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Aventine

I love what KRAD did with the last Aventine book. Professor Pran would keep redirecting the students back to the topic of cooperation. It wasn't just peace through toleration and acceptance of differences, it was actual cooperation. That has been rolling around in my head all weekend. The Federation isn't just people who get along, they actually work together. Big difference, and it applies to the idea of defense as well. The Federation isn't content just to have no war, they seek trade and the exchange of ideas! :techman:
 
Exactly. It is NOT just a UN-type alliance, it's a true, honest-to-goodness nation--a federal republic--one nation, under (enter species-appropriate name of deity), indivisable, with liberty and justice for all.
 
Exactly. It is NOT just a UN-type alliance, it's a true, honest-to-goodness nation--a federal republic--one nation, under (enter species-appropriate name of deity), indivisable, with liberty and justice for all.

Agreed. It's not like the UN, but I wouldn't describe the UN as an alliance, more like a place for nations to negotiate without fear. The Federation isn't an indivisible nation, I don't believe... but I have to go read The Articles of Federation before I continue to talk out of my ass... LOL!

Anyways, back to the slipstream drive, there is talk of them trying to re-fit some ships, but if the streamline design is necessary for a slipstream drive, that may not work out.
 
Exactly. It is NOT just a UN-type alliance, it's a true, honest-to-goodness nation--a federal republic--one nation, under (enter species-appropriate name of deity), indivisable, with liberty and justice for all.

Well, to nitpick:

The Federation is not a nation. A nation is a community of people who regard themselves as having a common origin (usually ethnic or linguistic). Vulcans, Andorians, Tellarites, Humans, Betazoids, etc., of course, do not have a common origin -- they're entirely different SPECIES.

And it's an established fact that the Federation allows secession in the novels. Vulcan nearly seceded in Spock's World, Cait has a habit of seceding and then rejoining (as established in A Singular Destiny), the Federation Councillor from Bolarus threatened that Bolarus could secede in A Singular Destiny, and Kerovi seceded in the VOY Relaunch (as established in VOY: Full Circle). Meanwhile, the Federation expelled Selelvia in New Frontier, and threatened Trill with expulsion in Trill: Unjoined. So it seems clear that "indivisibility" is questionable.

The Federation is, however, a federal republic, as you note. It's not a mere alliance -- it is a genuine state. A multinational state.

And I for one don't think the Federation is under anyone's god. The Federation is under only one authority: The people of the Federation.

So if you're gonna base it on the U.S. Pledge of Allegiance, I'd put it as:

"I pledge allegiance to the Flag of the United Federation of Planets, and to the republic for which it stands: One Federation, under its citizens, with liberty and justice for all."
 
^I'm really bugged by the idea of pledging allegiance to a flag. A flag is a piece of cloth. Its meaning lies only in the ideas and principles it represents. That's where one's allegiance should lie.

And instead of "One federation, under its citizens," how about, "Many nations, bound in common cause?"
 
When I took the oath to join the U.S. Navy it was to protect the Constitution. I'm sure the Starfleet folks would swear something like our soldiers swear.

I, snakespeare, do solemnly swear that I will support and defend the Constitution of the United States against all enemies, foreign and domestic; that I will bear true faith and allegiance to the same; and that I will obey the orders of the President of the United States and the orders of the officers appointed over me, according to regulations and the Uniform Code of Military Justice. So help me God.

(and under my breath I say "...dess", being one of those who never believed a rooster could ever precede either a chicken or an egg.)

I know...

I, snakespeare, do solemnly swear that I will support and defend the Articles of the Federation against all enemies, foreign and domestic; that I will bear true faith and allegiance to the same; and that I will obey the orders of the President of the United Federation of Planets and the orders of the officers appointed over me, according to regulations and the [Uniform Code of Military Justice]. So help me Potato.
 
Well, to nitpick:

The Federation is not a nation. A nation is a community of people who regard themselves as having a common origin (usually ethnic or linguistic).

Nations are aggregates of persons united by common descent, history, culture, or language. No one of these characteristics is paramount; they can all collectively or individually define a nation.

Since the Federation is united by a common history (how common varies, like in the US), by a somewhat common culture, and by an apparently common language, it is a nation as well as (presumably) a state.

Exactly. It is NOT just a UN-type alliance, it's a true, honest-to-goodness nation--a federal republic--one nation, under (enter species-appropriate name of deity), indivisable, with liberty and justice for all.

