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The Misanthope's guide to Enterprise...

Sadistro

Lieutenant Commander
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I think it's fair to say that Enterprise is not well remembered by history. Publicy reviled by Trek fans and ignored by pretty much everyone else, it's taken me a long time to get round to watching this.

However, I did hold out some hope for the series, mainly due to the fact that I am a much bigger fan of Brannon Braga's work than most people seem to be. His innate pessimism and skill at producing horror, despair, but also innocence and longing are exactly the kinds of things I look for.

The thing is, his style and Star Trek's style are rarely a happy marriage. Star Trek prides itself on being about optimism and that just isn't him. His stories invariably deal with life's disappointments, the hammering down of the soul in the face of reality.

And give him credit that he knows this - watch his interviews and he is fairly candid that whilst he is mindful of what Trek fans want and what qualities the Trek franchise possesses, he often felt constrained at working within those limits.

There are two ways you can look at this. I think fans of the franchise can (and do) legitimately ask why such a writer was allowed to not only work on the shows, but attain such a lofty position? The other way to look at it (one taken by his fellows writers), is that he is someone of grand vision, unafraid to go to any place he feels a good story or a good idea lies.

But again, his mindset is often fundamentally opposed to what most Trek fans would like to see. Because he focuses so heavily on misery, horror and disappointment. He approves of Good, serious and innocent people, and despises 'flash', cocky characters as people unworthy of cheering for.

And so with that in mind, he arrives to helm Enterprise...

And you get pretty much what you should have expected. Those who have seen Voyager's fifth season (the only season Braga truly feels he got his message across in), particularly should. It's basically a dry run for Enterprise.

With cramped, drab environments, a tiny ready room complete with annoying squeak and a crew that could not really be described as exciting, this was a much more sober and 'what it would really be like' vision.

It's designed to confound, because the idea across the season is to peel away the optimism and sense of adventure and deliver disappointment upon disappointment to the crew, but particularly to Archer. To have his dream sullied, that it 'wasn't supposed to be like this'.

I think it's a great idea and completely in keeping with my own view of the world. It may sound misanthropic and indeed is in many ways. But it does give it far more edge and is a very refreshing antidote to what is at times, a very unrealistic vision of the future.

Now, reading that, I wouldn't be surprised if people were ready to ship me out to the same platform at sea with Braga that they are aiming torpedos at. I would say only that such an attitude does not imply any malice to Star Trek as a franchise, just that some of us need a little more explanation and a little more acceptance of how things really are, how people and life really is, in order to fully enjoy Star Trek.

And I support most of Braga's ideas. I particularly wish the studio had allowed him to omit the Transporter as he wanted to. Making him put it in, forced him to come up with the 'People are scared to use it' excuse. Because the idea was to get away from all that technology. How much time is lost in TNG and VOY episodes, explaining why they can't transport, tractor beam, disable people's escaping ships etc etc?

One area I am sceptical about however is the Vulcans. I like the race and they had been used very little really, up to this point (Tuvok is a very underused character in VOY). But Braga's style depends on deep emotion, rage, fear, despair, longing etc. He's never been much for the Vulcans and has rarely ever written about them.

So it came as little surprise that the Vulcans in Enterprise did show a suspicious level of emotional outburst and just went to show that Braga finds them an unworkable race for the stories and mindsets that he understands and wants to talk about. I can appreciate why fans were outraged and I think he (and the other writers) didn't do enough with this new interpretation to justify the change.

Because that's it, isn't it? One of the principal problems with Enterprise is that many bold risks and new directions were attempted, but with often very unsatisfactory results. And I would have to say that Season One unfortunately has a very poor ratio of good to bad episodes. I loved the atmosphere, the despair that crept into Archer at the hostility and grim reality what was really out there, but still, the actual episodes...

The series often suffers from being 'worthy' rather than exciting. The events make sense to me, the reactions to what is happening were very satisfying (i.e they didn't just keep insanely upbeat views in the face of constant aggression and manipulation), but the lack of anything truly wondrous and uplifting means it all gets a bit much.

The small scale and lack of true visual excitement is a real downer. Supposedly amazing sights like the holodeck in 'Unexpected' and Daniels' time file projector thing etc fail utterly to inspire a true sense of awe and majesty. Without fantastic sights to balance out the misery (think 'Where No-one has gone before' for example), the series takes on a very unappealing, dour look.

And what of the characters? Well again, they show what Braga wants to see, pretty much. Good, decent people in space, enduring life’s eternal quest to beat them down. Again, ‘worthy’ is the word, rather than exciting. All the characters fit and have a reason for being there, but execution was lacking in many cases.

I think the biggest successes are Archer and Trip. Their friendship and the ‘hero and his loyal right hand man’ thing works about as well as any seen in Star Trek before. Archer is a great captain, one of my favourites, simply because his reactions and attitudes are so believable and relatable.

His despair over how other species constantly either attack them or are fitting them up for something, takes a visible and very rewarding (for the viewer) toll on the character. And I think it’s a real shame that this is all but abandoned in the supposedly best 4th season. The scenes from ‘Hidden Enemy’ and ‘The Expanse’ where Archer gives vent to his frustrations are simply excellent.

