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Spoilers Star Trek: Discovery 1x14 - "The War Without, The War Within"

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No, Captain Killy's ship could not have had the spore drive, because its existence was news to the Emperor and made her consider a trade - the freedom of our heroes for the secret of the drive.

A transporter swap may happen by accident if there are two transporters, one at both universes ("Mirror, Mirror" and supposedly also how Lorca got swapped) - or then with just one suitably rigged transporter (the DS9 trick). A spore drive swap probably has both alternatives, too.

Timo Saloniemi
 
I remember when "Spock's Brain" and "The Way to Eden" was the worst two hours in Trek history.
Then it was Star Trek: The Motion Picture.
Then it was Star Trek V: The Final Frontier.
Then it was "Code of Honor" and "Skin of Evil".
Then it was Star Trek: Generations.
Then it was "Profit and Lace" and "Let He Who Is Without Sin".
Then it was "Threshold" and "Fair Haven".
Then it was Star Trek: Insurrection.
Then it was Star Trek: Nemesis.
Then it was "Unexpected" and "These Are The Voyages".

IMO, nothing of what Disco has done yet has come close. A few missteps, yes, but not wholesale bad.
See, this is the sort of attitude I hate. I always talk pros and cons when I review episodes, yet you mak any criticism and you get the straw man nonsense that you’re saying it “wholesale bad”.
 
I'm curious why Ash Tyler is even allowed to remain on the ship. He has been stripped of rank and duty, is a known Klingon plant, and the ship is apparently going to attack the Klingon Homeworld, and nobody thinks to send him away? The Discovery is not a pleasure cruise, if you don't have a job, you shouldn't be on board.
 
Re the mess hall scene. It was overdone. Had Tilly gone and perhaps Detmar, it would have meant more. Having everyone crowding around Ash like he was their BFF was just not realistic and yanked me right out of the scene.

But Tilly, given how she was around Burnham at first, having just her go would have shown her growth and maturity. No more did she need the approval of the Kewl Kids; she would do what was right. And Detmar held Burnham to blame for events and her coming too would have shown that she had learned that sometimes people aren't all bad or are redeemable.

But no, it had to be a Hallmark Awwwwwww moment. Totally ruined what could have a been a powerful scene.
 
Re the mess hall scene. It was overdone. Had Tilly gone and perhaps Detmar, it would have meant more. Having everyone crowding around Ash like he was their BFF was just not realistic and yanked me right out of the scene.

But Tilly, given how she was around Burnham at first, having just her go would have shown her growth and maturity. No more did she need the approval of the Kewl Kids; she would do what was right. And Detmar held Burnham to blame for events and her coming too would have shown that she had learned that sometimes people aren't all bad or are redeemable.

But no, it had to be a Hallmark Awwwwwww moment. Totally ruined what could have a been a powerful scene.
I agree. As played, the scene seems hokey and unrealistic. But Tilly going over by herself would have been great, a thematic reversal of the 'assigned seats' thing from CifK.
 
I liked this episode far more than I expected to, now my favourite character is gone.

The highlight for me was Sarek and Georgiou having their weird who-was-the-better-parent spat.

I was totally confused by the "100 AU from Earth"/picture of a Starbase orbiting Earth/the Klingons have conquered the Starbase but are ignoring the planet stuff, but that's got it's own thread. It's one of those rare times Trek goes beyond a simple one-line blunder and I still have no clue the scope of the invasion. Was that Earth and a script error? Another world and a VFX error?

Also I wonder how Cornwell ever became an Admiral (after somehow being a counsellor?), she totally froze up after the confusing scene above. Perhaps she didn't know either:lol:

I can totally buy Tilly sitting with Tyler, but everyone was far too chill around him considering what happened to Culber. The others coming along and sitting down was a bit much. Staments' reaction to Tyler was genuine, in character and believable.
 