The original Pledge of Allegiance could be adopted without paraphrase:
"I pledge allegiance to my Flag and the Republic for which it stands, one nation, indivisible, with liberty and justice for all."
Similarly, the pre-Red Scare Pledge of Allegiance would require only the substitution of "Federation of Planets" for "States of America":
"I pledge allegiance to the Flag of the United Federation of Planets and to the Republic for which it stands, one nation, indivisible, with liberty and justice for all."
Also, these versions of the pledge avoid the rhetorical awkwardness of dividing "one nation" from "indivisible".
 
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^I'm really bugged by the idea of pledging allegiance to a flag. A flag is a piece of cloth. Its meaning lies only in the ideas and principles it represents. That's where one's allegiance should lie.

And instead of "One federation, under its citizens," how about, "Many nations, bound in common cause?"

Hmmm, I agree "bound in common cause" is better because it implies true freedom and also true unity at once respecting of diversity; responsibility for yourself, but responsibility also to use that freedom and self-knowledge to advance the group. Individual and group being equally important and respected; I approve of that. "Bound in common cause" places the ties between people (and here, races/cultures/planets) in a "horizontally-"orientated web not a vertical one; it makes them equals with duties to one another, not duty to a superior. I think it might be difficult to get people to accept such a thing, though. Humans like hierarchies, knowing their place in the pack. And sadly, under this worldview, there has to be a pack leader, be it simply the alpha male (or alpha female as the case may be), the King, Precious Leader, God, etc. "Under God" or "Under its citizens" strikes me as simply a way to get around the idea of not having an authority any more without trampling on the instinct for subordination and suggesting actual freedom. Humans are hierarchial social animals. They hate freedom, if you get my meaning. :lol: It takes an awful lot to convince them they don't need someone or something else to give the orders or justify their actions. If not a person, a religious authority, holy book, God- or a flag to salute, which embodies their supposed principles. Remove the authority of the pack leader, even if it manifests in these ways not actually featuring a dominant person, and they get confused. They need to hold up something as "above" them, which is why (again, as I personally see it) a nation is "under God" or "under its citizens" even when it's made a conscious decision not to be "under His Royal Supreme and Innate Superiorness". I prefer the idea that the group serves the individual and the individual serves the group- no-one and nothing "under" anyone else. It seems suitable for the UFP in my book. But would humans or other hierarchial peoples (which most seem to be) accept it? I mean, okay, they're bound in common cause, but who determines that cause? Ideally of course, they all arrive at a consensus or submit to a majority vote, but they'll find it easier if someone or something is there above them. So, I'd personally support "united in common cause" over "under whatever", but I think sooner or later the people will switch back to being under something- hopefully a set of principles or honour codes or a pretty flag/insignia or a non-threatening vaguely defined God or a holy book containing a list of beneficial behavioural codes, etc, rather than a guy with a big sword...

At least, that's how I view it...please forgive my rambling.
 
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^ "Under God" was inserted in reaction to "godless communism."

Indeed? Thanks. I was not aware. Still, it shows that ultimately people feel more comfortable having their way of life justified by whatever it is they are "under" rather than their own shared responsibility. :)
 
Exactly. It is NOT just a UN-type alliance, it's a true, honest-to-goodness nation--a federal republic--one nation, under (enter species-appropriate name of deity), indivisable, with liberty and justice for all.

Well, to nitpick:

The Federation is not a nation. A nation is a community of people who regard themselves as having a common origin (usually ethnic or linguistic). Vulcans, Andorians, Tellarites, Humans, Betazoids, etc., of course, do not have a common origin -- they're entirely different SPECIES.

Yeah. And all American citizens have a common origin?

The Federation is, however, a federal republic, as you note. It's not a mere alliance -- it is a genuine state. A multinational state.

Hmm. But again, America isn't exactly one race or people. It's a melting pot of many different cultures and races. That doesn't mean it's a "multinational" state.

And I for one don't think the Federation is under anyone's god. The Federation is under only one authority: The people of the Federation.

Depends on if you're religious or not. If you are, you'd probably regard the nation/state you live in as being ordained by your god--or at the very least, that said deity allowed it to be concieved and created....
So if you're gonna base it on the U.S. Pledge of Allegiance, I'd put it as:

"I pledge allegiance to the Flag of the United Federation of Planets, and to the republic for which it stands: One Federation, under its citizens, with liberty and justice for all."

