Just finished
Disavowed this morning. I really enjoyed it! At first, I thought that there were a few too many threads from disparate parts of the novelverse being used--and I also thought, at first, that Bashir being so quickly acquitted was a problem. As the book came to an end, though, I began to see how elegantly it all actually came together, and I revised my opinion further upwards.
Random thoughts:
- We get confirmation that Michael Eddington is indeed the Galactic Commonwealth's head of government and head of state, rather than just being the presiding officer of the Commonwealth Assembly. (
Rise Like Lions left both interpretations open.)
- Following up on that, I find myself wondering what the full formal title of the Chairman is. "Chairman of the Commonwealth Assembly?" "Chairman of the Galactic Commonwealth?" I'm a pedant, I know.
- "Chairman," used as the title for a head of state, always makes me think of Mao, and of how the Chinese head of state's title was translated as "Chairman" rather than "President" for many years. Was there a reason you chose the title of "Chairman" for the Commonwealth,
David Mack -- an intention to evoke certain connotations, or was it just that you needed a distinct title that hadn't been used yet?
- We get confirmation that Pran, who led the Breen Militia during the final days of the Dominion War, succeeded Brax in March 2384 after the initial Tirana III operation failed. Pran, ironically, now turns out to be responsible for setting the Tirana III operation in mostion. I wonder if he's going to suffer the same fate as his predecessor? The Confederate Congress can't be pleased.
- I absolutely love the way Mack and the other novelists have been able to develop the Breen into such a vibrant, interesting society. You get a real sense of the Breen as a rising power, and it follows up nicely on final season's depiction of the Breen as a largely mysterious force that had now made itself a major threat to the Federation. As always, the Breen's maniacal obsession with the illusion of meritocracy makes for a fascinating alien culture.
Also -- Jesus, these guys
really like to make their cars go fast. First they want the quantum slipstream, then they want the jaunt drives....
- The novels finally give us an official name for the Bajoran state! It's the Third Republic of Bajor. The numbering is a bit unusual by real-life standards -- people talk about the Fifth French Republic, for instance, but that's an unofficial name used to differentiate one period of French constitutional organization from another; the name "French Republic" didn't change between the fourth and fifth republics. But, hey, this
is an alien species, so their ideas about the identity of the state vs. describing the constitutional arrangements can differ from Humans'.
- Mental note: Memory Beta is going to need to change to the following article headings now: "Third Republic of Bajor;" "First Minister of the Third Republic of Bajor;" "Chamber of Ministers of the Third Republic of Bajor;" "Federation Councillor for the Third Republic of Bajor"....
- The idea of a government consisting of mostly former slaves is fascinating. I find myself wondering about the technical viability of such a society. When the Democratic Republic of the Congo declared independence from Belgium, for instance, it had less than a hundred people who had master's degrees, and I think it's fair to say that a lack of technical expertise and education hurt the DR Congo's ability to form a stable society. The Commonwealth obviously has the advantage of being able to draw upon Memory Omega -- but would it face large-scale problems in organizing civic society if its populace was mostly denied a change at even basic education? Or maybe the Klingon-Cardassian Alliance kept intact the old education infrastructures -- that would make sense, given that Jennifer Sisko was an accomplished scientist, even while still being held in bondage.
- There's a reference on page 60 to the Commonwealth having its own Starfleet, a defense and exploration agency. Yet the Commonwealth's fleet seems to be commanded by Memory Omega, so I'm a little confused about the relationship between the Commonwealth Starfleet and Memory Omega. Maybe M.O. has just become the chief branch of the Commonwealth Starfleet?
- Mirror Saavik has officially become a far more interesting and well-developed character than her Prime Universe counterpart. (Okay, maybe I'm being unfair -- I haven't read
Unspoken Truths yet.) She comes across as being mostly very admirable in
Disavowed, and one can understand the hero worship she has seemingly engendered. Yet her morality is still sometimes ambiguous -- much as she believes in the Commonwealth's ideals of universal sentient rights, and even though she does not believe in the death penalty, she still condemns Cole and his team to permanent exile without a trial or due process of law. She still makes herself judge, jury, and prison warden, in essence. And it's easy to forget that she's still partially responsible for the genocide of the Trill Symbionts.
- Speaking of the Trill - Ozla Graniv is back! It's always nice to get a sense of what the general public knows about the major political events in ST. Sometimes I think there's a tendency to just assume that fantastic events would be classified somehow, so it's nice to see that the truth about Bashir's actions are now public record. And it's especially nice to see that President zh'Tarash got Julian a pardon -- even if the only Federation world wiling to give him a license is Andor.
