Oh and one other thing... Chapel saying "pro tip". People don't like talk like that in the 24th century.
Then my own counter voice says "You don't know how they speak in the 24th century".
True.. but I'm sure it's not that, other me. It sounds like a patronising Californian barista talking, it's just jarringly anachronistic.
I'm okay with informal expressions that are easily decipherable without needing additional historical context and in which the context is clear without needing additional information. " Pro tip" falls in that category for me, as I can see its usage lasting in a way that twenties slang expressions like "Banana oil!" and "Apple sauce!" or late sixties/very early seventies "groovy" has not.
If the SNW characters went around constantly talking about "yeeting things into the sun" or exclaiming "YOLO!" after performing a reckless action, THAT would pull me out of the action as fast as Chris Pine's Steve Trevor using the term "Intel" as military jargon in World War I.