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USS Enterprise (eventually) on Discovery?

-Spock jettisons Kirk (This makes no sense whatsoever. Surely they have a brig? Or just a empty closet? This is not plausible behaviour. This was a hostile planet, what if that monster had eaten Kirk?)

Spock had been emotionally compromised.

-Kirk happens to land on same planet than old Spock was jettisoned earlier, they happen to meet, and they happen to find -the only other person on the planet, who happens to be the person who can build the highly implausible warp transporter.

Coincidence happens in a lot of Star Trek.

-Kirk makes Spock angry and assumes command, though he was relieved from command earlier...

Spock hadn't had time to file the paperwork. So Kirk was still technically first officer. :shrug:

I've had to come up with a lot more complicated explanations for Star Trek over the years.
 
I said I would not elaborate about ST:09, but I can't stop myself, so very briefly.

Examples of things I'd call 'bad story telling':

-Spock jettisons Kirk (This makes no sense whatsoever. Surely they have a brig? Or just a empty closet? This is not plausible behaviour. This was a hostile planet, what if that monster had eaten Kirk?)
-Kirk happens to land on same planet than old Spock was jettisoned earlier, they happen to meet, and they happen to find -the only other person on the planet, who happens to be the person who can build the highly implausible warp transporter.
-Kirk makes Spock angry and assumes command, though he was relieved from command earlier...

After this sequence of events, I just could not take the film seriously. If this doesn't bother you, fine, bothered me a lot. But this is the sort of stuff I mean. Most films have some such moments, but here the frequency just was so high that it completely ruined the film for me.

For more in depth look, I think this review points out many of the same issues I had with the film:
http://www.terminally-incoherent.com/blog/2011/02/25/2009-star-trek-reboot/
I mostly agree but Kirk and prime Spock landing on the same planet isn't even that unlikely, considering that Nero left him there to witness Vulcan's destruction and the Enterprise was approaching Vulcan. I may be misremembering, but didn't someone say that there's a near-by Starfleet base where they'd launch Kirk towards? It would make sense to me that Nero left Spock near that base, so that he has better chances of survival for witnessing his planet's death.
 
-Kirk makes Spock angry and assumes command, though he was relieved from command earlier...
Kirk was placed in the chain of command and was not relieved of that duty officially. Spock was emotionally compromised, and the crew would have been right to reject his orders.
Spock jettisons Kirk (This makes no sense whatsoever. Surely they have a brig? Or just a empty closet? This is not plausible behaviour. This was a hostile planet, what if that monster had eaten Kirk?)
There was a Starfleet outpost. Kirk was to follow protocol and wait for retrieval. The computer says as much.
 
Kirk makes Spock angry and assumes command, though he was relieved from command earlier...

Spock hadn't had time to file the paperwork. So Kirk was still technically first officer.

Kirk was placed in the chain of command
I’d suggest that Kirk being promoted to first officer (he was a cadet) was perhaps, if not bad storytelling, a little sloppy.

Like if Picard made Wesley his X/O when he came back in s7 as a moody teen.

It was a convenient plot device to get Kirk in the captain’s chair.
 
I’d suggest that Kirk being promoted to first officer (he was a cadet) was perhaps, if not bad storytelling, a little sloppy.
He was a lieutenant and inserted in to the chain of command by his commanding officer.

Could it have been done better? Sure, but it isn't implausible as often argued.
At the end of the day, that was the entire point of Star Trek (2009). To get the gang back together in the positions we knew them in.

Like everything else I've seen in entertainment, we have no idea how much was forced on creators by the corporate parent.
I often wonder if there had not been a writer's strike how the final script would have turned out.
 
At the end of the day, that was the entire point of Star Trek (2009). To get the gang back together in the positions we knew them in.

Like everything else I've seen in entertainment, we have no idea how much was forced on creators by the corporate parent.
True. I didn’t mind st09 if I’m honest. I think making Kirk XO is probably the only example of what you’d call “bad storytelling” in the film. The rest of it is (even if coincidental) acceptable and even pretty watchable. And enjoyable even after repeated viewings.
 
It was a convenient plot device to get Kirk in the captain’s chair.
Well, yeah. I think the film had too much 'We want these certain specific things to happen and we just contrive some transparently implausible stuff in between them" for my liking. A lot of storytelling kinda works like that, but good strorytellers don't make it apparent. But many films these days suffer from this, especially in adventure and action genre. Lazy storytelling which makes the supposed high points not feel earned.
 