I'm curious why Ash Tyler is even allowed to remain on the ship. He has been stripped of rank and duty, is a known Klingon plant, and the ship is apparently going to attack the Klingon Homeworld, and nobody thinks to send him away? The Discovery is not a pleasure cruise, if you don't have a job, you shouldn't be on board.
Whilst I can just about swallow the whole "restricted access" thing by Saru, the moment Ash admits to Michael that it's Michael that has been the key to "recovering/maintaining Ash" (whether he's referring to the pre-exorcism or now) I feel it was Michael's duty to tell Cornwall/Saru that Ash is now a greater potential threat and should be restricted to quarters/locked up. She made a big deal about serving her penance early in the season - why, given the frankly ominous admission by Ash, is she not applying similar standards. Caution alone should make her act, whatever feelings she still has internally and refused to admit to him.
 
I dunno seems plausible to me.

If no one else knows, than no one else knows.

I mean crazier deceptions have happened even in our times.
Yeah, but why would they have to deceive the crew of Discovery? As others have been saying, they just returned from an alternate universe where everyone has a double and now suddenly there's Captain Georgiou, risen from the dead. Makes them look pretty stupid if they can't put one and one together there. Don't have to be Sherlock Holmes to figure that one out. Why does she have to pass as the captain of the ship anyway? If they need her help, why can't she simple be an advisor? This whole thing doesn't make a lot of sense.

Personally I think it is a bunch of pretty likeable characters (the few remaining ones that have not yet been killed or revealed to be evil doppelgängers, anyway) trapped in a really nonsensical and badly written plot.

I really hope that the clusterfuck that has been this season is the result of Fuller's departure mid production, and we get something more coherent next season. The actors are good and giving their all, they deserve better.
Pretty much how I feel as well. I don't hate the series, far from it. I'd love to love it. I really like the characters, the design and the setting. But everything else, the dialog, the plot, the twists and revelations are getting more and more tedious to watch. I really hope season two will be a massive improvement. It just has to be.

I think I'm missing something. Did ISS Discovery have a spore drive? Is there any reason that the ships would swap places?
No, no reason at all. Other than apparently the fact that the writers didn't want to deal with the other Discovery. Looking back it doesn't make a whole lot of sense from a writing perspective to establish that the ISS Discovery went to the regular universe in the first place if you are not going to do ANYTHING with it. Might as well just have told us that it was destroyed in the Mirror universe before the regular Discovery arrives. Really seems like clumsy writing if they set up stuff like this only to never pay it off or just wrap it up in a throwaway one-liner. The Voq/Tyler thing was handled equally as appealingly. Or when they introduce Mirror Stamets just to kill him off an episode later. Or Kol being this big antagonist, only to be disposed of pretty unceremonially midway through the season.

Re the mess hall scene. It was overdone. Had Tilly gone and perhaps Detmar, it would have meant more. Having everyone crowding around Ash like he was their BFF was just not realistic and yanked me right out of the scene.

But Tilly, given how she was around Burnham at first, having just her go would have shown her growth and maturity. No more did she need the approval of the Kewl Kids; she would do what was right. And Detmar held Burnham to blame for events and her coming too would have shown that she had learned that sometimes people aren't all bad or are redeemable.

But no, it had to be a Hallmark Awwwwwww moment. Totally ruined what could have a been a powerful scene.
Couldn't agree more. The whole scene didn't ring true. Tilly being the one at least trying to talk to him makes kind of sense, but the other crewmembers? No way.
 
You really need to watch more TOS as the '"utopian idealism" mold' you describe WASN'T a part of Star Trek (which began with TOS 1966-69) from the beginning...
With all due respect, TOS is hands-down my favorite Star Trek series, and the only one of which I have watched every single episode, more than once. I'll stand by what I said: the utopian futurism of the show was there from the very beginning. TNG may have extrapolated (some of) it further, but it didn't originate it and it most assuredly wasn't a retcon. There are plenty of people who were fans before 1987 who can testify to this.