So too at times is his relationship with the Vulcans in the early going. I don’t like how it pans out later (particularly with all that Kir Shara nonsense), but I love how he views the Vulcans with a mixture of admiration and anger. On the one hand, he feels they were responsible for denying his father his dreams and have held Humanity back. But on the other, he feels like he has something to prove to such an old, respected species, that he is always seeking the approval of the people who have always represented the ultimate authority figures.

And this comes out nicely in ‘The Andorian Incident’, where having exposed them for using the monastery for military means, he doesn’t sneer triumphantly – he’s disgusted. That people who always seemed above such things could stoop to such levels, it appals him, and is another significant blow to his dream.

Trip also distinguishes himself as someone the writers have engaged with. His combination of regular everyman and someone who is pure of spirit and whose optimism and desire to see right done is undimmed in the face of all but the gravest of encounters, is something Braga often likes to examine (Data, Harry Kim etc).

So long as some characters are taking a realistic view, it’s always nice to have such dreamers. Misanthropic writers like Braga and Chris Carter (from the X-Files) are not opposed to hope; they simply can’t find much of it in modern life and society. But through characters like Kim, Fox Mulder, Trip etc, they show that whatever they may believe and report of society, they do wish it was better.

The other characters however are less successful. As a Brit myself, I find elements of Reed to be very good, giving some classic British scepticism and pessimism in the face of all this American optimism :D But too often, he is played as a rather oddball, ludicrously ‘stiff and proper’ character.

The writing for British characters on American TV is frequently cringe-worthy for Brits to watch. Reed’s ‘we are not like that!’ factor is mild in comparison to some shows (Reed is at least somewhat identifiable), but he’s still no classic. He also seems to be a utterly awful shot with the phase pistol, missing constantly unless the enemies are right on top of him!

Phlox is alright I guess. John Billingsley is one of the best actors on the series, and an alien doctor was the next logical choice after humans, holograms, augments etc. I would have preferred a Vulcan doctor however. I particularly would have liked to have seen an edgier, darker doctor (i.e that Vulcans do not have compassion and would have no problem making ethically questionable decisions to save the ship etc).

As it is, Phlox is... like I said, alright. He is sometimes a kind of mentor, but rarely gets much to do. His biggest connection seems to be with Hoshi, but that’s more a case of two underused characters together really...

T’Pol is... another woman in a catsuit (which people blame Braga for, but is far more likely to be Rick Berman). Watch Braga’s episodes (in all the series) and you’ll see that he is far from being an exploitative writer and is in fact vehemently opposed to ‘hunks and babes’ as eye candy etc. He’s more of a ‘Frankenstein’s monster’ outcast kind of writer.

If it seems like I’m avoiding talking about T’Pol... well you got me. I find her a massively dull character and the writers seem little more interested in her than I am. As the ‘babe’ of the show, she is included in many stories, but I never got the feeling that there was as much heart behind the stories as those written for Seven of Nine (whom the Voyager writers did genuinely like as a character, not to mention Jeri Ryan was an excellent actress).

Even in episodes where she is the focus, the writers often can’t resist looking to Archer or Trip because she just doesn’t cut it as a character really. Blalock is also a rather uninspiring actress. T’Pol joins a long list of poorly written Star Trek females for whom the writers simply cannot engage.

Which leaves the ‘blink and you’ll miss them’ Travis and Hoshi. I have a soft spot for both characters (especially Hoshi, who Braga at least likes, even if none of the other writers can think of anything for her to do). Indeed the most significant thing about Hoshi was that they seemed to be testing the waters early on for a relationship between her and T’Pol, which would certainly have been a bold step.

You can always tell this by the way, because TV series only rarely have scenes with two women speaking. The thinking is that men (who make up much of the target audience) are not really interested in hearing what women have to say (i.e they treat them as eye candy), so women are usually always put together with men in scenes. When they are together, they are usually identified as married, of very different ages, mother and daughter etc. When they aren’t, it often means the makers are implying a possible relationship.

As we know however, nothing came of this and after appearing together and working on their (professional) relationship quite a bit in S1 and 2, they are rarely seen together at all later on.

The fact that this possibility is one of the most interesting things I can say about Hoshi is very telling. Only Braga seems to have any idea how to use her and he has his hands full juggling all the other characters and plots. ‘Vanishing Point’ has many problems, but its idea of Hoshi feeling like someone people overlook and then literally fading from view is great.

In general though, she falls in the ‘you’re not very funny, you can’t fight (until S4 and even then she gets beaten easily), you don’t like stuff that young men like, we don’t know what to do with you’ category... like most Star Trek women.

And Travis... flies the ship.

So, to sum up then, I like the tone and the general idea of the show, but it simply isn’t all that much fun to watch. A serious tone and bleak approach can be very rewarding when done correctly (Millennium, Homicide: Life on the Streets etc), but Enterprise S1 is simply dull for much of the time, with very few truly great (or even good) episodes.

But here’s my picks of the best:

SEASON ONE – THE A LIST:
Broken Bow pt 1.
Silent Enemy.
Shockwave pt 1.

And the not so best, but alright...
THE B LIST:
Fight or Flight (the ending is just silly though).
Strange New World.
The Andorian Incident.
Fortunate Son (again, the ending is very poor).
Fallen Hero.
Two Days and Two Nights (if only for the ‘To Sickbay!’ moment).

