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Titan: And the issue of Abortion (Destiny Spoilers)

Lwaxana said a Betazoid (tho Troi is only half) can sense their babies

I don't mean to force my politics, but can you imagine what such a thing would do to the abortion rate?

Lower it, I'm guessing? If they're mentally tied- can feel their contentment to be in there, as Lwaxana described it, then it would be hard to end that life. Especially later on- how long is a Betazoid's pregnancy? Human brainwaves are detectable at 6 weeks, 10 weeks they have facial expressions like frowning, so they're probably expressing emotions.

I'd say, since human babies have a nervous system at around 11 weeks, and can definitely feel pain with it at 12 weeks, you'd rarely see abortions after that comparable time for Betazoids, unless modern abortions are painless and immediate. Otherwise, due to the empathic nature of Betazoids, even if the mother's lives were in danger, the mental issues of the mother wouldn't go away due to the abortion. Deanna had that connection to the baby that gave her the radiation in the first place- she refused to terminate it then too- I got the impression that was due in part to her empathic connection with it.

Yeah, that's where I was going with that. Even a painless and immediate abortion would likely be fairly traumatic for the mother all things considered.
 
Re: Titan: Over a Torrent Sea (SPOILERS)

I agree.
And, slightly OT, from Battle for Betazed, did TNG the series show that Betazoids were pacifists who didn't like to take life, as soldiers etc., or does that only exist in lit? I haven't watched a lot of TNG.

Then I found out Deanna had already lost a baby, that she really, really wanted one, and Riker did, and that if she lost this one, she couldn't conceive again. So her desperation to hang on to the baby made a bit more sense emotionally.

That's not quite accurate. Before her treatment by the Caeliar, Deanna's ova were incapable of producing a viable fetus at all, full stop, and that future attempts at conception would be nearly guaranteed to produce non-viable fetuses. It wouldn't be worthwhile, anyway, since the Eichner-related damage to her reproductive system had created serious potential for health problems including cancer.

I felt Troi's behaviour throughout to be quite believable, from her anguish and rage at the news of her second fetus' non-viability to her grief on learning the cause of what happened to her subsequent denial. It was touching.

I don't think I replied to this post?

Anyway, I know that part of it from the book. What I meant was- at the time, she knew that Ree wanted to have her reproductive parts removed to prevent further pregnancy because of that risk. And even tho the already conceived child was going to die, because she had already been so traumatized by her other miscarriage, she was desperate to hold onto the child at all costs, even what was at the time a lost cause.

I agree that she should have gone off duty or taken a leave for this.
I know she didn't like Ree after he gave that news, but it wasn't a good idea for her to remain on active duty... that was just... stubbornness on her part.

On the "quote" issue- sometimes the quotes mess up on me too when I'm replying, random people's posts won't show up. I don't think it was Sci's but it was annoying... but rare.
 
Re: Titan: Over a Torrent Sea

We need to go back and define "military" and "militaristic." They're not the same thing, and "militaristic" is not an adjective form of "military." (The word "military" is usually used as its own adjective form, but the word "martial" is also an adjective for "Military.")

All the discussion of militaristic vs. martial aside - I simply don't see Starfleet as military. At least not in its entirety. Sorry.

I simply shudder at the mere thought of TV-Troi in command of a ship at war. She isn't trained in battle tactics, she has not even basic ideas of engineering etc. She'd do fine on a ship meant for diplomatic missions, but definitely not in battles. In times of major crises, Starfleet will of course fall back on all its ships, but in times of peace I do think that there are different sections to Starfleet - and only one of them is, what I'd call military. And to suddenly apply to *all of them* such a strict code goes against every notion I ever had about Starfleet.

The Titan does have several civilians and families on it, so that certainly would have been an option for a theoretical Citizen Troi.

But would she have been able to stay on as counselor, i.e. being able to work with the crew or just with the few civilians?

I'm not sure I see how there's a contradiction between a CMO being able to force you to undergo treatment and the capacity to have a personal life.

I meant to point out that there's a contradiction in the way it's shown that officers are free to lead their lives as they wish (even sleeping around with every colleague they find as if *that* wouldn't disrupt a ship's mission), and the way that freedom is curtailed by giving someone more or less free reign over one part of that life. It just doesn't fit together IMO.
 