Again, depends on who your god is--and frankly, where you hold rights as coming from.
 
^I'm really bugged by the idea of pledging allegiance to a flag. A flag is a piece of cloth. Its meaning lies only in the ideas and principles it represents. That's where one's allegiance should lie.

Well, I think that's sort of the point. The flag is the artistic representation of those ideas and principles: Pledging allegiance to the flag is pledging allegiance to those principles.

Exactly. It is NOT just a UN-type alliance, it's a true, honest-to-goodness nation--a federal republic--one nation, under (enter species-appropriate name of deity), indivisable, with liberty and justice for all.

Well, to nitpick:

The Federation is not a nation. A nation is a community of people who regard themselves as having a common origin (usually ethnic or linguistic). Vulcans, Andorians, Tellarites, Humans, Betazoids, etc., of course, do not have a common origin -- they're entirely different SPECIES.

Yeah. And all American citizens have a common origin?

No, but the United States is a multinational state.

Hmm. But again, America isn't exactly one race or people. It's a melting pot of many different cultures and races. That doesn't mean it's a "multinational" state.

Um, yes, it does. My uncle is a Mexican-American whose family has been in Texas since it was a Mexican province. ("We didn't cross the border, the border crossed us!") My grandfather is an immigrant from Canada of Scottish descent. My father's family is Finnish, my grandmother's family is English, and my cousin-in-law's grandfather is Italian. And I'm 1/8th Cherokee.

Bottom line: My family is the living embodiment of there being many nations in America.

And I for one don't think the Federation is under anyone's god. The Federation is under only one authority: The people of the Federation.

Depends on if you're religious or not.

No, it depends on whether the Articles of the Federation legally subordinate the Federation to any divine entity. If it does not, then legally the Federation is not subordinated to any god under Federation law.
 
My uncle is a Mexican-American whose family has been in Texas since it was a Mexican province. ("We didn't cross the border, the border crossed us!") My grandfather is an immigrant from Canada of Scottish descent. My father's family is Finnish, my grandmother's family is English, and my cousin-in-law's grandfather is Italian. And I'm 1/8th Cherokee.

That's a really nice mix, Sci. :) An astonishingly diverse family- I wish mine were that interesting.
 
Well, I think that's sort of the point. The flag is the artistic representation of those ideas and principles: Pledging allegiance to the flag is pledging allegiance to those principles.

Not always. When politicians looking for an easy way to boost their popularity call for a ban on flag-burning, they're trampling the principles of free expression and dissent that America embodies in order to protect a piece of cloth that means nothing without those principles. So they're placing their allegiance to the material symbol above their allegiance to its meaning, and that's missing the whole point. It's the same when people try to erode American liberties and rights in the name of protecting America from its enemies. It's putting blind patriotism as an end in itself over allegiance to the core principles that define America. That's why I think indoctrinating schoolchildren to pledge allegiance to a physical symbol of the country, rather than instilling a respect for its principles, is missing the point. (For that matter, the whole idea of making children stand up and make a pledge of allegiance by rote, without necessarily understanding what it means, is ethically questionable. Allegiance should be an informed choice.)


Yeah. And all American citizens have a common origin?

No, but the United States is a multinational state.

True, if one defines the word literally. The key is that the word "nation" is from the Latin word for "birth," same as "natal," "nativity," "innate," etc. A nation is a group of people sharing a common birth, a common origin.

However, I think most Americans don't think of it that way. We usually think of ourselves as Americans first, other ethnic identifiers second. America is our nation, our common origin. So it's one nation formed from many nations. E pluribus unum. And I think that makes us better off than parts of the world where they place ethnic or religious identity above all other identities and insist that groups that are different from each other must be segregated into separate nation-states and can't live together.


No, it depends on whether the Articles of the Federation legally subordinate the Federation to any divine entity. If it does not, then legally the Federation is not subordinated to any god under Federation law.

Neither is the United States. The Pledge of Allegiance is not a legally binding policy, it's just a bit of pageantry and ritual. And as stated, the "under God" part was only added 56 years ago. There have been five official versions of the Pledge since its creation, and only one has included any reference to God. And that reference was just inserted as an ideological dig against the Communist bloc, not as a literal declaration of American theocracy.
 
Well, I think that's sort of the point. The flag is the artistic representation of those ideas and principles: Pledging allegiance to the flag is pledging allegiance to those principles.

