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Elaan of Troyius: Farcical Camp or Campy Farce?

Qonundrum

Qonundrum Graduated from Camp Ridiculous
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Well, there's a random rewatch for ya... I was expecting to really dislike this one and, yep, there are a couple of scenes that do grate (e.g. Kirk and Spock in the corridor talking about logic or the lack thereof - note I'm not mentioning certain context as it's cringeworthy and gets 3 points dropped for that alone), and yet the acting in this is phenomenal, rising above the sum of the story's parts.

Obviously the story is influenced by "The Taming of the Shrew", but is given that clever Star Trek twist of galactic import(ance), thus rendering the end result feeling oddly yet refreshingly original.

Jay Robinson puts in a solid performance as the almost-doomed Petri who puts in a lovely acting range as ambassador... arguably remembered more as Dr Shrinker, he was quite a character actor and even if you recognized his countenance and vocal cadence, you still believed he was playing a different character.

William Shatner knows when to play it straight and when to play it up a little - not going over the top or approaching it but is giving just enough exaggerated facial expressions to turn an otherwise potentially contentious scene into something engaging.

But it's France Nuyen who really steals the show. In. Every. Single. Scene. And it gets better as she and Shatner have fantastic screen chemistry - needed considering how Elaasian tears are a pheromone and he's supposed to get all giggity over her. (Chemistry that other episodes, like "The Lights of Zetar" desperately needed as that's one aspect from that story that is unforgettable and for all the wrong reasons. Great, now I'm going to be rewatching Lamb Chop's episode next but I only remember so much of it so who knows...)

A point gets added back for the acting keeping this afloat.

The dagger throwing scene is perfectly acted, using reverse-edit of the filming that's just as top-notch: Shatner's movements and facial expressions are perfect. Indeed, this is the first time I saw the string used to pull said dagger out of the wall with. It's a "blink and you'll miss it" moment, but even with the obvious string it's well done.

The dilithium crystals revelation was well-handled plotting, feeling quite natural in flow to the plot. I'd forgotten how they got out of this episode, but it's brilliantly woven in.

Unlike, however, the use of battles... at warp speed!!... is more forced than gimmicky. If the Klingon vessel is aiming for the flank at warp seven, that's pretty fast. Should have kept speed references subluminal... but the visuals, especially the new CGI - even if they're not the highest shading quality - still sell the battle scene eminently well, even if both ships were clearly shown to be moving much slower. Actually, now to think into it, two ships actually dogfighting at warp speeds could perhaps work - in a nice 2.35:1 aspect ratio and showing lots of zippy lights I'd guess, but not so excessive to be pulled out of the scene's credibility. Both ships' computer systems would be powerful enough to do the calculations, the trick would be to keep the tension going.

Naturally, because Kirk is the GOAT, he doesn't need drugs to be cured of the tearful situation. A very dry and ironic bit of wit since, per decades' of memes, he's said to be bedhopping across the galaxy (he really wasn't, or else the audience wouldn't believe he needed to touch any lachrymal secretion as a catalyst. But given the scope of the story, Kirk wouldn't have done it either. And in this episode he still doesn't.)

The plot feels perhaps too straightforward at times, despite moments of brilliance and timing that elevate it. Plus - when you start to think into it too much - how could these two incompatible civilizations end up trying to make peace at all? The story hinges on glossed-over extremes as dramatic fodder, which somehow works better than it should, but more depth for the wider situation rather than write-off sentences given the two planets' peoples might have been helpful.

One other nitpick, the Klingon logo behind the Klingon commander is on its side (isn't the logo supposed to be pointing up and to the left and right, not top-right-down?)

Maybe another atop that: The guards of Elaan have some pretty nifty outfits considering they're cut-up groovy 60s go-go placemats and glued. Even more so that the studio lighting didn't melt the glue enough for some wardrobe malfunctions. That said, Kryton's outfit is still typical of Theiss' iconic style: Revealing and daring to fall apart while filming, there's also one tiny oversight in the design and that means every time Kryton bends down you get rather an unexpected yet lovely view as worthy as any of the women's costuming for those who watch TV because of how pretty the people are. Just not for the same amount of averaged on-screen seconds. Worthy of a thesis, "Theiss' Thesis" sounds pretty cool but until then there's this: https://forgottentrek.com/the-original-series/william-ware-theiss-a-stitch-in-time/ and https://www.startrek.com/news/william-ware-theiss-star-trek-couture . Incredibly creative designer...


Despite being a warped episode, it's somehow fun and has more verve and liveliness than a chunk of the third season. It's not TOS's meatiest episode, indeed it's very superficial and forces you to roll with a lampshaded scenario that seems implausible, but the actors somehow manage to keep it fun. It's a curate's egg.

