This script was sooooo easy to fix if the writers would just exercise a little imagination.
The rendezvous with Constellation is the reason Enterprise has to delay the search for Ortegas, giving her some time on the asteroid where she really needs to worry about survival. Two different times in military survival training I went a week without eating- it would have taken me waaaaaay longer than a day to be hungry enough to scarf some raw alien giant centipede hurled to me by a Gorn.
Then, due to being in a different part of the universe and so close to that humongous gas giant, gravity alters time a bit, so it's more like six weeks or months for Ortegas before Enterprise returns to mount a rescue. Now she has to eat those nasty bugs, and has time to teach the Gorn chess, and learn the Gorn game.
Did not like the Castaway easter egg. "I have made water!" CRINGE.
Did not like the Metrons showing up- that just about ruined the entire ep, right there. Just utter shitty writing and MORE TOS small-universe syndrome.
Did not like Ortegas's constant flip commentary. She was in a dead serious situation, which should have been coupled with a little awe over what had happened to her, etc, but all we get is continuous Ortegas-brand snark and jokes.
And why would any starfleet shuttle not launch with some emergency rations, water, hand phasers, and so on? My corporate jet has more survival gear than her starfleet shuttle!
Given the circumstance we did get, Pike was criminally slow on the uptake when it came to search and rescue measures. And I guess Uhura was channeling her inner Hemmer here as others have point out.
Just bad, lazy, unimaginative, unoriginal writing. Any living TOS writers should be getting royalties, because they [Shat]keep....getting....ripped off....over....and OVER![/Shat].
The good: it tried to be a real episode of Star Trek where something happened, someone actually got off the ship, and Pike got to be in the captain's chair!