^^^Candidate for a page 1 rewrite. 
I don't see how what you said there disagrees with what I wrote. Writing a feature length script is hard.
What you're saying is basically the old Hollywood axiom of, "Every movie is written three times: once for the page, once on the stage, and once in editing."

I don't see how what you said there disagrees with what I wrote. Writing a feature length script is hard.
What you're saying is basically the old Hollywood axiom of, "Every movie is written three times: once for the page, once on the stage, and once in editing."