7/10
 
One other nitpick, the Klingon logo behind the Klingon commander is on its side (isn't the logo supposed to be pointing up and to the left and right, not top-right-down?)

Is this the first appearance of the emblem? If so, then no, it's not sideways it's the subsequent appearances that are "wrong".

Or it can be displayed in various orientations. In that case, there is no "wrong".
 
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Both the colors and the orientation of the Klingon trefoil were intended to be that way per Matt Jefferies original design.

A light cream/ivory circle, surrounded by the jet black, red and gray-green arms - pointing right or inboard on the ship.
 
Unlike, however, the use of battles... at warp speed!!... is more forced than gimmicky. If the Klingon vessel is aiming for the flank at warp seven, that's pretty fast. Should have kept speed references subluminal... but the visuals, especially the new CGI - even if they're not the highest shading quality - still sell the battle scene eminently well, even if both ships were clearly shown to be moving much slower. Actually, now to think into it, two ships actually dogfighting at warp speeds could perhaps work - in a nice 2.35:1 aspect ratio and showing lots of zippy lights I'd guess, but not so excessive to be pulled out of the scene's credibility. Both ships' computer systems would be powerful enough to do the calculations, the trick would be to keep the tension going.
This is one of the original series' best space battled, even in its original form with the intercutting and sped up pre-existing footage. It's extremely well edited and scored. And, I have to say, everyone in the cast sells it.

Shatner is thinking on the fly, moving around Sulu with the camera, modulating his voice.

"Stay with the controls....keep our forward shields too him..."

Then later, when Kirk has Scotty "warp in, full power to shields!" the music ramps up and you can feel Kirk take the balance back. Fine, yeah, they're going to "pivot at warp two and bring all tunes to bear!" which is ridiculous. But back then warp speed was going "really fast." And when Chekov fires torpedoes, the drama of the order, the sound effects and music are incredible. "Direct hit amidship by photon torpedo!" Damn, that's a great moment. We didn't need no fancy swooping camera and fancy-dan CGI to make this work.

Compare this to, say, Nemesis when Picard orders Worf to fire, we get a close up of Warf's finger touching a screen with a "beep."

Jesus. Snore.

I love this episode. A real change of pace for the series and a solid win for year 3.
 
This is one of the original series' best space battled, even in its original form with the intercutting and sped up pre-existing footage. It's extremely well edited and scored. And, I have to say, everyone in the cast sells it.

Shatner is thinking on the fly, moving around Sulu with the camera, modulating his voice.

"Stay with the controls....keep our forward shields too him..."

Then later, when Kirk has Scotty "warp in, full power to shields!" the music ramps up and you can feel Kirk take the balance back. Fine, yeah, they're going to "pivot at warp two and bring all tunes to bear!" which is ridiculous. But back then warp speed was going "really fast." And when Chekov fires torpedoes, the drama of the order, the sound effects and music are incredible. "Direct hit amidship by photon torpedo!" Damn, that's a great moment. We didn't need no fancy swooping camera and fancy-dan CGI to make this work.

Definitely seconded. The actual battle, and the acting, definitely all nail the tension as a whole. Even with the use of "warp" to designate speed that feels a little off, that's the only thing. In re-reading several hours on, I honestly could have explained that description of the scene far better; the gimmicky nature of it had more with the use of "warp" that took me out of it briefly but just enough. The rest of it truly is fantastic. The setup with the downed engines is fantastic, the music well-placed, the acting sells it all with ease. And I do want to give double-kudos for the CGI; rendered cheaply at the time, the thought into the CGI models' placement and bringing out the scenes being told is on par with other greats in TOS.

Compare this to, say, Nemesis when Picard orders Worf to fire, we get a close up of Warf's finger touching a screen with a "beep."

Jesus. Snore.

🤭 Too true.


I love this episode. A real change of pace for the series and a solid win for year 3.

It holds its own for sure.
 
Not a ram or a sheep?


The context of their speech or...something else?

Some of Kirk's reactionary dialogue. It's so out of the ordinary, but Shatner's acting more than makes up for the "wut?" moment.

It's neither farcical nor campy imo.

It's The Taming Of The Shrew in space. with a couple of bits lifted from Cleopatra (1963) and is one of the better episodes of TOS S3.

I'd mentioned "The Taming of the Shrew" in my OP, which some historians seem to claim was written as a comedy at the time and is deemed "farcical comedy" even today. So it makes sense that TOS's take on it would incorporate some comedic elements, and Shatner and others being Shakespearean-trained seals the deal.