I was really reaching to include some of those episodes, but as I say, I enjoyed the season more than just the sum of the actual episodes. It wasn’t great, but it was still along the lines of the kind of thing I enjoy and agree with.
 
That's a pretty interesting take on the show, and I agree with a large amount of what you said - particularly Archer's dream being sullied. There are a couple of good episodes that focus on this - Fight or Flight, Silent Enemy and Dead Stop come to mind.

I don't like to categorically blame Berman and Braga for every little thing wrong with the show, as we also got some very enjoyable stories out of them over the years. I don't particularly enjoy season 7 of Voyager, which B&B tend to take some criticism for, but it's worth mentioning Braga wasn't an Executive Producer on the show.

Braga does have some more outlandish, interesting ideas, and the cynicism is nice change from the overly in-your-face cheeriness of Voyager's later seasons. Unfortunately, I feel more often than not, for whatever reasons, Braga's stories are never really fulfilling. Sure the idea is there, and the execution is good up to a point, and then the story either just falls apart completely, or peters out. I suppose the stories are somewhat damaged by the necessary reset button at the end of every episode in the first two seasons, when events rarely carry over.

That said, TATV will always be just plain bad :p

I realise this only focuses on a small part of what you talked about, but that's the bit I wanted to comment on the most.

Oh, and I agree about Reed. Far too stiff upper lip. And surprisingly incompetent with a weapon. Just how many times did he get beaten, shot or captured in the first two seasons? :p

And as for Mayweather being underused... it actually gets me a little annoyed. As a result, Mayweather's one of my favourite characters, purely because I'm rooting for the underdog of the entire franchise to actually get a line.

All in all: Enterprise - brilliant idea, not so brilliant execution, and a whole load of other events to conspire against it (poor advertising, budget cuts, an audience that grew tired of Trek, changing timeslots, and I believe it got pre-empted in America a lot for sporting events). To be honest though, I really enjoy Enterprise, and thought it made the best of some rather unfortunate circumstances. Though it definitely could've done with less fluff and filler for the first three seasons.
 
No, everyone loves the show and we're all very pleased.
 
i think Braga don't deserve to be treated like he is (even if i still hangy after his TATV). i mean it's very difficult to create new stories after hundred and hundred episodes of trek. and when, he has tried to take some liberties, people claims that thas was a violation of the canon.

the problem is, in my opinion, UPN. Enterprise didn't have their support. I think if the show had been aired on other channel, things would have been different. for example, there had more audience with Enterprise in the fourth season that Stargate SG1 on Sci-fi channel and Stargate SG1 last ten years.
 
Needless to say, this post caught my eye :)

I took a look at your thoughts on TNG and VOY, and I'm looking forward to hearing more from you on ENT. Interesting perspective.
 
His innate pessimism and skill at producing horror, despair, but also innocence and longing are exactly the kinds of things I look for.
Yep, "Mission: Impossible II" did it for me too, that scene with pigeons made me cry my ass off (the drama, the the emotion, the pathos... if you want all of that, call 1-800-BRAGA).

The thing is, his style and Star Trek's style are rarely a happy marriage.
Yeah, I didn't like "All good things" and "First contact" (only the second highest grossing Trek movie ever) either...

Star Trek prides itself on being about optimism and that just isn't him.
Tell me about it. I still haven't recovered from the pessimist horrors that are "Shuttlepod One" and "Breaking the Ice."

His stories invariably deal with life's disappointments, the hammering down of the soul in the face of reality.
Exactly why "Threshold" won an Emmy.

Now, reading that, I wouldn't be surprised if people were ready to ship me out to the same platform at sea with Braga that they are aiming torpedoes at.
Actually, I always thought of the set of "24" as a pretty happy place...

If it seems like I’m avoiding talking about T’Pol... well you got me. I find her a massively dull character and the writers seem little more interested in her than I am. As the ‘babe’ of the show, she is included in many stories, but I never got the feeling that there was as much heart behind the stories as those written for Seven of Nine (whom the Voyager writers did genuinely like as a character, not to mention Jeri Ryan was an excellent actress).
'Jolene Blalock - the actress' may be below-mediocre, but T'Pol was made for her. She took the flawed material she was given and made something out of it (I respect your opinion though, and BTW, Jeri Ryan still is an excellent actress).

And Travis... flies the ship.
And beds gorgeous redheads! Give him some credit.
 
The thing is, his style and Star Trek's style are rarely a happy marriage.
Yeah, I didn't like "All good things" and "First contact" (only the second highest grossing Trek movie ever) either...

Star Trek prides itself on being about optimism and that just isn't him.
Tell me about it. I still haven't recovered from the pessimist horrors that are "Shuttlepod One" and "Breaking the Ice."

His stories invariably deal with life's disappointments, the hammering down of the soul in the face of reality.
Exactly why "Threshold" won an Emmy.
"Threshold" won the Emmy for makeup.

It's not a big stretch to interpret First Contact as being about an attempt by the Borg Queen to tempt Data into succumbing to the dark side, or "Shuttlepod One" as a story about two guys contemplating their impending death. I certainly wouldn't characterize Reed as an optimist.


