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Spoilers The ending of the season, and the "tacked on two"...

Like many others, I found the end of the season last night very underwhelming and rushed. I wondered how it could possibly be that they didn't have a more concrete ending for the season, and it was all such a big asspull.

Then I remembered the "tacked on two."

Let's roll back the clock. Discovery was originally supposed to end the season at 13 episodes. On May 17th, 2017, it was announced that the first season was being expanded to 15 episodes. We don't know for certain what those episodes were, but we do know that filming of the season didn't wrap up until late October.

I had earlier hypotheses about what the "tacked on two" might have been. One was that the prologue was originally shot in part or in total as flashback, but later stretched into a full two-parter. Another was that Magic to Make the Sanest Man go Mad was one of the tacked on ones, because (aside from some Burnham/Tyler romance) it was pretty self-contained and not critical to the show. Some have suggested it was Si Vis Pacem, Para Bellum, but I find that unlikely, given the Klingon arc from that episode transitions cleanly into the mid-season finale.

Considering the 13th episode ends with a cliffhanger - as if it was meant to be the season-ending show, I am left with the conclusion that maybe that was meant to be the end of the season, with the Klingon War finishing up in the second season (meaning they didn't fully know how they were going to close out the arc yet). Only someone high up in CBS realized, before the show even aired, the redesigned Klingons weren't working out (and maybe Burnham wasn't either) and basically commanded Berg & Harbets to wrap up all of the Season 1 arcs in two additional episodes, so they could start with a clean slate and do a more conventional Trek show in the second season.

Thoughts?
Yeah, sounds like another example of you coming up with some wild speculation, then trying to prop it up with your purely subjective interpretations of episodes in order to make your speculation appear to be fact. :)
 
Something similar happened to Kirk in universe as happened IRL - he became his own legend, instead of the 'reality'. Some remember him with awe and reverence that probably isn't earned, like Sisko, and some remember the cartoon of the swashbuckling ladies man like Janeway.
 
I thought the "two extra episodes" was simply a by-product of the Shenzhou storyline being re-worked. Originally, the show was to begin with Michael's prison transport needing to be picked up by Discovery, with the events of The Vulcan Hello and Battle at the Binary Stars being told as flashbacks over the course of the season. Then the decided against this and instead the storyline was turned into two episodes that ended up serving as the show's pilot episode.

Got a source for this?
 
Something similar happened to Kirk in universe as happened IRL - he became his own legend, instead of the 'reality'. Some remember him with awe and reverence that probably isn't earned, like Sisko, and some remember the cartoon of the swashbuckling ladies man like Janeway.
That's why I kind of like the idea from, I think the TMP novel (need to revisist it), that TOS was basically Federation propaganda about the Enterprise's 5 year mission and added to Kirk's legendary status.
 
Adequate enough for me, which is all I give a shit about. Besides, it fits the impression given that Captain Georgiou and the Shenzhou were supposed to have much larger roles in they show than they ended up having.
 
I'd also like to know the official source of this claim. It's an interesting notion, but I'd never heard about it until this thread. The repeating of a rumor or piece of BTS gossip doesn't necessarily make it a fact.
 
Where do I start with what was wrong with the denouement of the season?

1. The nearly canon-breaking decision to have Klingon ships in the effin Solar System. Martok said in DS9 the Klingons never even tried to attack Earth directly. Of course, this can be retconned that Klingons suppressed the knowledge because it's viewed as a failure, but still, they didn't need to do this.
2. The idea that the Federation would willingly attempt genocide, and no one (aside from Very Special Burnham) thought it was a bad idea.
3. The idea that blowing up Qo'noS would stop the Klingon assault - that they would all just reteat back home to airlift the survivors rather than destroy Earth first in fury.
4. That Burnham convinced Admiral Cornwell of the wrongness of the decision just due to sheer force of will
5. That Burnham convinced MU Georgiou to stand down, mainly because she intuited that Georgiou wouldn't kill her. She's from the freaking MU and was willing to kill Burnham only a few episodes ago. It made no sense.
6. That the Discovery crew trusted L'Rell with the bomb - someone who in the exact same episode was perfectly fine with the Federation being destroyed.
7. That L'Rell basically told the Klingon houses "I have a bomb that will blow up Qo'noS if you don't do what I say" and they all believed her.
8. That Burnham was considered a hero, when for all we know the withdrawl of Klingon forces was just a temporary reprieve.