The battle takes itself seriously, but it is impossible to deny that other scenes in the story do exaggerate considerably (esp. for TOS standards) and do intend for more comedic effect. That seems to fit the descriptor "campy", I've been on the same argument defining other sci-fi that takes itself seriously, but here's one definition: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/campy
in the style of camp : absurdly exaggerated, artificial, or affected in a usually humorous way


As for "farce", definition aside, from https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/farce
a light dramatic composition marked by broadly satirical comedy and improbable plot

here's an article also using such reference using the word "farce" properly:


Plus this, another interesting read: https://filestore.aqa.org.uk/resources/english/AQA-7717-P1BB-TO-TS.PDF

Maybe everyone trying to describe the play, and the TOS episode using it as influence, are wrong? For the moment, I still see it as a blend of the serious and the exaggerated silly, which fits the definitions. It is one of the better TOS/3 episodes, but how do you disagree regarding the definitions and usage of "campy" and "farce" as descriptors? (Kryton's infiltration is definitely taken seriously, but the story embraces lots of storytelling styles.)
 
It's neither farcical nor campy imo.

It's The Taming Of The Shrew in space. with a couple of bits lifted from Cleopatra (1963) and is one of the better episodes of TOS S3.

Some of Kirk's reactionary dialogue. It's so out of the ordinary, but Shatner's acting more than makes up for the "wut?" moment.



I'd mentioned "The Taming of the Shrew" in my OP, which some historians seem to claim was written as a comedy at the time and is deemed "farcical comedy" even today. So it makes sense that TOS's take on it would incorporate some comedic elements, and Shatner and others being Shakespearean-trained seals the deal.
The spanking bit is played with a bit of a light touch and Shatner's "and that's another one of your problems!" is also more broadly delivered than usual, so there's some level of fun being had.

Petri is wonderfully fussy played with great élan (pun certainly intended) by the wonderful Jay Robinson, also with an appropriate layer of camp. Because you don't cast Jay Robinson otherwise. He was also quite adept at playing it more seriously, and he delivers the goods here.

France, as you said, is wonderful in this. There's that moment when Kirk touches her tears and her face immediately shows her victory. But later, she falls for him herself. In the end, she's still in love with Kirk, but must spend her life married to someone else in the name of peace living a life she doesn't want, while Kirk gets over it.

That's actually pretty cruel but that's the story.
 
France, as you said, is wonderful in this. There's that moment when Kirk touches her tears and her face immediately shows her victory. But later, she falls for him herself. In the end, she's still in love with Kirk, but must spend her life married to someone else in the name of peace living a life she doesn't want, while Kirk gets over it.

That's actually pretty cruel but that's the story.
Described in the Star Trek Giant Poster Book, issue 12, August 1977: "A victim of interplanetary politics, the only woman in 79 episodes that finally turned the tables on Kirk. She used him mercilessly."

I was never convinced she was in love with Kirk at the end. I thought she was still grasping at straws, in case this alien starship captain would throw his career away to get her out of the marriage.
 
But it's France Nuyen who really steals the show. In. Every. Single. Scene. And it gets better as she and Shatner have fantastic screen chemistry - needed considering how Elaasian tears are a pheromone and he's supposed to get all giggity over her. (Chemistry that other episodes, like "The Lights of Zetar" desperately needed as that's one aspect from that story that is unforgettable and for all the wrong reasons. Great, now I'm going to be rewatching Lamb Chop's episode next but I only remember so much of it so who knows...)
Shatner and Nuyen had already acted together on Broadway in The World of Suzie Wong.

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Described in the Star Trek Giant Poster Book, issue 12, August 1977: "A victim of interplanetary politics, the only woman in 79 episodes that finally turned the tables on Kirk. She used him mercilessly."

I was never convinced she was in love with Kirk at the end. I thought she was still grasping at straws, in case this alien starship captain would throw his career away to get her out of the marriage.
Yeah the poster book was written by fans, so YMMV. I don't go by anything than what's on screen. Since she gave no indication that she was still trying to trick him - I mean, she was trying to be by his side all through the battle ("I want to be with you") - the dialog and actions tell us her plan backfired. And under the spell of the tears, Elaan didn't need to play word games with Kirk.

And, honestly, for a storyteller, making her tragic is a much more satisfying arc than her remaining a duplicitous savage to the end. This was "Taming of the Shrew" not "My Fair Lady."
 
Let's not forget the great Fred Steiner score. I'll leave that to speak for itself.

This is by far one of the bright spots in the 3rd Season for me. I think it's also a great example of how a story like this one could have been much, much better realized had the 1st/2nd season writing (or re-writing) prowess of Fontana and Coon been around. Instead, we have a John Meredyth Lucas script to start with...always a little, shall I say, over baked, reviewed, scrubbed, and polished by Freiberger and Arthur Singer. 'Nuff said about them, too.
 
Let's not forget the great Fred Steiner score. I'll leave that to speak for itself.
Yep. I spent about 25 years wishing Varese Sarabande had allowed Steiner a third Star Trek CD, and it had included Who Mourns for Adonais, Elaan of Troyius, and Spock's Brain. We finally got everything in 2012.
 
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