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Any Trek authors pitched a post Romulus story to Pocketbooks yet?

Nor I, but a lot of the critics' form of discussion seems...the most diplomatic word I can come up with is "pointless"

If the people having the discussion find it interesting, then I don't think it's pointless.

... especially over a year after the film's release when very little that's new is being said.

I don't understand this oft-repeated statement that implies it's somehow worse to be discussing these points "over a year later." 99% of the stuff being discussed on this board (the sole exception being new books) is even older than that, and people are still discussing those things (both positively and critically). How is this different?
 
The question that originally started this branch of discussion, is whether it would make more sense to treat those scenes as Prime or another alternate timeline. As has been established, this has a simple objective answer from a practical standpoint, that the official version is that it's Prime. I can live with that.
But from a subjective, aesthetic standpoint, I think it would make more sense for that to be different timeline. Not that saying it's Prime doesn't make any sense at all, just less.

I don't think it makes sense for it to be a different timeline, because then there's no point in telling the story that way in the first place. Why bother to bring in a future version of Spock if it's not to make a connection with the Trek canon we know? If the story were simply about a timeline or timelines wholly divorced from prior Trek continuity, then including the time-travel element at all would be gratuitous, a needless imposition on an already cluttered story.



I'm in the apparent minority that thinks the original design was perfect right out of the gate, so anytime someone (including Roddenberry) speaks of the show version like it needed improvement, I'm not gonna be able to agree. In fact, my deep appreciation for the original design is why I have such trouble understanding why people constantly treat it like it needs fixing. If it were me, I'd be showing it off every chance I got!

That has nothing to do with what I'm saying. I agree with you that the original Enterprise is the best one ever (though the TMP ship gives it a run for its money). But my opinion does not detract from the right of other creators to bring their own creativity to bear and make decisions that differ from mine. And saying that they have that right is NOT saying that their choices are better than other people's choices. That's a totally different conversation.


But I will give you that if we're assuming your model above, I can see the Kelvin fitting into TMP's universe, 30 years previous. The only problem with that, from a canon standpoint, is the original design's appearance on DS9 and ENT.

Creative license. What we see onscreen is an artistic interpretation of a conjectural reality. In TOS, we routinely saw the Enterprise change from its series configuration in one shot to its pilot configuration in the next (via stock footage). But we were supposed to accept that what we were seeing was not literal and that the ship wasn't actually changing appearance -- that its "true" in-universe appearance was something that the visuals we were shown were only approximating.

Similarly, on DS9, Tora Ziyal was played by three different actresses, and the producers were tempted to keep recasting her every single time she appeared just to screw with us. That doesn't mean she was getting plastic surgery all the time. It means we were being shown variant interpretations of what we were supposed to pretend was a single continuous entity.



I understand that, and don't really have a problem with it. But since consistency with the canonically established Prime timeline was only a secondary concern, why even bother indicating those parts were set in Prime?

That's a really bizarre question. "Secondary concern" does not mean "of no concern at all." It means it's an important goal, just not as important as the main one. I don't know why you insist on dumbing this down to a black-or-white, all-or-nothing question. They had a job that required a delicate balance: reinventing ST for a new audience without alienating the old audience. Why is it so impossible for you to comprehend that they needed to pursue both goals at once, not make an absolutist choice of one or the other?


You're only looking at one side of it.

That's precisely the reason I'm engaging in this discussion. :)

What? The reason for engaging in a discussion is to consider both sides. If you're only interested in thinking about one side of it, if you're unwilling to consider any other sides, why am I wasting my time even talking to you?


I guess it just comes down to differing opinions of what constitutes a tribute. I think if they had had one fifteen minute scene that looked a lot more like the show, it would've been a great last hurrah for the traditionalists, but still wouldn't have been dominant or the highest priority.

There's a lot of tribute in the film beyond any level as superficial as the way things look. There are lines of dialogue and bits of characterization that are clear homages. There are moments where the actors channel the original performers uncannily. Try looking beyond the surface, for Pete's sake.


But that's exactly what I'm saying. If keeping things the same wouldn't have altered the quality of the film, then how is changing things a "need?"