Re: Titan: Over a Torrent Sea

We need to go back and define "military" and "militaristic." They're not the same thing, and "militaristic" is not an adjective form of "military." (The word "military" is usually used as its own adjective form, but the word "martial" is also an adjective for "Military.")

All the discussion of militaristic vs. martial aside - I simply don't see Starfleet as military. At least not in its entirety. Sorry.

I simply shudder at the mere thought of TV-Troi in command of a ship at war. She isn't trained in battle tactics, she has not even basic ideas of engineering etc. She'd do fine on a ship meant for diplomatic missions, but definitely not in battles. In times of major crises, Starfleet will of course fall back on all its ships, but in times of peace I do think that there are different sections to Starfleet - and only one of them is, what I'd call military. And to suddenly apply to *all of them* such a strict code goes against every notion I ever had about Starfleet.

I'm sorry if you don't like the idea, but it's the reality of the situation. Starfleet is the Federation's armed forces, in addition to being its exploratory corps. That doesn't mean that Starfleet is militaristic, but it is a military. And much as you might shudder at Troi being in charge of a ship, it's important to remember that she passed the Bridge Officer's Training test that she needed to pass to gain the capacity to hold such command -- because she was willing and able to order someone to their death to protect the ship. She's got a harder edge than you're giving her credit for.

Yes, it's true that different branches of Starfleet specialize in different mission types. This is also true of current militaries -- not everyone in the Army could become part of the Army Corps of Engineers, and not everyone is a combat officer. That doesn't mean Starfleet isn't a military. It's a military that does far more than fight wars, in part because Federation political culture has evolved to a point where they recognize that exploration, peace-building, and diplomacy are equally important tools of national defense as combat. But it's still a military in the legal sense of the term, and every indication is that all Starfleet officers are subject to Starfleet regulations and the Uniform Code.

The Titan does have several civilians and families on it, so that certainly would have been an option for a theoretical Citizen Troi.

But would she have been able to stay on as counselor, i.e. being able to work with the crew or just with the few civilians?

Well, ship's counselor is an officer's position within the medical department of Starfleet, so probably not. But it is important to remember that if she was truly committed to attempting to carry the fetus to term even if it meant dying, she did retain the option of resigning her commission.

I'm not sure I see how there's a contradiction between a CMO being able to force you to undergo treatment and the capacity to have a personal life.

I meant to point out that there's a contradiction in the way it's shown that officers are free to lead their lives as they wish (even sleeping around with every colleague they find as if *that* wouldn't disrupt a ship's mission), and the way that freedom is curtailed by giving someone more or less free reign over one part of that life. It just doesn't fit together IMO.

But Starfleet officers don't have as much freedom as you're implying. There are several health-related regulations that inhibit an officer's liberty while commissioned:

Health-Related
"All research personnel on alien planets are required to have their health certified by a starship surgeon at one-year intervals." (TOS: "The Man Trap")
"The ship's surgeon will require a full examination of any crew member that he has doubts about, including the Captain." (TOS: "Turnabout Intruder")
"Nothing shall be beamed aboard until danger of contamination has been eliminated. Beaming down to the surface (of a planet) IS permitted, if the Captain decides the mission is vital, and reasonably free of danger". (Star Trek III: The Search for Spock; VOY: "Macrocosm")
"The Chief Medical Officer outranks the captain in health matters." (VOY: "Persistence of Vision")
A captain cannot order a doctor to violate doctor-patient confidentiality, except in situations of ship security. (VOY: "Fury")
"All Starfleet personnel must obtain authorization from their CO as well as clearance from their medical officer before initiating an intimate relationship with an alien species." (VOY: "The Disease")
 
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I was thinking more of the period between approximately 1500 and 1900, actually; European states often relied upon their navies to serve as explorers. That we do not do so today is more a function of the fact that, well, the world's been charted and there are no more unknown lands.
Actually, I think the Navy does play a pretty big role in a lot of the exploratory and scientific stuff that is going on in the oceans today. I'm pretty sure our modern day militaries are actually alot more involved in the sciences than most peopl think.

I'm actually kinda suprised by the number of people who don't think Starfleet is the UFPs military. I always thought it was made very clear in the shows that that was the case.
 