Well, yeah. I think the film had too much 'We want these certain specific things to happen and we just contrive some transparently implausible stuff in between them" for my liking. A lot of storytelling kinda works like that, but good strorytellers don't make it apparent. But many films these days suffer from this, especially in adventure and action genre. Lazy storytelling which makes the supposed high points not feel earned.
And ultimately that one bad example from the film doesn’t matter overall. Kirk was destined to end up in the captain’s chair, and so he did. Apart from that the rest of the film is pretty good I think :)
 
He wasn’t a lieutenant in the Kelvin timeline. He was a cadet on academic suspension brought on board the Enterprise on a technicality by McCoy. It was convenient but in service of the plot overall.

He's listed as a Lieutenant on the screen where they are parachuting to Vulcan. Lieutenants at the academy aren't unheard of as Saavik was a Lieutenant in The Wrath of Khan.
 
He's listed as a Lieutenant on the screen where they are parachuting to Vulcan. Lieutenants at the academy aren't unheard of as Saavik was a Lieutenant in The Wrath of Khan.
Is he really? My apologies I’d never noticed that. I think that may be an error as there’s no dialogue to suggest that.

But... there’s that whole thing in TOS where “Lieutenant Kirk’s classes” were mentioned and he was still at the academy.

I still think it’s sloppy to take an officer *fresh* out of the academy on academic suspension who shouldn’t even be there who literally burst onto the bridge screaming like a madman and someone who seems to dislike Spock (the person responsible for Kirk’s suspension) and make him the executive officer of “starfleets newest flagship”. It was for the purposes of convenience to get Kirk in the captain’s chair and I’d suggest that’s the only example of bad storytelling in the film.
 
He wasn’t a lieutenant in the Kelvin timeline. He was a cadet on academic suspension brought on board the Enterprise on a technicality by McCoy. It was convenient but in service of the plot overall.
Yup, he was, as was Uhura.

And ultimately that one bad example from the film doesn’t matter overall. Kirk was destined to end up in the captain’s chair, and so he did. Apart from that the rest of the film is pretty good I think :)
To quote Spock:
Spock: If I may be so bold, it was a mistake for you to accept promotion. Commanding a starship is your first, best destiny; anything else is a waste of material.

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Yup, he was, as was Uhura
Apologies I missed that! Still, it’s a questionable command decision to advance an officer on suspension from the academy (he wasn’t posted to space duty don’t forget) just because he was there. What if Picard had tried to promote ensign Ro to first officer when she first came aboard? That’s the one case in the whole film that is motivated by convenience rather than logic imo.

Spock: If I may be so bold, it was a mistake for you to accept promotion. Commanding a starship is your first, best destiny; anything else is a waste of material.
Whilst I agree with Spock in that quote, the James T Kirk he was referring to had a very different life up to that point so it’s not really relevant to a discussion of the Kelvin timeline Kirk.

Unless the multiverse is guided by some kind of omnipotent overlord that ensures the parallel characteristics of the same individuals across all of existence.
 
It really depends on what sort of thing one appreciates. For me the plots of the two first Kelvin films were too much based on series of implausible coincidences and characters behaving illogically that I could truly enjoy them. Whilst Beyond was no way flawless, there I felt that both the plot and characterisation were way more coherent, if somewhat simple, so I liked it much more. I could go into specifics, but that is probably best left for another thread.
I'm with you for the first two, but Beyond, whilst I agree was a little more coherent, was an even worse movie.

Imho anyway.
 
Apologies I missed that! Still, it’s a questionable command decision to advance an officer on suspension from the academy (he wasn’t posted to space duty don’t forget) just because he was there. What if Picard had tried to promote ensign Ro to first officer when she first came aboard? That’s the one case in the whole film that is motivated by convenience rather than logic imo.
It is nepotism, given Pike's interest in Kirk. He also pays for it in the next film and requires more development. In my opinion, that is the best part of the story.

Whilst I agree with Spock in that quote, the James T Kirk he was referring to had a very different life up to that point so it’s not really relevant to a discussion of the Kelvin timeline Kirk.

Unless the multiverse is guided by some kind of omnipotent overlord that ensures the parallel characteristics of the same individuals across all of existence.
Destiny does not imply life experience. It implies preordination. So, yes, it is. ;)
 
It is nepotism, given Pike's interest in Kirk. He also pays for it in the next film and requires more development. In my opinion, that is the best part of the story.


Destiny does not imply life experience. It implies preordination. So, yes, it is. ;)
Fair points :) that’s made me reconsider 09 a little bit actually
 
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