I think it's a pretty good effort for my first (couple) of finished pages (13 and 14, starting at the beginning is for dorks

). Lettering is really harder than you'd think; that is, finding a font that didn't look like
complete shit and also had the spacing I wanted was harder than you'd think. There was one font, Indy Pimp (it's a font, they all have stupid names), that would have been Goddamned perfect, but for the fact its "I" was spaced as to be basically invisible next to any "M," "N," or what have you.
Drawing-wise. Tried to put a lot of little things in here. My favorite detail is the $1400 Christian Louboutins she's treating like workboots. I also liked playing with time, particularly the keyboard keys. You know how the Flash will break password encryption by entering a billion combinations in a second? That's not how USB connections work. You can't type a 10,000 words a second even if you
could move your hands that fast.
I like panel 6 a lot too. I've always said Lois Lane ought to be about 42, so I tried to age up the definitive, Kurt Schaffenberger version, suggestion of silver in her hair, about fifteen pounds heavier, but still, you know, very much alive...
Loser humans and their silly telomeres. When will they learn?
Edit: had to fix something, because I don't understand how time zones work. -_-