The TOS examples make sense. The last Voyager one much less - and that doesn`t surprise me.

There was even a regulation like "If there is a disagreement between the captains of two ships, the captain of the most powerful one wins." This is idiotic.

And in modern Star Trek, do officers who want to have a relationship with an alien (What does that mean? Someone who is not human?) really go to their captain and CMO asking for their approval!? I don`t think so.

Sometimes it is right that rules are being challenged. Sometimes it is even necessary.
 
The TOS examples make sense. The last Voyager one much less - and that doesn`t surprise me.

There was even a regulation like "If there is a disagreement between the captains of two ships, the captain of the most powerful one wins." This is idiotic.

And in modern Star Trek, do officers who want to have a relationship with an alien (What does that mean? Someone who is not human?) really go to their captain and CMO asking for their approval!? I don`t think so.

I think it's obvious that the "alien" reference refers to non-Federation species. And, yes, "The Disease" makes it clear that if they want to engage in sexual relations with an alien lifeform, particularly newly-discovered ones, they need permission from their Commanding and Chief Medical Officers.

Sometimes it is right that rules are being challenged. Sometimes it is even necessary.

Which is fair enough, but that's different from willful disregard for the rules.
 
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"All research personnel on alien planets are required to have their health certified by a starship surgeon at one-year intervals." (TOS: "The Man Trap")
"The ship's surgeon will require a full examination of any crew member that he has doubts about, including the Captain." (TOS: "Turnabout Intruder")
"Nothing shall be beamed aboard until danger of contamination has been eliminated. Beaming down to the surface (of a planet) IS permitted, if the Captain decides the mission is vital, and reasonably free of danger". (Star Trek III: The Search for Spock; VOY: "Macrocosm")
"The Chief Medical Officer outranks the captain in health matters." (VOY: "Persistence of Vision")
A captain cannot order a doctor to violate doctor-patient confidentiality, except in situations of ship security. (VOY: "Fury")
"All Starfleet personnel must obtain authorization from their CO as well as clearance from their medical officer before initiating an intimate relationship with an alien species." (VOY: "The Disease")

I'd like to exclude TOS from the whole discussion, honestly, because back then there were no civilians on board, no counselors etc. And frankly, I'd have liked to see the discussion between Kirk and McCoy every time Kirk wanted to get laid.

And the fact of the matter remains: Ship security - what exactly does that mean? Did Ree have the right to turn to Vale for advice? Was that such a situation where the ship's security was at risk? I'm sorry, but nothing so far convinced me that Ree, in the particular situation portrayed in GoN, didn't overstep the line... even the one drawn by that military code.

(Honestly, the whole discussion and what I've read of Over a Torrent Sea so far rather convinces me of the fact that everything would be better off if there were no relationships on ships. Riker turning to Troi and arguing with her whether to go down to the planet "because the baby could be born at any moment" in front of all the others in the briefing... That was just the tip of the iceberg. Hello?!? As an officer on Titan, I'd begin to wonder what comes first for my captain - his ship/mission or his family. This is a discussion that should be private and not held in front of the crew.

This really threatens to turn into a major space soap opera, concentrating on who's sleeping with whom etc.. I don't watch such programmes on TV, I don't read such novels, so I'm not exactly happy reading about the different love affairs of Lavena, Ra-Havreii, Pazlar and where they have sex and what it feels like in the different environments etc. in Titan. And I thought Trip and T'Pol behaved like adolescents... And now, somebody should please explain to me why in these matters there apparently are no rules in military-like Starfleet.

It's unfortunate that so much of the first 100 pages of OatS is spent on who/where/when because the mission setup is a really exciting one.

Mind you, my criticism isn't aimed at CLB or OatS in particular but at Titan in general because these were issues that bothered me from the beginning of the series. I only name Titan because I'm not familiar enough with TNG-relaunch or the other modern series to make the same claim.)

For what it's worth: I'm not so much criticizing the fact that there *are* rules, but rather the fact that those rules are very unevenly, or rather arbitrarily placed.
 
Ree wanted to jump ahead and force that hysterectomy on Troi when an abortion would have sufficed for the immediate crisis. And that's the difference here.

I read that as Ree pointing out a serious health problem and wanting to resolve it as quickly as possible. He was alarmed enough to wake her up in the middle of the night.