Everyone has a right to their opinion. If you disagree, Mach5, your own opinion is welcome, but please lose the subtly sarcastic jabs.
 
Star Trek prides itself on being about optimism and that just isn't him. His stories invariably deal with life's disappointments, the hammering down of the soul in the face of reality.

This is the point when I realised that you had mistaken Brannon Braga with Ron Moore, which is understandable considering they were writing partners on TNG. Here is how to tell the difference; Braga wears glasses and Moore has a beard. :)
 
It's not a big stretch
In my very humble, and profoundly personal opinion, yes it is.
(It's a dark movie, sure, but the ending is pure optimism).

And "Shuttlepod One" is about two guys discovering friendship in the face of impending death.

This is the point when I realized that you had mistaken Brannon Braga with Ron Moore
That thought crossed my mind too at one point...
 
Sadistro, you may be on to something. I don't want to go handing the man an armful of Emmys, but I'm sure Braga's hands were tied to some extent. We know that someone (probably Berman) forced Doug Drexler to use the Akira design (unchanged!) for Enterprise, and that it was Drexler himself who forced changes to bring it more in line as a prequel ship. So I'm sure there was more creativity to Braga's ideas that were in some ways limited.

That said, I think he's got like seven good ideas that he keeps rehashing in all of his scripts. As far as writing itself, he is very good at it. He just doesn't have that many original ideas. :)
 
Sadistro. In my very Humble Opion: I completely and utterly disaagree withh your above post. Feel it is wrong on alll points.
 
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Penguin, in future, consider adding more substance to your difference of opinion. Simply passing through to declare "You're wrong! Wrong, I say!" (or worse) doesn't really contribute anything meaningful to the discussion. If, rather, you were to expand on the "why" of your position, you would be adding something productive to the dialogue.
 
I find it odd that people would contest Braga is not an innately pessimistic writer, his body of work in TNG, VOY and ENT possessing so much horror, despair and pain. He is a dreamer of a writer, who tries to find hope and encouragement in what he feels is a very hostile and unsettling life.

He always includes charming and touching character moments, because he wants you to care about the characters, sympathise when they suffer. He is showing that bad things really do happen to good people, and asks what we are supposed to think about that.

Braga does put in the chance for hope and redemption, but the bulk of his episodes are often taken up with often taken up with horrific imagery, despair and misery. He wants life and people to be better, but communicates his belief that all too often, you will be disappointed waiting for it.

It is a recognisable attribute of the romantic horror writer, that although they think very little of the world, they wish that it was better. Stories like Frankenstein (much referenced by Braga in all his Star Trek work), deals with this 'rage and sorrow of the outcast', helping you to feel sorry for the monster, for the one who does not fit it.

His heroes are people who were either innocently going about their business or were trying to do something good, but who end up putting themselves in harm's way or having to compromise their views to get thing's done etc. The idea of reacting to injustice, of needing to accept how life is, rather than how you wanted it to be. All of which takes its toll on the mind and the soul.

'First Contact' had very definate 'Angels and Demons' imagery with the Vulcans and the Borg. The structure shows Braga's belief that through endurance of the pain, he has to hope that some good will eventually come. That if you resist all the opportunities for corruption and temptation, surely there is a reward?

The core of Enterprise is about this struggle to remain optimistic when there are so many disapointments and trials waiting for you in life. Braga has often struggled with the need to have 'And they all lived happily ever after' endings to stories, because he wishes things were like this, rather than actually believing it to be an accurate portayal of life. Many times, he likes to imagine that after all the suffering, a measure of peace can be had.

But at other times, his innate belief that things are not so simple, wins out. The ending of S3 for example, is not the triumphant return home that people were hoping for, for example. Instead the crew are sent to a time in our history that is synonmous with hatred and evil - WWII.

Also, the much reviled ending to the series - 'These are the Voyages...' does not have an unconditionally happy ending. He shows that the crew have been inspirational to future generations, but that there was hardship all the way. That even as Archer was speaking of hope for the future, he was dealing with a tragic personal loss.

I must confess that I quite enjoyed TATV. Some are disappointed by the TNG references, but I thought it was a fitting end to the series and the franchise. It restates some of the principles of Enterprise that are lost in what I consider to be a pretty lightweight and bubblegum sci-fi 4th season. (I think the actual quality of the episodes improves, but the tone is by and large, not to my taste).

I also thought that Berman and Braga's portrayal of Riker was excellent in this episode. The kitchen scenes are great little snippets, where Riker shows a lot of heart that was missing in his character from TNG S3 onwards. It was particularly nice because Braga had such a chip on his shoulder about Riker in TNG and was forever beating on him.

It's like his apology to the character of Tom Paris in Voyager's S7 episode 'Author, Author!', where Paris asks if he's finally done enough to earn the author's, i.e Braga's respect, after years of beatings and humiliations from him. (Braga is more of an enlightened X-Filiesish modern horror writer, but he shares some of the same vicious streak that many horror writers have towards 'cool' people).

So in TATV, Braga seems to take this opportunity to make it up to Riker. And his (and Johnny Frakes') portrayal shows all the heart and capacity to grapple with serious issues that were denied the character in TNG.

