It could've been improved, for many of the reasons already stated. Here is what I've done with TATV:
Start it out in 2245, with T'Pol being escorted by a young officer, maybe Christoper Pike to address Captain Robert April and the senior crew of the Enterprise.
She tells the story of Enterprise NX-01's final mission, the Kobayashi Maru and its role in the Romulan War. Long story short, the Romulans try to steal an UE starship with the KM trap. NX-01 falls into the trap. Trip, a la Spock in TWOK, incapacitates T'Pol, but he places her in an escape pod and she's one of the few people to survive. Everyone thinks that the NX-01 was completely destroyed, T'Pol included. But as the show wraps up, the Enterprise-E or F, under Captain Worf, is in Romulan space for their peace treaty and the Romulans present him with fragments of the NX-01's hull.
Start it out in 2245, with T'Pol being escorted by a young officer, maybe Christoper Pike to address Captain Robert April and the senior crew of the Enterprise.
She tells the story of Enterprise NX-01's final mission, the Kobayashi Maru and its role in the Romulan War. Long story short, the Romulans try to steal an UE starship with the KM trap. NX-01 falls into the trap. Trip, a la Spock in TWOK, incapacitates T'Pol, but he places her in an escape pod and she's one of the few people to survive. Everyone thinks that the NX-01 was completely destroyed, T'Pol included. But as the show wraps up, the Enterprise-E or F, under Captain Worf, is in Romulan space for their peace treaty and the Romulans present him with fragments of the NX-01's hull.