Also, how did Sarina's prior work for Starfleet Intelligence leak to the press? It's gonna be awful hard for her to keep working for S.I. or the FSA if that's public record.
- Julian and Sarina's house seems pretty damn big and luxurious; I wonder if Julian's getting a really, really generous pension from the Andorian government? We know from
A Ceremony of Losses that as of October 2385, there was a great deal of poverty and economic inequality on Andor post-Borg Invasion and post-secession. I would hope that rejoining the Federation would restore Andorian economics to a state of general abundance, but it still seems implausible that Bashir could afford such a great house in a world with that kind of poverty just three months later without some help.
- I really liked the idea that the Founders of the Mirror Universe are just as dedicated to law and order, but
aren't egomaniacal fascists bent on conquering all Solids as potential threats. I find myself curious if perhaps their Great Link underwent some kind of social change? The Jem'Hadar and the Vorta still seem to have been genetically engineered to revere the Founders as gods. Perhaps in the past, the Mirror Founders had embraced the kind of fascism that leads to deciding to engineer worshipful slave races, but later on they abandoned this? It would explain why the Mirror Founders don't regard themselves as being above Dominion law, and yet they still have genetically engineered worshippers.
- Section 31's spying on the Mirror Universe would seem to follow up on the revelation in 2007's
The Good That Men Do that the organization knew about the Mirror Universe as far back as 2155.
- The final fate of the Spetzkar company was deliciously ironic. It also nicely explained just how it is that Commonwealth jaunt ships are making their way into the Prime Universe -- they aren't, but this was a predestination paradox. As is often the case, Mack lets loose with some beautiful prose in the midst of his action thrillers:
I am become the agent of my people's destruction. I am history's fool. He and Una McCormack should get into a "beautiful prose"-off one day.
- Speaking of the Spetzkar and the Special Research Division... am I the only one who gets a bit of a Nazi vibe off of some of these names? Non-name brand Nazis can be fun bad guys.
- I loved the fact that we get a prominent starship named after something non-Human in the free starship
ShiKahr ("FSS
ShiKahr?") I wonder what the USS
ShiKahr in the Prime Universe is like.
- The description of the jaunt ships as having a ringed engine hull was fascinating. When I first read
Rise Like Lions, I had just imagined the free starship
Enterprise as being the Mirror Universe's version of a
Sovereign-class starship like the
Enterprise-E. Reading
Disavowed, I found I had a hard time not imagining the jaunt ships as resembling the
Suurok-class Vulcan ships from ENT. I wonder how everyone else pictures them?
- The revelation that Section 31 has known Julian and Sarina are trying to infiltrate them all along was a welcome twist. It makes for a much more interesting antagonist if they're not too foolish.
- And yet, once again, we have a Section 31 operation that goes to hell and damn near leads to disaster for the Federation, because the organization constantly underestimates its enemies. This continues the pattern of Thirty-One constantly causing blowback established in the canon and continued in the
Section 31 miniseries from 2001. They think they can pull one over on Memory Omega, and their arrogance damn near leads to hostilities with Omega and to the Prime Breen gaining a jaunt drive.
- Finally, I loved the look we got at Section 31's inner workings in the final pages. There's a plethora of new Thirty-One leaders to document... and we find out that it has a leader code-named "Control!" Too cool. Shades of John le Carre!
- Speaking of John le Carre, I'd be lying if I were to say I didn't immediately picture Control as John Hurt.
- One of Section 31's key leaders is apparently an Andorian
thaan. I wonder where his loyalties laid while Andor was an independent world? Would he have been allowed to continue serving Section 31, or would his loyalties have been seen as suspect? (Of course, he may not be an Andorian citizen. Maybe he's from Rigel or whatever, and is only biologically Andorian.)
- I find myself skeptical that Control is Sloan, though I wouldn't mind that twist. Personally, I'm with
Deranged Nasat -- it's clearly Patrick.
- I love the fact that 13 years after the original
Section 31 miniseries foreshadowed a conflict between Our Heroes and the bureau, and laid the groundwork to have each of the captains discover them and work against them, we're finally seeing more movement on that arc. We know from
The Good That Men Do seven years ago that Section 31
will be defeated and brought to justice -- but how?
- Section 31's position within Starfleet and the UFP reminds me of Hydra's within SHIELD and the United States in
Captain America: The Winter Soldier. I think this is going to become my go-to comparison the next time someone tries to argue they're a legit part of the Federation government.