That is not what I said. What I said is that they had a need to make the film accessible to a new audience, and that it was their choice to fulfill that need by making the artistic decisions that they did. The only reason why I can give you is that they are the ones hired to do the job and it was their right to make the decisions their own way whether you approved of them or not. For any further "why" questions, you would have to talk to the filmmakers themselves and ask them point-by-point what their reasons were for the specific aesthetic choices they made. And even if they bothered to answer you, you still wouldn't understand most of their answers, because it's a subjective thing. It's just a fact of life that different creators make different choices, not because they "need" to, but because they have the right to.


I don't see any reason you should be insulted by it; that's not the manner in which it was intended. I'm simply trying to say that, while using your imagination is good, when you're working within an established universe, it doesn't cheapen your own work or originality to copy the elements that others have already brought to that world.

You just don't understand the distinction here. There's a huge difference between employing variations on the same themes and copying the same ideas. I'm not "copying," I'm building on established foundations. "Copying" would mean retelling the same stories, quoting the same lines. That's the equivalent in writing terms of what you're demanding of the art staff, that they just slavishly recreate an earlier creation rather than developing their own variations on an established set of themes. For an artist designing a ship, the ship itself is not just a piece of his or her work, it's the entire work under consideration. What you're saying is that you want the designers of a ship or a bridge or a costume to exactly duplicate what someone else did. The equivalent to that in my field, in writing, would be to plagiarize someone else's entire story. That's not what I do. What I do is build my own creation using shared elements incorporated into a work that's mostly my own. The equivalent of that for a production artist designing a Starfleet vessel would be to use the familiar elements of the shape -- saucer, nacelles, deflector dish, top-mounted bridge -- but create a fresh, distinctive design that incorporated those elements.



I suppose it would make me sound out of touch if I had made any such point, but I don't believe I did so.

You claimed that TOS had depicted a simplistically optimistic future in which humanity never had to go through any hardships to reach its utopian 23rd century. But TOS canonically established that humanity would have to go through at least one more world war that was even worse than WWII. Therefore, you were implicitly saying that a war even worse than WWII wouldn't qualify as going through hardships. I'm not saying you intended to make such a claim, but I'm saying that the claims you have made lead to a fundamental contradiction and that your argument on this point is therefore fatally flawed.



If it works for you, fine, I'm glad you can enjoy it. But don't act like that's the only good way to tell a story.

Arrrgggghhhh!!!! I never said any such goddamn thing, and don't put words in my mouth!! I'm objecting to your constant whining about how they must be telling a story wrong if they don't tell it the way you want! Stop accusing me of holding the positions that I'm trying to talk you out of!!!

I'm done here. I'm not going to debate this with you anymore, since you've pretty much admitted that you're only willing to consider your own side.
 
I guess it just comes down to differing opinions of what constitutes a tribute. I think if they had had one fifteen minute scene that looked a lot more like the show, it would've been a great last hurrah for the traditionalists, but still wouldn't have been dominant or the highest priority.

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But we've already had a couple of great last hurrahs. There was THE UNDISCOVERED COUNTRY, and "All Good Things," and (unsuccessfully) "These are the Voyages."

How many curtain calls do the old shows need?

It was time to move on . . . .
 
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How far can you change the visual aspects of Star Trek and have it remain Star Trek? Could the Enterprise be replaced with a flying saucer that lands on planets instead of using a transporter? Can the Klingons become live action versions of Horrible Gelatinous Blob from Futurama? Can Vulcans look like Ewoks?

On the story side, could the Federation work as a fascist state? A theocracy?

I'm not thinking of a mirror universe situation where the stories are told to contrast with the primary universe. I'm wondering about an ongoing, "This is the current state of the Star Trek" universe, say a TV show that would have the same weight of canon as any that have been presented before.

How much of a fictional universe is tied to the stories and how much is connected to the world that's been built to tell those stories in? When does Star Trek stop being Star Trek?
 
It was time to move on . . . .
I disagree. The franchise needed new blood. It did not need to reboot, create new timeline whatever. The only reason they did that was to go back to Kirk, Spock & McCoy without having their hands tied by canon and, try not alienate fans.

They had 10 yrs to work with Kirk Spock & McCoy, between TMP and TWOK. I don't understand the drive to go back and do an origin story. I liked TOS & its movies when I was a kid. And that was during the late 70's & 80's. I don't see a need to see these people as kids to get the interest of young people. But, that it is just my opinion.
 
