I really liked it. I'm really glad
Star Trek is in a place where it can do wonderful creative experiments like this instead of being trapped in its old formula.
I especially loved how Spock's song, "I'm the X," is both about him realizing he is the variable in his equation he needs to solve for,
and processing the fact that he is now Christine's ex (functionally, if not officially). Love a good heartbreaking pun.
I have one critique:
The music needed more leitmotiffs.
One of the best things a musical can do is introduce a motiff, and then reprise it in a new context to give it a new layer of depth and meaning. A really good example of that is actually "Once More, With Feeling" from
Buffy -- when Tara first sings the motiff "I'm under your spell" to Willow, it expresses her love for her and the happiness their relationship brings. Then she discovers that Willow used magick to steal her memory away of a fight they'd had; she reprises the motiff and it's chilling. "I'm under your spell." Instead of love, it's now a motiff of bitterness and anger and betrayal.
And I think that's something "Subspace Rhapsody" was missing.
Now, the hook that really captured my imagination watching it was actually the chorus to the opening song, "Status Report." It starts with Spock and spreads to the rest of the crew: "Apologies / A most confounding thing / I appear to be singing / Most unusual, so peculiar" as this music with syncopated creates a sense of rising tension. That hook already contextualizes "Status Report" -- the song becomes about the crew's feelings of embarrassment, powerlessness, and vulnerability instead of just being about technobabble and ship's systems.
So... why not use it to add some more depth to more songs?
What if, for instance, you write "Private Conversation" to be a more genuinely painful song instead of just being played for laughs? What if you reprise that motiff when Pike admits he just doesn't want to go to the planet Batel suggested? "Apologies / A most confounding thing / I appear to be lying / Most unusual, so peculiar." "Apologies / A most confounding thing / I don't appear to be listening / Most unusual, so peculiar." Use the motiff to make "Private Conversation" about feelings of fear and vulnerability in a relationship, about being a version of yourself you never meant to be.
And then.
And
then.
Reprise it again after Christine's song.
Quiet. Minimal accompaniment, or no accompaniment. Just Spock, quietly singing after Christine has just dumped him in front of the whole crew and ripped his green-blooded heart out:
"Apologies. / A most confounding thing: / I appear to be in love.* / Most unusual, so peculiar."
And
then he walks out.
(* Or some other lyric that works better but means the same thing. I'm not a lyricist.)
Bottom line: I really enjoyed it. But I feel like the songwriters could have pushed things to the next level and didn't quite get there. 8/10 songs, 9/10 episode.
Edited to add:
I should at least partially rescind my criticism. While I still wish they reprised more leitmotiffs, I've just realized after putting the headphones on to just
listen to "I'm Ready" and "I'm the X" that the latter is just a rearrangement of the former with new lyrics. They're mirror versions of the same song -- I really like that.