And sorry, but somehow I find it a bit incredible that 370 years from now there's no cure for cancer - a bit of gene manipulation on the malign cells and everything's alright again... and if they have to remove an organ - why not grow it back, they did it with Worf's spinal cord after all...

I blame the technological milieu's biases against genetic engineering. The Eugenics War was centuries ago, people, and the Klingons were incompetent genetic engineers!

Seriously, there must be a human civilization out there, independent of the Federation, that uses genetic engineering and is actually quite sane.

There was no hint that her uterus itself was damaged by the radiation, just her eggs.

He didn't say that, no. He told her first that the Eichner radiation caused very serious mutations of her mitochondrial DNA, then told her that the radiation caused massive mutations in her ova such that they were incapable of producing a viable fetus.

I don't think he had to mention the uterus: If the Eichner radiation caused such damage to her ova, how much damage would it have caused to the uterus in which Ian Andrew gestated for 36 hours, 4 hours being the minimum needed to cause said damage? Her fertility problems might well have stemmed equally from the damage to her ova and the damage to her uterus. Ree mentioned oncological complications stemming from the damage--if the problem related only to her ova, then as someone upthread pointed out there's no reason why she couldn't become a mother using donated eggs. The fact that he didn't allow for this possiblility says much, IMHO.

I find it implausible that Ree would prescribe such a physically invasive and psychologically traumatic surgery as a hysterectomy without good cause. No one disagreed with his diagnosis, for whatever it's worth; everyone accepted it as just another tragedy. For whatever reason, the technologies at his disposal just couldn't cope with the Eichner-related damage to her reproductive tract, Troi's ova and other reproductive organs were irreparably damaged, and the long-time health risks were such that keeping them would pose a serious threat to her. There had been only the one study done on the effects of Eichner radiation done four years before. Who knows what the complications would be?
 
Seriously, there must be a human civilization out there, independent of the Federation, that uses genetic engineering and is actually quite sane.

In TNG's The Masterpiece Society, the Enterprise encountered a genetically engineered human society that are sane enough, but the colony had other problems.

Picard said this about them...

"They’ve given away their Humanity with this genetic manipulation. Many of the qualities that they breed out – the uncertainty, self-discovery, the unknown – these are many of the qualities that make life worth living. I wouldn’t want to live my life knowing that my future was written, that my boundaries had been already set."
 
In TNG's The Masterpiece Society, the Enterprise encountered a genetically engineered human society that are sane enough, but the colony had other problems.

Picard said this about them...

"They’ve given away their Humanity with this genetic manipulation. Many of the qualities that they breed out – the uncertainty, self-discovery, the unknown – these are many of the qualities that make life worth living. I wouldn’t want to live my life knowing that my future was written, that my boundaries had been already set."

Sure, but they were just taking it to the opposite extreme of exceptional inhibition, planning everything in minute detail and being positively xenophobic in their isolationism. Why not a culture of humans who make use of genetic engineering and who are still people, more capable than the human norm but otherwise as functional as any number of species more capable than baseline humans?
 
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He (and you BTW) thought, let's deal with the current crisis and then take care of the rest - but in handling the situation differently from the beginning, further problems could perhaps have been avoided entirely.

How?

I wouldn't know how to go about telling a woman that, not only was she incapable of bearing a child and that her current pregnancy was bound for tragedy, but that he reproductive system was in such poor shape that she needed to remove it, as soon as possible. I'm asking this non-ironically and non-sarcastically--what strategy would a doctor use to broach this topic?
 
Sure, but they were just taking it to the opposite extreme of exceptional inhibition, planning everything in minute detail and being positively xenophobic in their isolationism. Why not a culture of humans who make use of genetic engineering and who are still people, more capable than the human norm but otherwise as functional as any number of species more capable than baseline humans?

I'm still waiting for Our Heroes (tm) to discover a truly diverse, reasonably un-technophobic and imaginative civilisation to take the existing ST universe on a rollarcoaster ride.

And the best part is it barely requires any shooting to keep things interesting. No doubt this will come as a great relief after the Destiny trilogy.
 