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Because they didn't want to confine themselves to the baggage of forty years of stories, and they wanted to use the characters the most people are familiar with. *That's* why.
 
Again, it's not a question of "need." I don't get why people insist on casting creative choice in those terms. They chose to do an origin story because it occurred to them that that was the one key story that had never been told in TOS. It's not like circumstances forced them to do that and only that; it's that it struck them as an idea worth pursuing. There are always a lot of different stories you could tell when you're hired to write a movie, but ultimately you have to choose one and go with it. Not because you "need" to do that particular story, but because you need to do some particular story. The reason they didn't do some other story is because they chose this story.

TOS is unique among Trek series in having no origin story, because that sort of story wasn't deemed necessary in '60s terms. But in modern terms we expect a series to have a beginning, so it's not surprising that it occurred to them to go that route in the process of reinventing TOS for the modern era. It was a new beginning and it was a chance to do something the original hadn't done. "Need" doesn't enter into it, but it's not that hard to see why they thought it was worth doing.
 
"Need" doesn't enter into it, but it's not that hard to see why they thought it was worth doing.


An origin story is also a good way to reintroduce the characters and series to a new generation of movie-goers.

Like with BATMAN BEGINS and CASINO ROYALE.
 
Again, it's not a question of "need." I don't get why people insist on casting creative choice in those terms. They chose to do an origin story because it occurred to them that that was the one key story that had never been told in TOS. It's not like circumstances forced them to do that and only that; it's that it struck them as an idea worth pursuing. There are always a lot of different stories you could tell when you're hired to write a movie, but ultimately you have to choose one and go with it. Not because you "need" to do that particular story, but because you need to do some particular story. The reason they didn't do some other story is because they chose this story.

TOS is unique among Trek series in having no origin story, because that sort of story wasn't deemed necessary in '60s terms. But in modern terms we expect a series to have a beginning, so it's not surprising that it occurred to them to go that route in the process of reinventing TOS for the modern era. It was a new beginning and it was a chance to do something the original hadn't done. "Need" doesn't enter into it, but it's not that hard to see why they thought it was worth doing.

As valid as hat is, TOS still doesn't have an origin story. This movie did not tell us how TOS came to be. The characters are the same but the circumstances are different. Not a slam on the movie. It is an origin story, just not for TOS.
 
How far can you change the visual aspects of Star Trek and have it remain Star Trek? Could the Enterprise be replaced with a flying saucer that lands on planets instead of using a transporter? Can the Klingons become live action versions of Horrible Gelatinous Blob from Futurama? Can Vulcans look like Ewoks?

On the story side, could the Federation work as a fascist state? A theocracy?

I'm not thinking of a mirror universe situation where the stories are told to contrast with the primary universe. I'm wondering about an ongoing, "This is the current state of the Star Trek" universe, say a TV show that would have the same weight of canon as any that have been presented before.

How much of a fictional universe is tied to the stories and how much is connected to the world that's been built to tell those stories in? When does Star Trek stop being Star Trek?
I'd say the latter. The basic ideas and framework that make Star Trek, "Star Trek" is much more important than any individual story or even group of stories. As for the visaul aspects. Yes, if you get too far away from certain visual cues and technological "constants" then you've stop making "Star Trek". It's a idea I've tried to express to folks who always bring up the similarity of ENT's tech to the tech seen on TNG/DS9/VOY ( yet they ignore its existance in TOS for some reason) that those elements are part of "Star Trek's" signature. Yes flying saucer Enterprise, furry short Vulcans and Bloblike Klingons would be steps too far.
 
As valid as hat is, TOS still doesn't have an origin story. This movie did not tell us how TOS came to be. The characters are the same but the circumstances are different. Not a slam on the movie. It is an origin story, just not for TOS.

Okay, so it's origin story for a new version of TOS.

Whatever works.
 
An origin story is also a good way to reintroduce the characters and series to a new generation of movie-goers.

Like with BATMAN BEGINS and CASINO ROYALE.

Indeed, audiences today tend to expect origin stories more than past audiences did -- as those examples indicate, since the prior Batman and Bond film series started with the heroes already established. Maybe Abrams could've gotten away with starting his Trek series in medias res, but it seems pretty natural that they'd go the origin-story route instead.


How far can you change the visual aspects of Star Trek and have it remain Star Trek?