It was clear that the Federation was a society built around egalitarianism and freedom. Nationalism has been left in the past, as had material scarcity and the vices it engendered. People didn't work "for a living," they worked for personal satisfaction and self-realization. The Federation was clearly a post-capitalist society, without money, as Kirk himself mentioned in STIV:TVH (still before TNG). When you bring up examples like Harry Mudd or Cyrano Jones, the thing to remember about TOS is that the Enterprise was out at the frontier, dealing with societies that were not part of the Federation, whether by choice or because they hadn't yet had the chance to join, ranging from colonies and outposts to full-fledged interstellar governments. (The Federation had no death penalty, for instance — Talos IV aside — so if Deneb V did then it obviously wasn't a member.) These other societies certainly could and did have economies of their own, and it makes sense that "Federation credits" were what the UFP used when it had to trade with such societies, but that says nothing about how things were conducted within the UFP. We never even visited any of the homeworlds (except Vulcan, just once, for a ceremonial occasion).

...in the TOS era, the Federation let member worlds KEEP their own laws and racial/social traditions, no matter what they were - and respected a Member Planet's local laws EVEN IF they didn't align with Earth's societal norms.
I'm curious what example(s) you're thinking of there, because none spring to mind.

So... As far as anyone knows, the Discovery was lost in battle. The Mirror Universe is to be kept top secret. Emperor Georgiou is put in charge of the ship and they're sent on this mission to Qo'nos.... Anyone else get the feeling this is a suicide mission, and Cornwell is hoping to take care of all these problems in one fell swoop?
What you say makes a certain kind of nasty sense... but the more I thought about it, the more I decided that nothing we've seen of Cornwell makes her seem that ruthless and conniving. Disillusioned, yes, but that's not the same thing.

I remember when the federation recruited the most terrible dictator and genocide in the history of the earth to help them defeat the Klingons in a war
[pic of Khan]
I don't remember Khan ever being described as the most terrible dictator in history, much less a genocidal one. On the contrary, in "Space Seed," Scotty admitted to "a sneaking admiration" for him and mentioned that "there were no massacres under his rule"; McCoy specified that there were "no wars until he was attacked"; and Kirk called him "the best of the tyrants." His rule wasn't known for freedom, true, but comparing him to a bloodthirsty maniac like Georgiou is ridiculous.

The whole klingon war story-arc is one BIG clusterfuck of a botched arc. Holy hell.
Forget how it clashes with canon - It's just bad. Like, this is suddenly the most dire war the Federation has ever fought. Closer to the brink of defeat than they were even against the Borg and the Dominion - and the show SKIPPED the whole thing? ...
Great post, calling out some real whoppers in the storytelling. Unlike you I rather liked the Stamets/Tyler scene, but other than that I think you're on the money. This whole storyline has been a mess. I'm beginning to wonder if this show has any professional advisers or consultants on military affairs, government, or diplomacy, never mind the science stuff. TOS always had experts consulting on its stories, but with DSC, sometimes it seems like the writers are just making it all up as they go, with no reality checks at all.

...What could make sense of this whole mess of a story would be if the mirror universe were a metaphor for the darker side of our nature, which we actually need to survive because that is where our survival instincts reside. ... With this in mind, what the writers would be doing by installing MU Georgiou as captain, would be the equivalent of reaching into our darker natures and finding the will to survive.

If it were to go that route then the next step would be Starfleet committing an atrocity and threatening to commit more (like Hiroshima and Nagasaki), putting the Klingons in the position of facing the extinction of their species, and thus ending the war. I know a lot of people will be uncomfortable with this scenario, but I am fairly certain that the majority of men (maybe not woman) reading this will know deep down in their hearts that this is what we would do if we were in their position.

Of course we have the luxury of living in a time when not all human males have been neutered, so our perspective is obviously going to be different from utopian Starfleet. It might be difficult to find an un-neutered human male among the almost all female cast portraying humans on Discovery...
You know, you were offering some interesting (if disquieting) speculations about the show's themes... until you suddenly went full MRA in the middle of the post. Yikes. Speaking as a guy (stereotypical straight white male American, no less), I can assure you that even deep down in my heart I would not commit genocide to end a war... and I'd hope that the vast majority of civilized human beings, male or female, would say the same thing.

There are lots of ways to find "the will to survive" that don't involve sacrificing what makes us human, and that's not "sanctimonious tripe" nor "politically correct." Really, that's a big part of what Star Trek has always been about.

