I intended to watch last night, but today was good.
One thing that strikes me about the pilot is there is really two plots in motion, they overlap quite a bit, but one is Captain Pike is burned out and the other is the Talosians need another human for Vina. I think the "too cerebral" and other complaints about Pike are from that more than any failing of Jeffery Hunter, he was seriously considering quitting, giving up, in the beginning. Being this is his first appearance, it's hard to distinguish he's just having a bad day or he's a defeatist person. At the end he seems more ready to face new adventures but all the same it seems to have colored the character. His only other appearance doesn't give him much to prove anything.
I know this has been said before, but Number One is the real hero of this episode. She's in command for over 75% of the running time and she makes the decision at the end that they won't be captured and used for slaves. I also liked Colt, she seemed ready to help as soon as they were beamed down and ready to accept Number One's decision even though it means death. I also liked how she followed Number One around in the briefing room, she was her Yeoman now. The thing I didn't like was she was the subject of two little scenes that really don't fit that well, the infamous "women on the bridge" towards the beginning and the "who would be eve" part on the end. Was Roddenberry really trying to show women are fully integrated as officers aboard ship in the future but felt he needed to throw these lines in to make it more acceptable? I think the first part should have been totally rewritten and the last adjusted, why did Colt smack right in to Pike? That was strange, the no women on the bridge was very strange, the only good thing being Number One's reactions and I don't buy she was supposed to be emotionless.
Spock and the other crew were good, I'd have liked to see more of them, including Pike and Boyce. I liked that off duty personnel weren't living in their uniforms. This was a really good story and a good beginning. I'm looking forward to more.
Ancient Greek fable, Deioneus was pushed by Ixion into a fiery pit so that he wouldn't have to pay the bride price.