There were aspects of last night's episode I liked, like the Ash/Burnham closure, and the exploration of the "Orion embassy." But man, the war was wrapped up with some lazy garbage writing.

Followed by the usual ST scene of “Enemy ships surrounding a planet peel off left and right, conflict is resolved, all is well”

Maybe that was an homage to the many other times that scene has been used. I wish they’d stop it. I know they’ve got limited time in a TV episode to tell a story, but it’s these broad brush scenes that are killing STD. Like the bridge crew standing as one to proclaim We are Starfleet as a substitute for any real interaction and character development of them during the past 15 episodes
 
Followed by the usual ST scene of “Enemy ships surrounding a planet peel off left and right, conflict is resolved, all is well”

Maybe that was an homage to the many other times that scene has been used. I wish they’d stop it. I know they’ve got limited time in a TV episode to tell a story, but it’s these broad brush scenes that are killing STD. Like the bridge crew standing as one to proclaim We are Starfleet as a substitute for any real interaction and character development of them during the past 15 episodes

As I said in the episode thread, if this was the resolution to a single episode - even a two episode arc - I would have been more forgiving, because Trek has a long history of choking and screwing up the ending of a good story.

But whiffing on a season long arc? That's a special kind of awful. It made the conclusion of Enterprise Season 3 look damn good in comparison. And I didn't even like ENT Season 3 that much.
 
Something similar happened to Kirk in universe as happened IRL - he became his own legend, instead of the 'reality'. Some remember him with awe and reverence that probably isn't earned, like Sisko, and some remember the cartoon of the swashbuckling ladies man like Janeway.

Kirk wasn't a legend, nor was he a swashbuckling ladies man.

He was a legendary swashbuckling ladies man
 
I just want to point out that Martok's exact quote is:

MARTOK: We must give the enemy credit. To launch an attack against Starfleet Headquarters. Even my people never attempted that. We've learned one thing about the Breen today, Captain. They're a race of warriors.

It wasn't about never attempting to attack Earth, but attacking Starfleet HQ as a military target and sending such a brazen message to the Federation. Call it a quibble if you must, but there's still a difference.
 
I just want to point out that Martok's exact quote is:

MARTOK: We must give the enemy credit. To launch an attack against Starfleet Headquarters. Even my people never attempted that. We've learned one thing about the Breen today, Captain. They're a race of warriors.

It wasn't about never attempting to attack Earth, but attacking Starfleet HQ as a military target and sending such a brazen message to the Federation. Call it a quibble if you must, but there's still a difference.
I'm pretty sure an attack fleet hanging out in Earth orbit counts as an attempted attack. Or were they just there for the scenery?
 
It wasn't hanging out in Earth's orbit. It's further away than you think due to camera perspective. When the fleet peels off, the camera zooms in roughly 8-10 seconds before you are close enough to see the various platforms/satellites orbiting the planet (which are presumably part of an orbital defense grid of some sort).

They never came close enough to be fired upon by those defenses. Nor were any ships seen moving to intercept, nor surface to space missiles fired, which one would expect if the Klingon fleet, as you say, was close enough to be orbiting the Earth.

Look at how different the size of earth is in these two screencaps:

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That said, I do think the graphics team when too far with those shots. They should have not have depicted Klingon ships so close to Earth, even though the shot composition was pretty to look at and helped raise the stakes a little. It would have been better to show them at the edge of the Sol system, with Earth still in view and the threat still imminent, but it felt a touch too OTT. Like when the bomb gets defused only 2-4 seconds before it explodes.

Martok is not a Klingon historian, perhaps he didn't know how close the Klingons came to attacking Earth back then. Nevertheless, he was specifically referring to the boldness of going after Starfleet at its own HQ, which gives Discovery some wriggle room. Not that I really care about a throwaway line given by a Klingon 100 years in the future, still, some people apparently get stuck on these kinds of minutiae. Trek is internally inconsistent all the time. It's a thing.

In the end, whatever serves the plot best at any given time is the 'canon' the writers will go for.
 
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