With regard to rehashing his scripts, upsetting people with his attempts at new directions...

I would first point out that Braga is someone who has been forced out of his comfort zone by the demands that a senior staff position put on him.

In TNG and early VOY, he stuck to what he knew - horror. His episodes are almost without exception studies in personal horror.

He would isolate one or two crew members and subject them to the most visceral and mind bending horrors he could devise. He was clearly interested in madness, chaos, the sheer unpredictable woe that life can pile on you. And after putting them through the wringer, he would ask 'How do we get through life, when it is like this?! How can we stand the constant danger, possibility of betrayal, loss, the dreams that never work out like we planned?'

And he was happy to remain in this little bubble, writing stories of courage and the possibilities for hope in the face of such misery. He didn't involve himself in TNG's big action episodes (he has no part in 'Redemption', 'Unification', 'Time's Arrow', 'Chain of Command', 'Descent', 'Gambit' etc.

Only in the final episode and for the films did he commit to such stories (because he and Moore were practically the co show runners at that time - they write many more episodes than anyone else on the show).

It's the same on Voyager too, until Michael Piller leaves and someone has to take up the reins of providing the big stories, shaping where the show is supposed to be going. So he is forced to tackle bigger, more dynamic stories.

And give him credit - he knows he needs help. He always co-writes such episodes, because the needs of such episodes conflict with his intense, personal, introverted style. Teaming with Joe Menosky was a smart move, because JM is all about the connections with others and how important they are.

(Find me one JM episode that isn't about how important it is to trust others and have friends and colleagues, how those connections make us, etc - there's a tenner in it for you if you can.)

The next challenge was to be Showrunner in VOY's Season Five. And true to his style, it's full of hellish images, dreams that turn into nightmares, the revelation that the galaxy is full of pirates, self serving mercenaries etc etc, culminating in the corruption of a Starfleet crew to murderous pirates in 'Equinox'.

But after that Season, you can see that Braga is at a loss for where to go next. Conscious that they couldn't just repeat Season 5's grimness, Berman will probably have insisted that Season 6 be lighter - and that just doesn't suit Braga at all. Fights with Ron Moore, a scaling back of episodes written... you could see his heart wasn't it anymore. It was no surprise to me that he didn't stick around for S7 (he's a consulting producer and writes maybe 1 episode or something).

And then Enterprise. I think Rick Berman will have been conscious of the need for a big hitter, given that VOY's S7 sagged so much without him. Braga's level of pessimism and ennui is still fairly rare to find in a writer, so he was a good choice for a show that needed something different from just guys on a ship exploring space.

The clash of his vision and Roddenberry's vision would produce something new and interesting, it was presumably hoped. But the need to prevent Braga from going completely against the Trek ethos is probably what prompted Rick Berman to involve himself more in the writing, as he does from when Braga becomes showrunner in VOY S5 to right through Enterprise.

But they were an awkward writing team, more of a 'chalk and cheese' partnership than Braga and Menosky, who complemented each other's strengths, rather than opposed them. Braga is a writer of the outcast, the misanthrope, of chaos and uncertainty. Berman is someone who had rarely written episodes up to that point and whose interests seemed more in quirky humour and sex as something to attract viewers

He seemed far more willing to put in sexual imagery and dialogue (he took Braga's idea of having a Borg on Voyager and made it into a Borg babe for example). To listen to them talk on the Commentary for 'Broken Bow', I find it very diffficult to believe that Berman didn't get his way when his mind was set.

Because whilst I admire Braga's tone, it is as I say, the language of the outcast, not of the dynamic, self-confident, leader of men. Braga does not come across as a particularly efficient driving force, which is important for a showrunner.

Other Trek showrunners like Roddenberry and Piller exhibited a similar bullish 'My way or the highway' kind of demeanour. Not that they were necessarily tyrannical, but that when it came down to it, you knew who was boss. Ron Moore spoke of his first interview with Michael Piller who had no compunction about swiftly rejecting all his pitches because he thought they weren't good enough!

And then there's Ira Behr who seems to have been a very effective showrunner, simply through his unshakeable confidence and belief in DS9. He manages to keep a fairly consistent team of writers through all 5 of his seasons as boss, he kept everyone focused and happy despite questionable ratings. Just watch the features on the end of DS9 and you'll see that the cast and crew had been well taken care of.

And that is something that Enterprise lacks. The writers change constantly and Berman and Braga take on far too episodes themselves in the early seasons. If you do everything yourself, it sends a message that you don't trust your writers to deliver or don't think they are providing good enough ideas (which to be fair, they weren't).

It comes to something when Miss Sussman is held up as an example of one of the better writers. I think Sussman is admirably motivated and gave it his best shot. But many of his episodes simply don't work as well as they should have. His commentary for 'Dead Stop' sees him pleased but slightly puzzled that it is so highly regarded.

And I agree with that, because 'Dead Stop', whilst it has many features that make it appealing, has so many flaws. It is far too slow, much of the main action surrounding the computer is simply not as scary or exciting as it should be; the whole episode simply lacks 'it' - that X factor that seperates great writers from merely good ones.

The writing staff in general do not deliver and what talent there is, is not cultivated properly. As showrunners and executive producers, it was to Berman and Braga to find writers they could put their trust in and who they felt could come up with the goods. Season by season, they generally fail to do this, in my opinion.

