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Spoilers Star Trek: Strange New Worlds 1x04 - "Memento Mori"

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I watched Arena a few days ago. The only thing "resolved" at the end was the dispute over the planet and destroyed colony. Kirk and Co. Realized the Federation Colony may have wrongfully been there in violation of the Gorn's borders. (And thus would have been justified in destroying the colony.)

Justified? I think an eviction notice first would have been better. Destroying (killing everyone there) on first encounter may have not been the way to go
 
I do sometimes notice outdated or contemporary dialogue. I try to appreciate it for what it is: a snapshot of the time of the work's creation. Which is weird because I prefer to be immersed and ignore the author.
 
I do sometimes notice outdated or contemporary dialogue. I try to appreciate it for what it is: a snapshot of the time of the work's creation. Which is weird because I prefer to be immersed and ignore the author.
Speaking in outdated dialogue or speech patterns in the 23rd century would be a bit like us talking today as they did in 16th century England, using old fashioned terminology and slang. But in some ways this could be good for language; we could all walk around quoting Shakespearean sonnets to each other instead to make casual conversation. Outdated speech patterns, dialogue and colloquialisms would definitely have there place on a starships holodeck though. When the crew is role playing or re enacting historical events they can pretend to be the characters and speak like they would for fun. Unfortunately, Pike’s Enterprise does not have a holodeck as they have not been invented yet. They could still speak in such ways every now and again for giggles like when Spock said a few funny things based on earth slang in TOS and the movies. But how do we know that future speech patterns in Star Trek have not been affected by the crew reading centuries of books, picking up speech patterns from their library of required reading? If there was a really good author in the 20th century for example, maybe everyone in the Federation or Starfleet studies their books? This would lead to the speech patterns of this person or persons being imprinted in to the minds of those who read those books which would then subconsciously make it’s way in to every day conversations as they speak? Of course, language would also be acquired through listening to the adults around them as children grow up and are educated in Federation school’s.
 
Back when I was watching Deadwood I found my speech pattern changing a bit based on the dialogue of that show (without being laced with the obligatory “fuck” or “cocksucker” that was so common, of course). It was brilliantly written, and occasionally one of my coworkers would say something like, “I understand what you meant, but I’ve never heard anyone talk like that before”. One of my favorite lines that I still use to this day is, “An opinion solicited is not equal to one freely given”. You see what I mean…
 
Two minor complaints. Firstly, the dialogue sounds too contemporary at times. I never expected to hear the words “for the win” in Star Trek, and I really never want to hear the phrase “we/you/I GOT this” in Trek again. DISC has been guilty of that too. It’s far too 2022 California sounding. The former should have been weeded out the first draft (it wasn’t cute, it was jarring: I doubt anyone will use the words “for the win” in 10-20 years anymore than people still say “totes” and “amazeballs” now) and the latter can be replaced by “we/you/I can do this”. 90s Trek used language in a precise and universalistic way without contemporary colloquialisms slipping in that would date the show

I also have a huge crush on Ethan Peck. Just thought I’d put that out there.

Ive had coaches use for the win since the late 70’s. I can’t speak before that because I wasn’t part of a competing sport before that. Now I do agree it’s used more in recent years but it’s not like it’s never been used in prior years. And certainly no where near as jarring as the hippie episode of TOS or even “remember where we parked” in Voyage Home as they had never used park before that , land was. Term used.
 
I actually think that I might accidentally have a catalogue of speech patterns in my head from Star Trek. I usually speak like Seven if Nine by default, but depending on the situation I can subconsciously summon other characters. For example I think that I can also do a good Data when I need to and an exceptional Picard! I think that I Janeway sometimes too. I might start Piking after all of this! :D
 
Um, no, it’s not a perfectly legitimate complaint. You’re writing a show set hundreds of years in the future,

Tell me how people hundreds of years in the future will speak.

Please do.

Read some Elizabethan English. Go to, oh, YouTube, and listen to how it was probably pronounced.

Then, explain why anyone should believe that people hundreds of years from now will even speak a version of English - if they even speak English - that we could understand.

It's an absurd complaint.

I'm glad these people are ignoring all that shit.
 
I actually think that I might accidentally have a catalogue of speech patterns in my head from Star Trek. I usually speak like Seven if Nine by default, but depending on the situation I can subconsciously summon other characters. For example I think that I can also do a good Data when I need to and an exceptional Picard! I think that I Janeway sometimes too. I might start Piking after all of this! :D
I learned English in part by watching TNG, which is why sometimes my "S"s are pronounced like Patrick Stewart!
 
I learned English in part by watching TNG, which is why sometimes my "S"s are pronounced like Patrick Stewart!
I think that I learnt English properly by watching and reading about Star Trek too when I was a child. I was never taught it properly at school! They probably *hated* my Star Trek impressions! :guffaw:
 
Then try this: do you not think that it's understandable to expect a work of fiction set in a particular time period to put a reasonable amount of effort into selling the idea that they are, in fact, in that time period?

Take HBO's Rome, for instance. While the dialogue is in English they made a great deal of effort to represent the actual world and values of first century BCE Rome. This is in contrast with a lot of other historical films that make efforts to "convert" their heroes into modern versions or their world into a stereotypical representation of what people in general think when they imagine the time period.

So, yeah, this is the future and it can be whatever we imagine, but both in terms of design, tech and world, I'd like to be sold the idea that it is actually a few centuries ahead. This includes, for me, and especially since English is actually the language they use in-universe, not using idioms that will be out-of-style in six months' time. Now, I'm essentially supporting another poster's argument, here, but I sympathise with it.
But Trek doesn’t and hasn’t treated language accurately, ever.

It’s utterly not reasonable that ever human settlement is going to use the same idioms or often the same accent.

Ccmpare that to English speaking nations on Earth today. Different regional accents different idioms. Even for rather small countries let alone larger ones.

With many worlds with humans, spread over vast distance and with hundreds of years of time you should naturally see massive differences. And over that period of time who knows what might become in fashion for that region.
 
Sometimes they didn't. :sigh:

Usually they do.

Anyone complaining SNW is robbed of tension because they know the ship won't be destroyed or main characters won't die must feel a similar lack of tension when watching every episode of TOS/TAS, every episode of TNG and DS9 barring one for each series, every episode of Voyager and all but the finale of Enterprise.

Star Trek isn't that kind of show. Never has been.
 
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Don't forget computers that say "WOR-KING!" and then make a chunka-chunka-chunka-chunka-chunka-chunka noise...


That's because they are basically a early form of pure artificial intelligence. You can actually converse with the computer. And no Alexa is not that sophisticated.
 
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That's because they are basically a early firm of artificial intelligence. You can actually converse with the computer. And no Alexa is not that sophisticated.

I mean, no offense, but is there anything in TOS that you won't defend? There is no reason for an A.I. to have that weird 1950s robot voice, and especially loud clunking machinery sounds. It's like something out of The Jetsons.

Re: outdated dialogue. I actually love some of that. The X-Men's Beast's "oh my stars and garters" is part of my general speaking patterns, and I like to compliment people with "you're the cat's meow" sometimes.
 
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