What an odd question. Star Trek is a series of stories and ideas, not just a series of pictures. Even if you did radically change the designs, it would still be Star Trek if the core message and storytelling philosophy were the same.


Could the Enterprise be replaced with a flying saucer that lands on planets instead of using a transporter? Can the Klingons become live action versions of Horrible Gelatinous Blob from Futurama? Can Vulcans look like Ewoks?

That's not just changing the visual aspects, it's changing the conceptual and functional aspects as well. It exceeds the parameters of your original question.

It's also a reductio ad absurdem argument that doesn't really carry any meaning, since obviously nobody who reinterprets ST is going to diverge that far from the source. Instead we get different versions of the saucer-cylinder-nacelle shape; different types of transporter sparkle and sound; different variations of Klingon forehead design; and Vulcans that consistently have the same makeup and hair but a range of different costume and architecture designs. Again, it's about variations on a basic theme.


And I never said that the filmmakers were telling the origin story for TOS. I said that they recognized that an origin story for Captain Kirk and his crew was something that TOS had never done, so that the filmmakers recognized that it would allow them to tell a Kirk/Spock/Enterprise story in a way that hadn't been done by TOS.
 
Re: Thank God for Mulgrew!

How far can you change the visual aspects of Star Trek and have it remain Star Trek? Could the Enterprise be replaced with a flying saucer that lands on planets instead of using a transporter? Can the Klingons become live action versions of Horrible Gelatinous Blob from Futurama? Can Vulcans look like Ewoks?

On the story side, could the Federation work as a fascist state? A theocracy?

I'm not thinking of a mirror universe situation where the stories are told to contrast with the primary universe. I'm wondering about an ongoing, "This is the current state of the Star Trek" universe, say a TV show that would have the same weight of canon as any that have been presented before.

How much of a fictional universe is tied to the stories and how much is connected to the world that's been built to tell those stories in? When does Star Trek stop being Star Trek?

They didn't change anything remotely like that. It was the same Star Trek as always, seen though different eyes.
 
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TOS still doesn't have an origin story

What?? We're in the TrekLit section - TOS has several origin stories. DC comics' "First Mission", "Enterprise: The First Adventure" (with endorsement from Gene Rodenberry), Shatner's Kirk and Spock academy get-together "Collision Course", the Kirk/Mitchell "My Brother's Keeper" trilogy, launch of the TOS Enterprise in "Final Frontier" and so on and so on.

Pick one.

Don't like the written word? Go to the fan production section, wait a year and watch "Origins". That's about as hardcore 1969 TOS as you're ever gonna get. I'm sure if they visit the Kelvin, it'll have all the blinking squares for computer screens and gooseneck viewers you want.
 
How far can you change the visual aspects of Star Trek and have it remain Star Trek?

What an odd question. Star Trek is a series of stories and ideas, not just a series of pictures. Even if you did radically change the designs, it would still be Star Trek if the core message and storytelling philosophy were the same.


Could the Enterprise be replaced with a flying saucer that lands on planets instead of using a transporter? Can the Klingons become live action versions of Horrible Gelatinous Blob from Futurama? Can Vulcans look like Ewoks?

That's not just changing the visual aspects, it's changing the conceptual and functional aspects as well. It exceeds the parameters of your original question.

It's also a reductio ad absurdem argument that doesn't really carry any meaning, since obviously nobody who reinterprets ST is going to diverge that far from the source. Instead we get different versions of the saucer-cylinder-nacelle shape; different types of transporter sparkle and sound; different variations of Klingon forehead design; and Vulcans that consistently have the same makeup and hair but a range of different costume and architecture designs. Again, it's about variations on a basic theme.


And I never said that the filmmakers were telling the origin story for TOS. I said that they recognized that an origin story for Captain Kirk and his crew was something that TOS had never done, so that the filmmakers recognized that it would allow them to tell a Kirk/Spock/Enterprise story in a way that hadn't been done by TOS.

I didn't say that Star Trek was just a series of pictures. I was asking how much the visual aspects are a part of what makes Star Trek what it is.

I recall reading an interview with J. Michael Straczynski, talking about his Trek reboot proposal. He mentioned that he'd get rid of the transporter for dramatic reasons. Is the transporter necessary to telling a Star Trek story? Not just one story of course, but is the transporter an integral part of the universe?