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There was no hint that her uterus itself was damaged by the radiation, just her eggs.
He didn't say that, no. He told her first that the Eichner radiation caused very serious mutations of her mitochondrial DNA, then told her that the radiation caused massive mutations in her ova such that they were incapable of producing a viable fetus.

I don't think he had to mention the uterus: If the Eichner radiation caused such damage to her ova, how much damage would it have caused to the uterus in which Ian Andrew gestated for 36 hours, 4 hours being the minimum needed to cause said damage? Her fertility problems might well have stemmed equally from the damage to her ova and the damage to her uterus. Ree mentioned oncological complications stemming from the damage--if the problem related only to her ova, then as someone upthread pointed out there's no reason why she couldn't become a mother using donated eggs. The fact that he didn't allow for this possiblility says much, IMHO.

I grant you that there *might* have been damage to the uterus itself - but that wasn't what Ree talked about. Ree talked about the damage to the ova, a damage that prevents Deanna from ever conceiving a healthy child. And conception usually takes place before the uterus even comes into play.

I find it implausible that Ree would prescribe such a physically invasive and psychologically traumatic surgery as a hysterectomy without good cause. No one disagreed with his diagnosis, for whatever it's worth; everyone accepted it as just another tragedy. For whatever reason, the technologies at his disposal just couldn't cope with the Eichner-related damage to her reproductive tract, Troi's ova and other reproductive organs were irreparably damaged, and the long-time health risks were such that keeping them would pose a serious threat to her. There had been only the one study done on the effects of Eichner radiation done four years before. Who knows what the complications would be?
But that's exactly what we're talking about here - I'd have liked the reasons for Ree's suggestion "on screen" so to speak. I'm not the one responsible to make sense of a character's actions, I'd say that's the writers' job.

The only things we have to go from are the radiation damage to the ova, and possible (not even certain!) oncological threats. That's it.

He (and you BTW) thought, let's deal with the current crisis and then take care of the rest - but in handling the situation differently from the beginning, further problems could perhaps have been avoided entirely.

How?

I wouldn't know how to go about telling a woman that, not only was she incapable of bearing a child and that her current pregnancy was bound for tragedy, but that he reproductive system was in such poor shape that she needed to remove it, as soon as possible. I'm asking this non-ironically and non-sarcastically--what strategy would a doctor use to broach this topic?

I already mentioned how above: Sit down with the patient, take time, give her time, present alternatives etc.

This is not about sugarcoating the truth - but getting where the patient is coming from.

I already mentioned the way my father was told he had cancer: The doctor came in, told him he had cancer - my father just sat there, not really reacting - and that there was nothing that could be done. Then he left, not even asking whether there are questions. Instead he should have sat down, explained the situation, taken the time (I mean he was essentially delivering a death sentence) - and presented options such as palliative chemo therapy, pain therapy. The result was that my father suffered for 3 months the worst pains imaginable, went to some obscure doctors who at least offered some hope... and he died in a way I wouldn't wish on anyone.

That's the difference I'm talking about.
 
The TOS examples make sense. The last Voyager one much less - and that doesn`t surprise me.

There was even a regulation like "If there is a disagreement between the captains of two ships, the captain of the most powerful one wins." This is idiotic.

And in modern Star Trek, do officers who want to have a relationship with an alien (What does that mean? Someone who is not human?) really go to their captain and CMO asking for their approval!? I don`t think so.

I think it's obvious that the "alien" reference refers to non-Federation species. And, yes, "The Disease" makes it clear that if they want to engage in sexual relations with an alien lifeform, particularly newly-discovered ones, they need permission from their Commanding and Chief Medical Officers.

Sometimes it is right that rules are being challenged. Sometimes it is even necessary.
Which is fair enough, but that's different from willful disregard for the rules.

I don`t think it was spelled out in the episode that this rule was meant for non-Federation species or newly discovered ones. But it makes sense that way and I assume this was the case. Nevertheless…

Do you really think Dax went to Sisko and Bashir, asking them for permission if she can have a relationship including intercourse with Worf? Or that Shelby went to maybe Picard because he sponsored him? Or whoever else classified as her captain and CMO at that time if she can have such a relationship with Calhoun.

We are talking about adult officers here who are supposed to be professionals. The captain is not their parent. And captains should ask an Admiral – and what do Admirals do in such a case? It should not be the task of a higher ranking officer to police the private lives of their subordinates unless it affects their ability to do their jobs.