Part of what makes 'Battlestar Galactica' so appealling for example, is that Ron Moore has cribbed together such an accomplished set of writers from other sucessful shows (Jane Espenson, Michael Taylor, Bradley Thompson + David Weddle etc, in addition to his own not inconsiderable talents). LOST and 24 also feature big names on the writer's teams, for those who know about such things.

And what does Enterprise do? They hire John Shiban - a writer who was widely reviled in his time on The X-Files as a terrible writer who could be relied upon to produce terrible episodes. I'm not saying I agree with that assessment of him, but it isn't really the kind of shot in the arm you'd hope for in S2, is it?

In conclusion (on this point anyway), Brannon Braga is one of my very favourite Star Trek writers. The imagery from his TNG episodes is harrowing but so different to what any of the other writers attempt. His transformation on Voyager from introverted horror writer to co-authoring action epics with heart is a brave undertaking.

And whilst he proves to be less adept at running a show than other Trek luminaries, he produced that often rang true with an unusual honesty, because he stuck to what he believed in of the world. He eschewed the need for 'Sci-fi cool', allowed his characters to have flaws and by showing such lack of reward for virtues like hope and heroism, made them seem all the more appealing.
 
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Also, the much reviled ending to the series - 'These are the Voyages...' does not have an unconditionally happy ending. He shows that the crew have been inspirational to future generations, but that there was hardship all the way. That even as Archer was speaking of hope for the future, he was dealing with a tragic personal loss.

I must confess that I quite enjoyed TATV. Some are disappointed by the TNG references, but I thought it was a fitting end to the series and the franchise. It restates some of the principles of Enterprise that are lost in what I consider to be a pretty lightweight and bubblegum sci-fi 4th season. (I think the actual quality of the episodes improves, but the tone is by and large, not to my taste).

I also thought that Berman and Braga's portrayal of Riker was excellent in this episode. The kitchen scenes are great little snippets, where Riker shows a lot of heart that was missing in his character from TNG S3 onwards. It was particularly nice because Braga had such a chip on his shoulder about Riker in TNG and was forever beating on him.

i agree with evrything that said, and it's very interessant, because i think almost the same things.

i quote this part, because you point something i disagree. the fact that Riker shows emotions in this episode and the enterprise crew don't, make to TATV a TNG episode and no an enterprise one. I've nothing against Riker or Troi, but, according to me, they stole the enterprise final and it's very insulting to the show, to the actors and to us. of course, it's not Frakes or sirtis faults, it's berman and braga and how they wrote this episode.
 
Whilst I do understand the concern that the Enterprise crew had their legs taken out from underneath them in the final episode, I don't think that's necessarily true. I think the final episode works because it shows that underneath it all, the franchise is about people and a sense of hope for everyone, not just one set of heroes.

The episode deals with the relationships that made the most impact. It sees the death of Trip, protecting his friend right to the end. And it paves the way for Archer's excellent talk with T'Pol about how hard it is to keep a brave face on things, but how necessary. That in the future, life won't be all roses and happiness, but that doesn't mean we can't try.

The season had already had its share of action spectaculars. The series of arc episodes that referenced the films and significant Trek episodes meant that to do the same in the finale would have been less momentous.

I just love those scenes though. Travis thinking he's getting it wrong and Riker gently telling him 'There's no need to apologise'. And seeing Trip animately talking in his usual upbeat manner after we know he dies shortly afterwards... it's great stuff.
 
The core of Enterprise is about this struggle to remain optimistic when there are so many disapointments and trials waiting for you in life.
True. And almost too close to real life to be comfortable. Perhaps this was the most different thing about this "not your father's Star Trek" that was Enterprise.

I find your analysis of Braga's thematic style compelling. It's been a while since I've watched the other Trek series (and you make me want to go back and look at them again), but looking over the ENT episodes Braga had a hand in, it is true that the "reveal" is more often than not a disillusionment rather than a wonder. I do see the themes of trust and friendship running through a lot of them, though, and that is something I remember strongly from the show.

Your comments about Archer and Trip line up with how I saw those characters. I also saw Archer's initial idealism beaten down over the course of the first 3 seasons, and I found him to be a poignant and affecting character, one to really root for as he struggled with expectations vs outcomes, and the rocky widening of his horizons. I think he was still a work in progress in Season 4, and beginning to rediscover his spark of enthusiasm again, but the writing seemed to abandon character development in general during that last season, except for a couple of supporting characters (Soval and Shran). I suspect the impending cancellation had more to do with that than the switch in showrunners, but that's only a theory.

I found T'Pol more interesting than you did, I think. :) Her curiosity about emotions, and later her struggle with them, evoked Spock's ongoing battle to find a balance and peace within himself. And it would have been interesting to see how she and Trip pursued a Vulcan/human relationship...but both of these elements, though meticulously set up in Season 3, were rather obviously abandoned in Season 4 (see above theory). Too bad.

