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"The Menagerie" Line-by-Line

Oops..... :brickwall:

Might I suggest we just do it the way we did TMP? When you get to a cut, do it whichever way? If we include a few bits from "The Cage," (sorry) maybe it'd make it a bit richer line-by-line?

Hey CoveTom!!!!! Get in here!!! lol
 
I assume we are using the redited "Menagerie" version, since someone (?) CoveTom? linked the transcript to that one in the voyager forum. "The Cage" transcript is cooler, but the whole intent of the show is quite diffferent the "The Menagerie".

http://www.chakoteya.net/StarTrek/16.htm

and the link for part 2 is here...

http://www.chakoteya.net/StarTrek/16b.htm

In case we go with the transcipt for The Menagerie...
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TYLER: It's Captain Pike they've got. He needs help.
SPOCK: If we start buzzing about down there, we're liable to find their mental power's so great they could reach out and swat this ship as though it were a fly.
 
^^Going with that thought for now: :)

Tyler: That entry may have stood up against hand lasers, but we can transmit the ship's power against it, enough to blast half a continent!
 
(On Talos, Pike is attempting to find a way out of his cage and the Talosians are watching him on a screen)

Talosian: Thousands of us are already probing the creature's thoughts, Magistrate. We find excellent memory capacity.
 
OFFICIAL RULING: Okay, I don't know how official I am, but someone asked, so here it is... :) To me, "The Menagerie" and "The Cage" are two very different episodes, even though they are largely cut from the same source material. Therefore, it would be my verdict that we are doing the cut of the Cage footage as seen in "The Menagerie." If someone later wants to do "The Cage" as a stand-alone episode line-by-line, that would be perfectly fine with me.


KEEPER: I read most strongly a recent death struggle in which it fought to protect its life. We will begin with this, giving the specimen something more interesting to protect.
 
^^That works. :)

(Pike suddenly seems to appear on Rigel VII near a huge castle and a woman runs up to him)

Vina: Come on! We must hide ourselves! Come! Come, hurry! It's deserted. There'll be weapons and perhaps food.
 
Pike: It's starting just as it happened two weeks ago, except for you.
 
(Pike runs off as we recede from the viewscreen and back into the courtroom)

Spock: A brilliant deduction by Captain Pike, gentlemen. Yes, he was still inside his cell, but knowing that couldn't help him.
 
Spock: And could make him live any place, any time, any situation they wished. He would see, taste, suffer with the same reality as you gentlemen sitting there.
 
Pike: Longer hair, different dress, but it is you, the one the survivors called Vina...
 
^ Completing

Pike: Or rather the image of Vina. But why you again? Why didn't they create a different girl?

[Rigel 7]

Vina: Quick. If you attack while it's not looking.
 
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