Not always. When politicians looking for an easy way to boost their popularity call for a ban on flag-burning, they're trampling the principles of free expression and dissent that America embodies in order to protect a piece of cloth that means nothing without those principles. So they're placing their allegiance to the material symbol above their allegiance to its meaning, and that's missing the whole point. It's the same when people try to erode American liberties and rights in the name of protecting America from its enemies. It's putting blind patriotism as an end in itself over allegiance to the core principles that define America. That's why I think indoctrinating schoolchildren to pledge allegiance to a physical symbol of the country, rather than instilling a respect for its principles, is missing the point.

Well, sure, but this is the Federation we're talking about. One would hope that its populace wouldn't separate the symbol from its meaning but would always keep both in mind.

Maybe such a pledge should read, "I pledge allegiance to the Flag of the United Federation of Planets, and to the principles for which it stands...?"

(For that matter, the whole idea of making children stand up and make a pledge of allegiance by rote, without necessarily understanding what it means, is ethically questionable. Allegiance should be an informed choice.)

Actually, I agree on that last point. If I were a member of the Federation Council, I'd probably sponsor a bill prohibiting Federation public schools from indoctrinating children by having them memorize such a pledge by route. I'd make it a pledge that politicians would be required to proclaim, not children.

No, but the United States is a multinational state.

True, if one defines the word literally. The key is that the word "nation" is from the Latin word for "birth," same as "natal," "nativity," "innate," etc. A nation is a group of people sharing a common birth, a common origin.

However, I think most Americans don't think of it that way. We usually think of ourselves as Americans first, other ethnic identifiers second. America is our nation, our common origin.

Well, first off, I'm a graduated political science major, so of course I use the poli sci definition of "nation" and rail against the tendency of the American public to use the words "nation," "country," and "state" rather interchangeably.

But, yes, I do use the word in its technical meaning. And I also think you're overstating the idea of America as our common origin: It isn't. HUGE swaths of the American population are the descendants of very recent immigrants. Furthermore, we're increasingly being forced to confront the understanding that the entire Latino population of the United States either consists of people who are recent immigrants or of people who are the descendants of people that Americans conquered. Either way, the Latino population in America rather noticeably constitutes a distinct nation within the United States.

And all that is to say nothing of Native Americans, who of course do not share any heritage with Americans of European descent unless they're the products (however distantly) of European/Native American relationships.

So it's one nation formed from many nations. E pluribus unum. And I think that makes us better off than parts of the world where they place ethnic or religious identity above all other identities and insist that groups that are different from each other must be segregated into separate nation-states and can't live together.

Oh, certainly. That's why I used the term "multinational state." The ability of many different nations to combine into a single, functional, democratic, egalitarian state is, to me, wonderful, and something that really sets America apart from other states.

No, it depends on whether the Articles of the Federation legally subordinate the Federation to any divine entity. If it does not, then legally the Federation is not subordinated to any god under Federation law.

Neither is the United States. The Pledge of Allegiance is not a legally binding policy, it's just a bit of pageantry and ritual. And as stated, the "under God" part was only added 56 years ago.

Yep. And that's why I support the repeal of "under God" from the Pledge, and other references to God from the currency or other government documents or acts. The United States is not under any god. It is under the people of the United States, from whose authority its right to exist and govern derives.

ETA:

My uncle is a Mexican-American whose family has been in Texas since it was a Mexican province. ("We didn't cross the border, the border crossed us!") My grandfather is an immigrant from Canada of Scottish descent. My father's family is Finnish, my grandmother's family is English, and my cousin-in-law's grandfather is Italian. And I'm 1/8th Cherokee.

That's a really nice mix, Sci. :) An astonishingly diverse family- I wish mine were that interesting.

Thank you very much! I have a pretty nifty family, if I do say so myself.

Though I'd point out that one of the things my family has taught me is that every culture is interesting. So there's no reason to feel like a monocultural family is any less interesting than a multicultural one. :bolian:
 
And I also think you're overstating the idea of America as our common origin: It isn't. HUGE swaths of the American population are the descendants of very recent immigrants. Furthermore, we're increasingly being forced to confront the understanding that the entire Latino population of the United States either consists of people who are recent immigrants or of people who are the descendants of people that Americans conquered. Either way, the Latino population in America rather noticeably constitutes a distinct nation within the United States.