[sidebar] The "sex sells!" angle has been there since 1966, sometimes artfully, other times less so. People deal with it (or not) in their own way. "Star Trek Sex" seems to be more juvenile than necessary, when it's dealing with relationships at all, but that appears to be part of the deal. [/sidebar]

I also liked Phlox, and Billingsley's portrayal of him. The rest of the characters showed promise, judging by their "spotlight moments"; I would like to have seen where three more seasons would have taken them.

Given the revolving door of writers, the mismatch of writing partners, the truncated run of the show, the pressure from the network and low ratings, it's no wonder that Enterprise had an identity crisis, and that promising concepts weren't always executed well. I was surprised that the main characters weren't nurtured to a sufficient degree by the writing staff to make sure that most viewers saw them as the writers intended; instead you got this polarized view of the captain, confusion over the Vulcans, and so on. That was unfortunate.

As for "TATV"...while Braga's intent to show hope and optimism amid sacrifice and grief might have been a noble one, the execution of the concept just seemed too clumsy. I think he and Berman lost sight of the fact that this was an Enterprise finale, not just a "Trek On TV" finale. For all the crew's contributions, no one had been promoted. Trip had been in tougher jams and come out alive and kicking, but in "TATV" he chose the most unimaginative solution and basically committed suicide. :wtf: His scene afterward with Chef would have been far more affecting, IMHO, had we known he was going to have a "good death," rather than a Darwin Award winner. And there was that passing mention of Trip and T'Pol having ended their relationship six years ago...no explaino, nothing. That would mean they called it quits right after that lovely scene of togetherness that closed "Terra Prime," which didn't make a whole lot of sense to me. The line seemed to be there for no other reason than as a set-up for the shuttlepod scene (which wasn't worth trashing the relationship for, IMHO); it didn't even seem to impact the scene in Trip's quarters later.

So while Braga and Berman were making it up to Riker, the Enterprise characters were coming off (to some) like second-rate guest stars at their own finale. This might be why "TATV" didn't work for some people. This, on top of the indignity of the show getting canned three years too soon, gave rise to a lot of feelings of hurt and betrayal for some. In retrospect, it might have been better to give Enterprise and its fans their own sendoff first: a well-written, respectful, emotionally satisfying wrapup that provided a sense of closure. Four years later, there are some who are still feeling that lack of satisfaction and closure.

Looking forward to more thoughts from you, Sadistro.
 
actually a continuing theme of braga is how unreality can be mistaken for reality.
and he often used riker as his pawn.
hmm
;)

but really upn exerted a massive amount of pressure on the show.
they originally wanted more birth of the federation stuff but were told to tone it down.
braga in an interview from season two said even then he wanted to explore why the vulcan evolved from what we saw at first on enterprise into more familar concepts of vulcans.
but upn told them less vulcans at the start of season two.
only later after the bottom came in the ratings did they relent.
 
Hello again, one and all. I've just spotted that this thread is actually called 'The Misanthope's guide...' And so the day begins in abject humiliation... Best to get started early, I always say.

I do agree with Hopeful R that the Enterprise crew seemed a bit like guests on their own show. But I would again point out that so much about Enterprise was about confounding your expectations. So I think Braga was shooting for a certain remove from the characters, to show they were heroes but that there were wider issues than just that to consider.

T'Pol is a subject I will have to come back to, as you are perfectly correct that I was a little dimissmive. I still don't think much of the character, but I think Star Trek rarely does female characters all that well (or that the writing teams often have great trouble engaging with them, at any rate).

And yes, Braga does concentrate a lot on reality/unreality. Along with the disappointments of life and the need to never forget atrocities of the past, the uncertainty and hostility of existence are the things that he fire his imagination. And time travel...

And to return to Hopeful R's point, let's talk about sex...

Before I go on, I should just point out that I feel this analysis of Braga on this and previous posts is helpful to our thread, as it helps to understand the main mind behind 'Enterprise' and what we could have expected to see from him, what he was never going to give us etc... I do intend to get back to talking more properly about the series though, honest!

Anyway, I made a statement yesterday that Berman was more willing to use sexual imagery than Braga. That was badly expressed; what I actually meant was that Berman used Sex in the way we have been discussing (i.e that it sells, gets ratings, etc etc).

But Braga is a horror writer and horror writer frequently use sexual imagery. The difference is in how he uses it. It is a well known fact that in horror films, the people who have sex, tend to die rather gruesome deaths. Without going into it too much, sex is connected with evil in the genre.

There are many gradations and explanations for this, some academic and worthy, some little more than the petulance of sexually frustrated film directors. Suffice it to say that Braga is of the ilk that take a dim view of a cavalier atttiude to sex (like the actions of womanising Kirk and Rikers for example).

In Braga episodes from all the series, sex is ferocious and animalistic. There is often a disturbing feralness about it, and it isn't in the least bit sexy for the most part. In TNG 'The Game', Riker's wild and careless liason with the woman from Risa, leads to a deadly (and somewhat sexual) 'drug' of sorts getting loose on Enterprise.

So you can see that Braga is pointing the finger of blame at promiscuity. Indeed, the whole idea of Risa in general is unlikely to have sat well with him. You will notice that the portrayal of Risa in 'Enterprise' is much more varied than a simple place you go to get laid (there are actual old couples there, rather than the usual 'hunks and babes' and there is talk of the range of other relaxing non sexual leisure activities.

