Am I supposed to like that you expose Trek as the ripoff it is (with all those 'cues' taken from somewhere and someone else)?
LOL!
Of course Trek is a "ripoff" of preexisting literary Space Opera ranging from Lukian of Samosata's 2nd century tale
Vera Historia to A.E. van Vogt's 1950 fixup
The Voyage of the Space Beagle and Eric Frank Russell's 1955 collection
Men, Martians and Machines (featuring the heroic crew - which include chess-obsessed, logical "Martians" - of the starship Marathon encountering, amongst other things, a planet of villainous alien telepaths and another world dominated by intelligent machines whose biological creators have long since become extinct).
Also consider that the Organians - and every other hyper-evolved "energy being" encountered in
TOS - can be traced back to Konstantin Tsiolkovsky's "Radiant Humanity" and the imprinting of human minds into supercomputers
a la The Ultimate Computer was also a major plot element of Frank Herbert's 1966 novel
Destination: Void (which was itself an expansion of his August, 1965
Galaxy Magazine novella,
Do I Wake or Dream?). Beyond that, the speculation of the Milky Way being "Living Galaxy" for which technological humanoid civilizations serve as a biologically-ordained defense mechanism to defend against extragalactic parasitization in
The Immunity Syndrome simply
oozes the
Milchstraßenorganismus of Robert Nast's 1928 biocosmology monograph
Kosmische Hypothesen: Biologie des Weltalls mit Einleitung über die Relativität der Logik, although episode rewriter GR probably got the idea from Olaf Stapledon's 1937 novel
Star Maker (which Freeman Dyson
suspects was inspired by Nast).
Oh yeah, Sargon's deterministic assertion that all civilizations are condemned to self-destruction after "reproducing" through space colonization in
Return to Tomorrow is right out of Dandridge Cole's magnificent 1965 tome,
Beyond Tomorrow: The Next 50 Years in Space, which served double duty as the conceptual foundation of George Zebrowski's 1979 novel,
Macrolife. Incidentally, Cole also coined the term "Planetoid Colonies" which found its way into the episode
Friday's Child. There are many other antecedents I can dredge up, but I think these are sufficient for this particular thread.