As usual, Sci, your observations are spot-on. 

His title came about because I didn't want another president, but rather a post that implied that he was a "first among equals," someone in an elected post, but in a slightly different system than that used by the Federation.- We get confirmation that Michael Eddington is indeed the Galactic Commonwealth's head of government and head of state, rather than just being the presiding officer of the Commonwealth Assembly. (Rise Like Lions left both interpretations open.)
- Following up on that, I find myself wondering what the full formal title of the Chairman is. "Chairman of the Commonwealth Assembly?" "Chairman of the Galactic Commonwealth?" I'm a pedant, I know.
- "Chairman," used as the title for a head of state, always makes me think of Mao, and of how the Chinese head of state's title was translated as "Chairman" rather than "President" for many years. Was there a reason you chose the title of "Chairman" for the Commonwealth, David Mack -- an intention to evoke certain connotations, or was it just that you needed a distinct title that hadn't been used yet?
That was pretty much my assumption. A civilization as advanced as the Klingon-Cardassian Alliance would have required skilled labor; it also seemed that some former subjects of the Terran Empire who distinguished themselves were allowed to acquire skills and education (Picard, for instance, as an Indiana Jones-type tomb raider for his Cardassian patron).- The idea of a government consisting of mostly former slaves is fascinating. I find myself wondering about the technical viability of such a society. When the Democratic Republic of the Congo declared independence from Belgium, for instance, it had less than a hundred people who had master's degrees, and I think it's fair to say that a lack of technical expertise and education hurt the DR Congo's ability to form a stable society. The Commonwealth obviously has the advantage of being able to draw upon Memory Omega -- but would it face large-scale problems in organizing civic society if its populace was mostly denied a change at even basic education? Or maybe the Klingon-Cardassian Alliance kept intact the old education infrastructures -- that would make sense, given that Jennifer Sisko was an accomplished scientist, even while still being held in bondage.
Admittedly, the command-and-control structure with regard to the jaunt ships and the rest of the Commonwealth Starfleet is … murky. If the agendas of the Assembly and that of Memory Omega were ever to come into conflict, that might be … interesting (in the "Chinese history" sense of the word).- There's a reference on page 60 to the Commonwealth having its own Starfleet, a defense and exploration agency. Yet the Commonwealth's fleet seems to be commanded by Memory Omega, so I'm a little confused about the relationship between the Commonwealth Starfleet and Memory Omega. Maybe M.O. has just become the chief branch of the Commonwealth Starfleet?
Good question. Maybe Graniv is just really good at her job. Or maybe someone leaked Sarina's past billets as passive-aggressive payback for her suspected involvement in Bashir's scheme. We may never know for certain.Also, how did Sarina's prior work for Starfleet Intelligence leak to the press? It's gonna be awful hard for her to keep working for S.I. or the FSA if that's public record.
Save a species from extinction, get some perks. Also consider that the moment Andor rejoined the Federation, they were eligible for tons of foreign aid — a state of affairs that would only be exaggerated by the election of one of its own as UFP president.- Julian and Sarina's house seems pretty damn big and luxurious; I wonder if Julian's getting a really, really generous pension from the Andorian government? We know from A Ceremony of Losses that as of October 2385, there was a great deal of poverty and economic inequality on Andor post-Borg Invasion and post-secession. I would hope that rejoining the Federation would restore Andorian economics to a state of general abundance, but it still seems implausible that Bashir could afford such a great house in a world with that kind of poverty just three months later without some help.
Another interesting note. If I ever revisit the MU in a future novel (something I currently have no plan to do), I may explore this idea.- I really liked the idea that the Founders of the Mirror Universe are just as dedicated to law and order, but aren't egomaniacal fascists bent on conquering all Solids as potential threats. I find myself curious if perhaps their Great Link underwent some kind of social change? The Jem'Hadar and the Vorta still seem to have been genetically engineered to revere the Founders as gods. Perhaps in the past, the Mirror Founders had embraced the kind of fascism that leads to deciding to engineer worshipful slave races, but later on they abandoned this? It would explain why the Mirror Founders don't regard themselves as being above Dominion law, and yet they still have genetically engineered worshippers.
I would lose. By a goddamned country mile.- The final fate of the Spetzkar company was deliciously ironic. It also nicely explained just how it is that Commonwealth jaunt ships are making their way into the Prime Universe -- they aren't, but this was a predestination paradox. As is often the case, Mack lets loose with some beautiful prose in the midst of his action thrillers: I am become the agent of my people's destruction. I am history's fool. He and Una McCormack should get into a "beautiful prose"-off one day.
You're half right. "Special Research Division" definitely has that vibe. But the Spetzkar were inspired by the Spetsnaz — the Russian military's special forces.- Speaking of the Spetzkar and the Special Research Division... am I the only one who gets a bit of a Nazi vibe off of some of these names? Non-name brand Nazis can be fun bad guys.
No comment.- Speaking of John le Carré, I'd be lying if I were to say I didn't immediately picture Control as John Hurt.
No comment.- I find myself skeptical that Control is Sloan, though I wouldn't mind that twist. Personally, I'm with Deranged Nasat -- it's clearly Patrick.![]()
I'm working on it. But until Control comes out … no comment.- I love the fact that 13 years after the original Section 31 miniseries foreshadowed a conflict between Our Heroes and the bureau, and laid the groundwork to have each of the captains discover them and work against them, we're finally seeing more movement on that arc. We know from The Good That Men Do seven years ago that Section 31 will be defeated and brought to justice -- but how?
An excellent analogy.- Section 31's position within Starfleet and the UFP reminds me of Hydra's within SHIELD and the United States in Captain America: The Winter Soldier. I think this is going to become my go-to comparison the next time someone tries to argue they're a legit part of the Federation government.