Asking the CMO makes more sense but only in the sense that there might be a small chance that even two different species can catch something dangerous by exchanging bodily fluids. Well, tell men to use condoms and I can imagine that there are other precautions that can be taken especially in the medically advanced Star Trek universe.

This is way over the top.

I think this is being treated like the Prime Directive in many cases. Nobody will sue you if there is no problem. But if there is, be prepared to be hit very hard with the regulations book.
 
Re: Titan: Over a Torrent Sea

(Honestly, the whole discussion and what I've read of Over a Torrent Sea so far rather convinces me of the fact that everything would be better off if there were no relationships on ships. Riker turning to Troi and arguing with her whether to go down to the planet "because the baby could be born at any moment" in front of all the others in the briefing... That was just the tip of the iceberg. Hello?!? As an officer on Titan, I'd begin to wonder what comes first for my captain - his ship/mission or his family. This is a discussion that should be private and not held in front of the crew.

This really threatens to turn into a major space soap opera, concentrating on who's sleeping with whom etc.. I don't watch such programmes on TV, I don't read such novels, so I'm not exactly happy reading about the different love affairs of Lavena, Ra-Havreii, Pazlar and where they have sex and what it feels like in the different environments etc. in Titan. And I thought Trip and T'Pol behaved like adolescents... And now, somebody should please explain to me why in these matters there apparently are no rules in military-like Starfleet.

It's unfortunate that so much of the first 100 pages of OatS is spent on who/where/when because the mission setup is a really exciting one.

Mind you, my criticism isn't aimed at CLB or OatS in particular but at Titan in general because these were issues that bothered me from the beginning of the series. I only name Titan because I'm not familiar enough with TNG-relaunch or the other modern series to make the same claim.)

For what it's worth: I'm not so much criticizing the fact that there *are* rules, but rather the fact that those rules are very unevenly, or rather arbitrarily placed.

Starfleet has military elements but is not the real life military. If Starfleet would have a policy like a ban on all kinds of "fraternization", of having families with them on board I am sure Starfleet would have trouble to find new people willing to stay for a long time.

If you want to allow families on board and relationships between officers but put something as personal and complex as this in a rule book with strict regulations, you will have a lot of trouble to police it and find ways to deal with "offenders".

I think it enriches Star Trek because it IS now pretty relaxed about relationships and it only becomes an issue if the officer in question starts to have trouble to perform his or her duties. Especially with personal problems, I think also Titan shows that having your wife, husband or partner on board can help a lot. Relationships should not only be seen as potential problems but also as potential assets.

I also think that Star Trek is about looking at different cultures and this includes how officers of different species interact with each other. Yes, that is soap opera-ish but that is the nature of the beast and I have no problem with it. I actually like well written soap operas because it is people and their relationships (intimate and otherwise) that make a story interesting to me.
 
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I also think that Star Trek is about looking at different cultures and this includes how officers of different species interact with each other. Yes, that is soap opera-ish but that is the nature of the beast and I have no problem with it. I actually like well written soap operas because it is people and their relationships (intimate and otherwise) that make a story interesting to me.

To a certain extent I agree with you - but not to the extent of the first 100 pages of OatS. I really don't want to read every other scene of Ra-Havreii and Pazlar, or past experiences with Lavena, or Riker in practically every scene he's in wishing he could spend time with Troi. Don't misunderstand me - of course, these are important issues, but the balance is a bit off IMO. If it's mentioned once that Riker regrets having to leave his wife etc, that's fine, even understandable... but not every time that character appears on the scene - and certainly not in a public venue such as that briefing.

Frankly, I'm happy this is sort of a fast-forward pregnancy because I'd definitely not want to read about Riker's issues for more than one book. (Not that they'll disappear once she's born, they'll just transform into other parenting issues. *g*)

I know you adore NF - but I think that über-focus on the interpersonal relationships on Excalibur, and especially later on after Restoration were what drove me away from NF. And somehow I fear seeing that transfered to other Trek series, especially the focus on physical relationships. I miss friendship, the only one not pursuing any physical relationship is Keru right now - and now guess, why I like that character so much. Because he (and Tuvok) is shown sharing friendships, offering an ear to others' problems, he's simply slowly coming out of his self-imposed shell. His interaction with other characters is more diverse, and not just focused on one thing - and I think, even if he starts dating again, he'll not lose that diversity.

