My takeaway from all the descriptions was that the planet was basically a dead planet when the Enterprise crew first landed there. Did I misunderstand that?
The epilogue with the Discovery cameo was fun, but it also implies the planet is again lush with life. I Know it's 1,000-ish years later, but that seems a very short time for a planet's ecosystem to evolve new life.
I'm sure I completely missed something, but heck if I can figure out what it is I missed.
This is a work of fiction, not a science paper, so I chose to exercise a little artistic licence to create what I felt was a satisfying dramatic ending.
In my original outline, Keol would have awoken much further into the future, but that conclusion felt a bit empty to me, and the cameo by the Discovery crew resonates much more strongly with Toward The Night's themes.
In my original outline, Keol would have awoken much further into the future, but that conclusion felt a bit empty to me, and the cameo by the Discovery crew resonates much more strongly with Toward The Night's themes.