IMO Chapock feels like it has better word flow.
I never did. SNW cuts super close to the bone with established TOS 'history' but they do seem to try and stay within the specific statements (while ignoring the obvious intent) ...I always assumed this relationship would end in a way that leaves the TOS relationship intact.
Spock has opened himself up, got heart-smashed for it, will possibly decide not to let that happen again.
"After a time, you may find that having is not so pleasing a thing after all as wanting."