Of course, I realize that these characters are different, but I just can't stand characters who have a single-minded ambition - and that's to get laid as often as possible. First impressions are very hard to make up for - and my first impression of Ra-Havreii was as bad as they can get. And so far, nothing has come up to make me rethink my opinion of this character (- or Lavena's or Pazlar's). But then I still have 200 pages to go. ;)
 
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There was no hint that her uterus itself was damaged by the radiation, just her eggs.
He didn't say that, no. He told her first that the Eichner radiation caused very serious mutations of her mitochondrial DNA, then told her that the radiation caused massive mutations in her ova such that they were incapable of producing a viable fetus.

I don't think he had to mention the uterus: If the Eichner radiation caused such damage to her ova, how much damage would it have caused to the uterus in which Ian Andrew gestated for 36 hours, 4 hours being the minimum needed to cause said damage? Her fertility problems might well have stemmed equally from the damage to her ova and the damage to her uterus. Ree mentioned oncological complications stemming from the damage--if the problem related only to her ova, then as someone upthread pointed out there's no reason why she couldn't become a mother using donated eggs. The fact that he didn't allow for this possiblility says much, IMHO.

I grant you that there *might* have been damage to the uterus itself - but that wasn't what Ree talked about. Ree talked about the damage to the ova, a damage that prevents Deanna from ever conceiving a healthy child.

I read it as his explaining that the Eichner radiation, demonstrated to cause very serious DNA damage at substantially shorter exposures than Troi's, was responsible for the specific malformations responsible for the malformed fetus.

And conception usually takes place before the uterus even comes into play.

Yes, but the health of the uterus also determines the viability of the pregnancy.

But that's exactly what we're talking about here - I'd have liked the reasons for Ree's suggestion "on screen" so to speak. I'm not the one responsible to make sense of a character's actions, I'd say that's the writers' job.

The only things we have to go from are the radiation damage to the ova, and possible (not even certain!) oncological threats. That's it.

It could have been made more explicitly, I agree, but it doesn't seem much of a strength. Ian Andrew was presumably in Troi's ovary (her only one?) for as long as he needed to retrieve an egg, but he gestated inside her uterus for 36 hours, irradiating it all that time. It doesn't seem plausible to me that a radiation source could cause so great damage to one organ at a relatively brief exposure and then cause so little damage to another with a much longer exposure.

Ree's treatment of the condition suggests that the situation was urgent. Why else would we wake her up in the middle of the night to tell her the cause of her problems and recommend immediate medical treatment? Why would he favour removing presumably healthy, unaffected organs? He did favour hysterectomy when talking of possible oncological complications, but the unknown nature of Eichner radiation makes me think that he was aplying the precautionary principle--better to remove them now than keep them in, for no added benefit to the patient, and risk much more seriious disease. It's not like other forms of radiation damage to tissues doesn't cause cancer. The fact that the damage slipped under the radar for so long might also have caused him to treat this as a sort of ticking time-bomb situation.

As I've said above, the fact that his diagnosis wasn't challenged suggests that his treatment was the medically correct one. There's no reason to believe that Ree was incompetent, or excessively alarmable, or that he was eager to put Troi through unnecessary surgery.

I already mentioned the way my father was told he had cancer: The doctor came in, told him he had cancer - my father just sat there, not really reacting - and that there was nothing that could be done. Then he left, not even asking whether there are questions. Instead he should have sat down, explained the situation, taken the time (I mean he was essentially delivering a death sentence) - and presented options such as palliative chemo therapy, pain therapy. The result was that my father suffered for 3 months the worst pains imaginable, went to some obscure doctors who at least offered some hope... and he died in a way I wouldn't wish on anyone.

That's the difference I'm talking about.

I'm sorry--that's horrible.

What specifically could Ree have done better? Even before learning the root cause of her troubles, Troi was already depressed to the point of not caring whether or not she lived. Ree had to tell her that her reproductive career was definitively over, and that the damage to her reproductive organs was so severe as to merit a hysterectomy.

I agree that waking her up in the middle of the night was probably a bad approach. What else could he have done better?
 
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