cold War. It had fancy and charged words, for example, "Temporal" and "Cold War". It was "let's throw some time travel and and sort it out later." Perhaps Red Foreman could have set Rick Berman straight:
"I don't understand why they aren't digging this Temporal Cold War."
"That's becasue you're a dumbass."
I can see some nice action in this plot, some chances for nods to the canon geeks, a scrappy young Kirk outfoxing cunning Romulans from the future. Sounds to me like it could work. As long as time travel is just used to get to the story and not as the story itself.
Very valid points that the time travel fanboys don't understand.
Something I learned studying literature in high school is that there is one fundamental story that repeats throughout all story telling, and that is the one of
the hero's quest. The basic outline of the structure is that the hero comes up against and ultimately conquers adversity, an antagonist and perhaps even a protagonist.
The old "Spaghetti Westerns" that Clint Eastwood starred in were adapted from a successful formula based on Japanese samurai stories, which are, to a degree, a formula of the hero's quest.
Star Wars is a classic telling of the hero's quest.
There is a lot of unknown/untold material based on the early years of Kirk. I get sick and tired of people thinking Kirk and Spock should be at the academy together along with Scotty, blah, blah, blah. Think of your life right now and those who interact with you. Now, go back 5 years, 10 year, or for some of us, 20 years. Each moment in time is different than the others because of our different life experiences. I think this idea of everyone coming up through the ranks together fused itself into the fan community because of stupid cartoons ideas like the young Looney Tunes as well as a cartoon based on the Marvel mutants all having attended high school together, when comic continuity is clear that they all met at different times of their lives.
Yes, this is science fiction, but I want a degree of believability. I WANT A DAMNED STORY. To me, a story is not how people try to go back in time to change the timeline. A perfect example of a time travel TURD is the movie "The Final Countdown".
Tell a story of young Kirk, whether he be in his academy days, a young Lieutenant, or his first test as a commanding officer with a bit of the movie interspersed with flashbacks.
No amount of fanwank fantasy nor special effects will make up for the lack of a story!!!