The Defiant on DS9 didn't have a saucer and the nacelles were attached to the hull of the ship. It really didn't look like any Federation ship that we'd seen before. Could a rebooted Trek use a ship like that or, as you suggest, must it have a saucer-cylinder-nacelle shape?

If, as an example, the next movie bombs and Trek goes back on the shelf for ten years, who's to say that the next person wouldn't try an even more reimagining? If their ship didn't have saucer-cylinder-nacelle shape would you say that it's not Star Trek? I find it hard to believe that you would.
 
How far can you change the visual aspects of Star Trek and have it remain Star Trek?

What an odd question. Star Trek is a series of stories and ideas, not just a series of pictures. Even if you did radically change the designs, it would still be Star Trek if the core message and storytelling philosophy were the same.

It's a series of stories and ideas created for the visual medium. Designs are integral.

Exaggerated: If they changed the design and casting of a TV show from one episode to the next, would you still say it's the same thing?

And then, I have to ask... what is the core message and storytelling philosophy of Star Trek?
 
What? The reason for engaging in a discussion is to consider both sides. If you're only interested in thinking about one side of it, if you're unwilling to consider any other sides, why am I wasting my time even talking to you?

:wtf: Oh, come on. I get that sometimes meanings can be obscured in written word, but I didn't think I'd have to spell it out. I'm only seeing one side of it myself, so I'm having this discussion to open myself up to other people's perspectives. You think I'm doing this just for fun? I would have to be quite insane (or masochistic) to endure all the ridicule and belittling, heaped on anyone who expresses a dislike for the movie, just to assert my supposed rightness about something.

That is not what I said. What I said is that they had a need to make the film accessible to a new audience, and that it was their choice to fulfill that need by making the artistic decisions that they did.

What you said is that they had a "need to create something new and free of continuity baggage..." I think that can be a very practical thing for a movie franchise to have, but I don't think it's a need, nor the only way to make a film accessible.

You claimed that TOS had depicted a simplistically optimistic future in which humanity never had to go through any hardships to reach its utopian 23rd century. But TOS canonically established that humanity would have to go through at least one more world war that was even worse than WWII. Therefore, you were implicitly saying that a war even worse than WWII wouldn't qualify as going through hardships.

That is not even remotely what I said. There are so many inaccuracies about that statement, I don't even know where to start. I never said that humanity never went through any hardships, just that they never came to the brink of annihilation. Here's my original comment again:

I agree. The whole reason that TOS was considered optimistic was not about the characters' attitudes (about the same as any other show), but the fact that it depicted a future where humanity hadn't blown itself up with atomic bombs, or killed itself off in petty wars, but instead had unified and learned to work together.

I never (neither there, nor in any subsequent post) mentioned anything suggesting "simplistically optimistic," "Utopian" (I hate the concept just as much as you do), or never having to endure any hardships. If that still sounds anything like what you just wrote, then I think we must be speaking entirely different languages.

If it works for you, fine, I'm glad you can enjoy it. But don't act like that's the only good way to tell a story.
Arrrgggghhhh!!!! I never said any such goddamn thing, and don't put words in my mouth!! I'm objecting to your constant whining about how they must be telling a story wrong if they don't tell it the way you want! Stop accusing me of holding the positions that I'm trying to talk you out of!!!

I didn't suggest you said any such thing, but you certainly do seem to be implying it. And you've put plenty of words in my mouth in this very same post.

Tell me, is there any way for someone to discuss problems they have with the movie without it being considered "whining?" If so, I'd really like to hear about it.

I'm done here. I'm not going to debate this with you anymore, since you've pretty much admitted that you're only willing to consider your own side.

As I've already clarified, that was never the case, but I don't see much future in this discussion either. Clearly, there's a dramatic gulf between our viewpoints, and between the two of us, we're either unwilling or unable to bridge it. I believe that a reasonable viewpoint can hold up to scrutiny, but if I scrutinize a viewpoint, you accuse me of saying that anything that isn't done my way is wrong. I'm not gonna come in here, ask a question, and then just accept the answer blindly. I'm going to test a response by objection, if necessary, to see if it holds up. That's how I gain knowledge, and I'm not going to apologize for that. You are very mistaken about my mindset here, but I don't think I'll be able to adequately convince you of that, so I agree there's not much point in continuing.
 
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