Amusingly, based on the dialogue, I strongly disagree with both points.The things I think we agree on wholly:
1. In the episode the Enterprise is tasked with the mission of going outside the galaxy, whatever precisely that might mean.
2. In attempting to do this, the Enterprise encounters a vast energy barrier of plot-generating events, because if it didn't the episode would be ``the Enterprise ventures into previously unvisited territory, looks around, and comes home'' and the show would never go to series.
What is the Enterprise tasked with?
- they "intend to probe out of the galaxy"
- they think the recorder marker could tell what happened to the Valiant when she was doing the same, even though the marker would necessarily lie close to the site of loss were it to contain anything useful on the loss
- they stop at predetermined "galaxy edge", clearly well before sensor range of the barrier phenomenon as no sensing is conducted yet
- they view the records, discover the Valiant was lost at the "galaxy edge" and not beyond it, and decide that surveying the factors relating to this loss is at the core of their mission of finding out what "others will be facing"
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1) The Enterprise is actually tasked with defying the galaxy edge, i.e. the barrier, and returning to tell the story. Being outside for a while, inside the rest of the time is incidental to the process. "Probing out" does not mean surveying outside phenomena, but performing a thrust through the known obstacle in the path of outward movement.
2) Even though no mission to this effect has been conducted yet (or so the heroes think before they meet the recorder marker), the mystery and danger posed by the barrier is already anticipated, supposedly thanks to earlier observations of some different sort. There is no unexpected encounter there, only an encounter that verifies a worst case scenario for those doing the anticipating.
Why would anybody want to define "in" and "out", though, if the actual edge is not a sight unto itself? Why not say something like "we'll survey the outer wastes to a distance of X parsecs from reference point zero" and only at return decide whether any interesting boundaries were crossed in the process? Only record-breaking daredevils would bother with the concept of getting "out of the galaxy", much like they today boast about getting "out of the atmosphere".3. While there is an inherent fuzziness in the concept of the edge of the galaxy, persons who might want to travel to it would have come to some definition, based on whatever seems relevant to their needs or interests, about whether a particular point in space-time is within the galaxy or not. By implication then they have some definition for a boundary between points inside and outside the galaxy, for the purposes of whatever those traveling to it are doing.
Why not? The field is easily observable, even if mysterious in its properties and "not quite there" in conventional analysis - it should provide an obvious excuse for defining the "arbitrary" inside/outside line. It might not extend everywhere, but it clearly covers enough of the "border" that braving it is considered necessary for any exploration of the farther shores.4. There is absolutely no (in-universe) reason that any human-defined boundary to the galaxy should correlate with any kind of mysterious plot-generating field of energy.
Well, obviously not so, in-universe. The barrier is sharp enough to essentially be thickness-less - a ship without warp capabilities can cross it in plot time, and a ship with those capabilities gets through faster than you can say "Eddie's in space-time continuum". Humans would have an easy time accepting this natural phenomenon as their border, and using it as their benchmark when extending the border outside the edges of the actual phenomenon (if it has any). Nobody would want to vote for a competing, "loose"/"arbitrary" definition of the in/out border.5. Any human-defined boundary would correspond only loosely with any physical properties in the space it's meant to divide, and would look comically arbitrary, in a near-homogenous region, to someone in the field at the boundary's location.
Timo Saloniemi