But my point is, unlike some parts of the world, the USA isn't fragmenting into separate states defined by ethnic nationalist identities. Yes, there are certainly distinct ethnic and religious cultures that have their tensions, but we're not falling apart into a white state, a black state, a Hispanic state, a Catholic state, a Protestant state, etc. (And I mean "state" here in the poli sci sense, an independent political entity, like the idea of a Palestinian state.) Whatever our differences, they play out within the context of America as a cohesive political entity. There are African-Americans and Asian-Americans and Latin Americans and so forth, but that "-American" is still the common link.
 
And I also think you're overstating the idea of America as our common origin: It isn't. HUGE swaths of the American population are the descendants of very recent immigrants. Furthermore, we're increasingly being forced to confront the understanding that the entire Latino population of the United States either consists of people who are recent immigrants or of people who are the descendants of people that Americans conquered. Either way, the Latino population in America rather noticeably constitutes a distinct nation within the United States.

But my point is, unlike some parts of the world, the USA isn't fragmenting into separate states defined by ethnic nationalist identities. Yes, there are certainly distinct ethnic and religious cultures that have their tensions, but we're not falling apart into a white state, a black state, a Hispanic state, a Catholic state, a Protestant state, etc. (And I mean "state" here in the poli sci sense, an independent political entity, like the idea of a Palestinian state.) Whatever our differences, they play out within the context of America as a cohesive political entity. There are African-Americans and Asian-Americans and Latin Americans and so forth, but that "-American" is still the common link.

Certainly, and that's why I called the United States a multinational state rather than, say, a degenerating collection of fragmenting nation-states.
 
Cait has a habit of seceding and then rejoining (as established in A Singular Destiny), the Federation Councillor from Bolarus threatened that Bolarus could secede in A Singular Destiny, and Kerovi seceded in the VOY Relaunch (as established in VOY: Full Circle). Meanwhile, the Federation expelled Selelvia in New Frontier

nit picking your nit-pick:

Cait was established to leave and rejoin frequently in NF ''Gateways: Cold Wars" and Selelvia actually quit.
 
Cait has a habit of seceding and then rejoining (as established in A Singular Destiny), the Federation Councillor from Bolarus threatened that Bolarus could secede in A Singular Destiny, and Kerovi seceded in the VOY Relaunch (as established in VOY: Full Circle). Meanwhile, the Federation expelled Selelvia in New Frontier

nit picking your nit-pick:

Cait was established to leave and rejoin frequently in NF ''Gateways: Cold Wars" and Selelvia actually quit.

Re: Cait. Never read Cold Wars, so thanks for that info! A Singular Destiny affirms their habit of seceding and rejoining, though.

Re: Selelvia. Are you sure they weren't expelled? I could swear the Federation Council expelled them when it realized that the Selelvians had been using their mind mojo to manipulate them.
 
Sci, regarding your statement that you support the expulsion of "under God", "In God We Trust", etc.

I refer you to the Declaration of Independence, which clearly states:

...and to assume among the powers of the earth, the seperate and equal station to which the Laws of Nature and Nature's God entitle them...

And of course:

We hold these truths to be self-evident: that all men are created equal; that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unailenable Rights...

No, I am not stating, "Believe or DIE", or any of that. I'm saying there IS precedent for regarding America as being "under God".

BTW, if one were to replace it as "under the people", that concept, that the people is effectively God, could well spiral down into majority rule--mob rule, the true definition of "democracy".



Also, I agree with Chris somewhat.

We usually think of ourselves as Americans first, other ethnic identifiers second. America is our nation, our common origin. So it's one nation formed from many nations. E pluribus unum. And I think that makes us better off than parts of the world where they place ethnic or religious identity above all other identities and insist that groups that are different from each other must be segregated into separate nation-states and can't live together.

By your definition, Sci, America is not a nation. However, you must admit that, by its design, America is a "melting pot" of different cultures and nationalities.

(BTW, I would think "nationalities" basically means the same as your definition of "nation". Perhaps the former term was coined in part due to the integration of other cultures into certain countries, so as to avoid confusion?)

So, then, We The People (not peoples) are, indeed, "Out Of Many, One". Members from many nations coming together to form one specific and distinct nation, still consisting of different nationalities.

I would consider the Federation roughly the same way.

(BTW, I'm most fascinated by the fact that Sci has a Political Science degree. I'm pursuing one myself--albiet not specializing in International Relations. It's American Politics and Policies. ;))


But anyway: if for purposes of alleged technicality, you would remove "under God", as not every American believes in God, would you also alter "one nation"?
 
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