[regarding definitions of treason] They're at war. Rules are more strict, punishment more harsh.
Umm, no. The law remains the law, in wartime as in peacetime. That's true even today, and I can't imagine the Federation would be less civilized. Why do you imagine otherwise?

Keeping the true nature of Georgiou a secret from actual Academy trained crew is just another joke on them, hell they're used to being led by the nose by mirror captains. Bad enough that mirror Lorca was not Starfleet and went unknown, but to sanction Georgiou? One has to believe it will be revealed as a ruse.
One certainly does hope so. Unfortunately, revealing it will presumably also mean Cornwell takes the fall for it, which will cost us another good recurring character, one who showed a lot of potential until she was saddled with this storyline.

A lot of people have been saying that it's easy to keep MU Phillipa a secret...but didn't she appear as a hologram in front of the whole bridge crew in "The Wolf Inside?"
That was on the Shenzhou.
...The only prime people who saw her then were Burnham and the now deceased Lorca. She's not even visible in the transmissions to the Discovery from the Throne room of the ISS Charon.
I also flashed back to her holo-appearance on the bridge at first, before I recalled that was on the MU Shenzou. Probably a side-effect of the bridge sets looking so similar, with almost indistinguishable color schemes, lighting, and camera angles.

That said, putting this in perspective, it seems shamefully obvious that the last few episodes were written as they were... right down to the Emperor being mysteriously nameless to most denizens of the MU... specifically (and only) so the writers could set up this "twist" with MU Georgiou replacing her counterpart. Evidently they felt so strongly that this was a story worth telling that they carefully constructed previous events, however implausibly, just to make it possible. I can't say as I agree... so far, I find it gimmicky and offensive, and I'm hard-pressed to imagine what could happen next week to change that impression.

JI *really* hope we can keep Michelle Yeoh around for a few more episodes delivering the kind of MU sass we now have come to expect from her week to week.
Can't agree at all. I find her boring, clichéd, and tiresome.

This is a contrivance too far? Really? Not space salamandars? Or bloodless brain transplants? Temporary gender swapping? 50-foot Vulcans? Sentient holodecks? The gazelle speech? Really?
The fact that you're comparing this particular contrivance to some of the worst stories in the history of Star Trek says a lot about the level DSC is operating on here.
 
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People didn't work "for a living," they worked for personal satisfaction and self-realization.

The reason there's a huge and unending debate on this point is that it is far from this succinct and clear.
""Well, the Federation has spent a lot of money on our training." - Kirk
""You just earned your pay for the week!" - also Kirk
Plus the infamous 'just bought a boat' line in TUC, which post dated TNG and the Voyage Home line about money.
You can dismiss all these as figures of speech of you wish, but given that the first indication that the TOS era is moneyless is TVH, I'd submit that it is a retcon.


I'm curious what example(s) you're thinking of there, because none spring to mind.

Vulcan is the obvious example - Amok Time shows the Vulcans take part in barbaric rituals which are seemingly tolerated in the Federation.

The law remains the law, in wartime as in peacetime. That's true even today, and I can't imagine the Federation would be less civilized. Why do you imagine otherwise?
We've explicitly seen more than once that the Federation are willing to look the other way in time of war, bend their principles to avoid it, and be underhanded to win it. Even TNG, the flag carrier for the utopian future, engaged in this. Starfleet ordered Picard to use a genocidal weapon if given the chance again, engaged in forced relocation of colonists to satisfy Cardassian colonial ambitions, and earlier looked the other way as Cardassians rearmed and committed atrocities on Bajor. Then DS9 introduced a literal war, and we saw numerous examples of rule breaking and principles going out the window. They even called an episode Inter Arma Enim Silent Leges.
 
I still chuckle at that (very) old joke that TMP is "Star Trek: The Slow Motion Picture". I admit I have come to appreciate the movie more over the years (for instance I now definitely place it above ST5) but I still think TWOK and TUC are the pinnacles. I still think ST4 was schlocky and though good entertainment deviated too far from what ST was meant to be about - and don't like how easy they made time travel be. It merely served as a way to get back to Kirk as Captain and a sort-of soft-reboot.
 