But to return to the animal-like portrayal of sex, there is the 'mating' of Worf and Troi in 'Genesis' when they have devolved into creatures. Worf is shown to have bitten into her in lust. Voyager's 'Threshold' sees Paris and Janeway devolve into creatures that then mate (casting a derisory eye over the idea of 'speed and sex').

And in 'Enterprise's' pilot episode 'Broken Bow', we see sex used at the alien starport (or whatever it is), to begin the tidal wave of disappointments that Archer will face. Because the dream was of grand exploration, of meeting new races and seeing new sights.

Instead, they see a very dingy and seedy port, with exotic dancers pleasing the local rogues and the 'prostitution boothes' (for want of a better term), showing wild scenes of sexual frenzy.

The disturbing screams and flickering shadows across a stark white background, along with the trashy, seedy nature of everything is Braga's way of saying that instead of grand sights, you see malcontents still pursuing the same sad little vices.

So his attitude is very much opposed to the traditional uses of sex to sell products. But what about the decon chamber? Well quite frankly, I'd be amazed if that wasn't Rick Berman. His remarks during the commentary of 'It's so hard to find beautiful women who can act for these roles', shows his attitude to women on screen.

In taking Braga's idea of the 'Borg on board' and making it 'the Borg babe on board', and to quote a well known goblin like creature 'Revealed his opinions were'.

The other explanation I suppose, is that Berman and Braga were simply mocking the 'sex sells' stereotype. As I say, usually sex is never, well, sexy in Braga episodes. It's more like an attack. So to see the camera giving us slow, close up shots of people sensually slathering gel over themselves and their partners... I mean it has to have been a joke. I can't watch it without laughing out loud...

The sheer obviousness of the sexual imagery next to the antagonism of Trip and T'Pol must have been a dig at the eternally used 'They start out hating each other and then fall in l...zzz'. This trick is used again in 'Shadows of P'Jem' and is I suspect little more than a snort of derision from Braga that people buy into this stuff. And as I say, it seems exactly the kind of thing that Rick Berman would both find hilarious, and help ratings.

But look at Braga's episodes on the whole and you'll see that sex is generally used to disturb and inform on our animalistic urges. His determination to cut out Kirk-like behaviour is perhaps more obvious when he is absent however.

Take a look at 'Voyager's' 7th Season. Braga had pretty much left, being only a consultant producer. And free of Reverend Braga, the writers ensure the characters make up for lost time by (not to put too fine a point on it) 'getting some'.

Tuvok's at it in the holodeck with his wife, Janeway has a fancy man on some industrial world, Chakotay and Seven get together, Paris and Belanna are finally pictured in the same bed and have a baby,Neelix grapples with a Klingon woman (in Tuvok's quarters!)

Also consider Ron Moore, whom many people have labelled (incorrectly in my view) the greater pessimist, has a much more relaxed attitude to sex in his episodes. He has Riker encouraging Data to ask his friend on a date in 'In Theory', he puts Riker in the situation of having to satisfy an alien obsessed girl 'all in the line of duty' in 'First Contact' (the TNG episode, not the film).

He and Ira Behr often cheerfully show the aftermath of some 'hard Klingon loving' to Quark, Dax and Worf etc in DS9. And to undercut much of the tension and horror in 'Battlestar Galactica', he has set up Gaius Balter as a figure of womanising yet charmingly inept fun.

So we can see that Braga has some very different views on the use of sex to many of the other writers. Again, it's the mark of the outcast with a serious (at times overly so), take on life. Such a viewpoint is not a little misanthropic.

And like with the work of The X-Files' Chris Carter, this tends to lend an unmistakeably darker and steelier edge to his episodes (because he is effectively passing a scathingly judgemental eye at times, over the society we accept and the ways in which we find entertainment).

I refer again to the beacon in 'Memorial', where Braga suggests he finds it acceptable to let it invade people's minds with horrificly violent 'memories' in order to force people to care and think about the horrendous atrocities of the past.

Along with the rather poor taste ending to 'Threshold' (the episode, not the series), it shows a rather unhealthy 'People who act like that get what they deserve' streak in him that his better episodes keep under control (but as we discussed, he frequently lets off steam on Riker and Paris).

So what does this all say about Enterprise?
It just reinforces that with Braga at the helm, the show was unlikely to be freewheeling or exciting, but rather worthy and sober. Even as someone who greatly appreciates the latter, I think the series was always going to be in trouble unless it could find someone to balance his rather strong opinions out.

The trick is that artists rarely like their vision to be tampered with. Braga was content with his own stuff on TNG, so him and Moore got along fine. But when he was showrunner for Voyager and had a definate plan for how he wanted it and the characters to be, having a big personality with such different views as Moore enter the mix was always going to be problematic. Kind of a 'When you left, I was but an apprectice... now I am the Master!' kind of thing!

And whilst many claim that S4 under Manny Coto was much better, I merely say that it was much different. Something I hope to talk about soon. (I confess I've only actually seen S1, 2 and 4 - S3 isn't in stock round my area at the moment - I'm thinking of ordering it, because I thought 'The Expanse' and the idea of the 'journey into hell' was excellent).

Anyway, that's all for now. Nothing in the hands... concentrate on the hands... Now you see him...

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