Sir Sherlock: The Red Letter Day, by Kenton Hall, adapting the audio drama by Gary Hopkins.
Sir Sherlock is a series of audio dramas set in the 1920s starring Tom Baker as Sir Sherlock Holmes (he's knighted as the series begins) and John Leeson as Dr. John Watson. The first in the series was offered on Kickstarter earlier this year, and the Kickstarter for the second, The Sickle and the Sea, launched this week. As part of the rewards for the first book a novelization was offered. Published by Chinbeard Books, it's a hardcover novella of about 20,000 words.
I probably should have listened to the audio first, but I read the novelization first instead. I might get to the audio in a few days.
I'm persnickety when it comes to Sherlock Holmes pastiches. If something feels off, I bail. Life is too short to read bad Sherlock Holmes fiction... unless it's so actively bad that I just have to witness a train wreck, which I have done. I'm not going to name and shame, sorry.
The Red Letter Day is not a train wreck. I don't feel that I wasted my time reading it, but it doesn't evoke much of a Sherlock Holmes feeling in me. John Watson has a voice, not just a character dialogue voice but a prose voice. Hall's prose didn't hit the Watson prose voice for me. But it was also short enough -- about 80 pages -- that I didn't mind too much and carried on. It was perfectly adequate.
Two Egyptologists from the British Museum are murdered and their bodies left by Cleopatra's Needle in London. Holmes, who is in London to be knighted, receives a cryptic missive (the "red letter" of the title) that starts him on an investigation. Along the way he meets a familiar friend -- Lord Lestrade -- and makes two new acquaintances, Lestrade's granddaughter Emily and a young consulting detective named Norton (portrayed, in the audio, by Young Sherlock Holmes' Nicholas Rowe) at various points. There's some deduction, a Holmes plan, and a thrilling and dangerous climax.
It's a pilot. I was discussing this in the Doctor Who forum this morning that pilots have to do several things -- introduce the concept, the setting, the characters, plant some seeds to be picked up on later, and, oh yeah, incidentally have a story as well on which to hang all of these. As a pilot, it's effective. While I didn't find the mystery itself terribly interesting -- like some of Doyle's Holmes stories, the point is not the mystery and clues that can lead the reader to work it out -- the longer term plot elements have their points of interest, and I would be curious to see how they develop across the series.
My main issue with the execution of the concept has to do with the ages of the protagonists. Holmes and Watson are in their seventies, and while the story makes some references to their ages and the times, it generally feels like they're in their forties and operating where "it's always 1895" in Vincent Starret's famous phrase. I much preferred the treatment of the elderly Holmes in Chabon's The Final Solution and Mitch Cullin's A Simple Trick of the Mind. If the audio series can grapple with the realities of a septuagenarian Holmes it could turn into something interesting.
That said, with Sherlock Holmes now fully public domain, there is a metric fuckton of new Sherlock Holmes fiction on the market, and Sturgeon's Law applies hard here. A marketable angle -- old Sherlock Holmes as portrayred by Tom Baker -- serves well to differentiate this project in the marketplace and gives it a commercial hook that other Holmes projects wouldn't necessarily have.
I'm curious to see how this project develops.