Apparently moderators don't troll ;)
He/she responded to my comment with an unrelated quote for the express purpose of trying to be clever and get a rise out of me. If said person is a mod they should know better. Sadly I don’t post here enough to have the “feel” of the mods here. But what I would like to think is that we can have a mixed opinion on an episode without being misteprented and derided by someone else and then have that behaviour support by a mod.
 
It's not that I'm against Star Trek philosophy, which is actually pretty much in line with my own, it's the peachiness of it in this version that annoys me. It seems to me that Michael has been doing an inordinate amount of speechifying.

As opposed to Kirk and Picard right?

God knows, cant have a Black Woman preaching all bout our “Better Angels” and holding ourselves to a higher standard...
 
He/she responded to my comment with an unrelated quote for the express purpose of trying to be clever and get a rise out of me. If said person is a mod they should know better. Sadly I don’t post here enough to have the “feel” of the mods here. But what I would like to think is that we can have a mixed opinion on an episode without being misteprented and derided by someone else and then have that behaviour support by a mod.
I was going to ignore this little sideline so it didn't become a full derailment but it seems that's impossible. You posted a one line dismissal of an entire film as the worst two hours of Trek ever, then complained at the attitude of dismissing hours of Trek out of hand without nuance. It seemed perfectly reasonable to point out you'd done the exact same thing a couple of pages earlier. If you disagree, you can say so. But it's not the done thing to call other people trolls here.
 
Vulcan is the obvious example - Amok Time shows the Vulcans take part in barbaric rituals which are seemingly tolerated in the Federation.
"Honestly, I never understood Vulcan mysticism." ;)

I'll grant you, "Amok Time" was a pretty darn strange depiction of what we'd previously been led to believe was a very logical and scientific culture, and while the koon-ut-kal-if-fee was obviously an ancient ritual, it's possible that it's the sort of thing that would not be countenanced elsewhere in the Federation. However, if there was one world that was ever in a position to get special dispensation for certain things, it was Vulcan, the most powerful and influential of the Federation's founding members. (That founding undoubtedly had to involve a few diplomatic political compromises, after all, much like the US Constitution.)

However, I don't think that solitary example really supports Noname's broader assertion that "the Federation let member worlds KEEP their own laws and racial/social traditions, no matter what they were - and respected a Member Planet's local laws EVEN IF they didn't align with Earth's societal norms." I suppose you could argue a technicality on that second part, if only because presumably other member worlds would have no reason to submit to Earth's particular legal or societal norms — but the norms of the UFP as a whole would be another matter. (The extent to which those broader UFP norms happened to correspond with Earth's, or more specifically with 20th century America's, is of course ripe for debate.)

Honestly, how many actual member worlds did we even see in TOS (as opposed to colonies, outposts, or Starbases)? Granted several were represented in "Journey to Babel," but I don't recall anything from that episode that would support the broad assertion either.

We've explicitly seen more than once that the Federation are willing to look the other way in time of war, bend their principles to avoid it, and be underhanded to win it. Even TNG, the flag carrier for the utopian future, engaged in this...
No argument. But that's about matters of policy, strategy, and tactics. The specific point at hand was another matter; it was about the law, suggesting that the very definition of treason would change (and/or punishment would be harsher) in time of war... but that's just not how the law works.
 
I was going to ignore this little sideline so it didn't become a full derailment but it seems that's impossible. You posted a one line dismissal of an entire film as the worst two hours of Trek ever, then complained at the attitude of dismissing hours of Trek out of hand without nuance. It seemed perfectly reasonable to point out you'd done the exact same thing a couple of pages earlier. If you disagree, you can say so. But it's not the done thing to call other people trolls here.
First it all, I don’t care your for your patronising tone. I am not your lesser.

Secondly, I never complained about dismissing hours of Trek. I complained about misrepresentation of my mixed view of Discovery as “wholesale bad”. Completely different from what you claim. My personal opinion of Into Darkness has nothing to do with that (and, yes, im my personally opinion they are the worst two hours of Trek to date).

You took a potshot against someone unnecessarily, trying to be clever, and now you’re doubling down on it and treating me like an inferior. I don’t care for that sort of behaviour to be honest, mod or not.
 
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