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1) Going on the assumption that such is inherently worse than any other kind of killing on a mass scale (which means that Kirk and company were the most vile kinds of murderers in "The Man Trap", regardless of context)
The Salt Vampire's species in "The Man Trap" was already extinct. Sorry, but if you're the only individual left of your species, your species is gone already, and killing you is not genocide.

This point, or the topic that it relates to, is actually something on which I differ from most people. I generally have the same position on 31 and its actions as Sci or Mr. Laser Beam, but there are also distinctions in our perspectives. As Rush said, the assumption that one form of killing or mass killing is inherently worse than another is a highly ethically questionable proposition, for all that many seem unwilling to consider this. It is, to me, an inherently tribalist assumption, an unquestioned outgrowth of a system of thought wherein the object of designated worth is the group structure and not the individual. Killing a national village of 600 on New Guinea, for example, is not a more serious action that killing 600 Han Chinese, or indeed a million Han Chinese, simply because it extinguishes a language and culture. It is the same action: One count of killing, two counts of killing, a million counts of killing. Culture, ethnicity, race; these are irrelevant as regards the worth of a life or the loss when that life is taken. The tribalist tendency to view reality in terms of the group structure is what leads, for example, to the assumption that killing large swathes of the biologically or socially "disposable" or "expendable" population is justified or at least lacking in note, so long as the tribal group as a whole survives. It may be the basis of the tribalist morality but it is certainly not a universal. Objecting to Section 31's attempted destruction of the Great Link because it's a genocide (rather than simply a mass murder) is, to me personally, missing the point. Indeed, the very concept of genocide subordinates the individual to a cultural, ethnic or racial group identity, and not only suggests that such a grouping shares worth with a being, but in fact elevates the grouping above the being. Again, this is not a universal in terms of ethical worldviews; it is the product of a worldview that defines people by membership.

Even if we ignore the point of sapience trumping matters of affiliation or categorization, there's also the potential point that every death of a person who has not yet produced offspring - which would be a considerable number of soldiers, historically - is the extinguishing of a genetic line. Why is the protection of genetic identity meaningless on an individual scale but sacred on a larger scale? Because racial and ethnic diversity in the gene pool is important to a species? Removing a swath of the potentials is therefore instinctively viewed as a problem and disquieting, when selectively culling the individual lines is not only unproblematic but indeed second nature? It can't be numbers, since the whole point of this line of thinking is that numbers of individuals are irrelevant; it is the integrity of the group, however that group is defined.

If Memory Omega is truly dedicated to the principles of the Commonwealth it nurtured, its ultimate goal should be to slowly die. A true rule of peace, rather than one implicitly enforced on threats of annihilation.

Well, I don't know here. I mean, I think it's pretty clear that so long as there are nations who are foreign to you, you have to maintain a means of national defense, because there is always a threat of invasion. Large-scale political actors cannot be trusted if they do not feel a kinship to your large-scale political actor.

If Memory Omega's goal is to see itself dissolved, then the Commonwealth's goal would need to be to consensually unite every polity in the galaxy under its banner. Only then would national defense be defunct.
I wasn't suggesting that the Commonwealth give up its national defence; merely that a status quo maintained through implicit threats of annihilation if you cross them is incompatible with the Commonwealth's actual goals, and if Memory Omega is committed to ensuring a transition to a more peaceable and ethically palatable galaxy (which so far it's given every indication of being) then it should be aiming to wither as the Commonwealth grows strong. Aiming for Cardassia and Qo'noS and the others to change their attitudes so that Omega no longer feels the need to maintain the peace through implicit threat of fearsome retaliation. I probably phrased it poorly - it can still exist, but reduced in power and no longer the force it was. Spock's vision must surely call for the eventual abandonment of force as a legitimate policy in its entirety. Omega has, as you point out, essentially done so - we can question whether it would ever actually use its arsenal, and clearly doesn't want to - but by necessity there's a way to go.

Large-scale political actors cannot be trusted if they do not feel a kinship to your large-scale political actor.

Ah, Tribalists. :lol: Again, everything is about group structure and membership and subordination and control.
 
Great book though was unsure what the Klingon and Cardassian agents were in the story for? I haven't read much MU lit though.
 
1) Going on the assumption that such is inherently worse than any other kind of killing on a mass scale (which means that Kirk and company were the most vile kinds of murderers in "The Man Trap", regardless of context)
The Salt Vampire's species in "The Man Trap" was already extinct. Sorry, but if you're the only individual left of your species, your species is gone already, and killing you is not genocide.

This point, or the topic that it relates to, is actually something on which I differ from most people. I generally have the same position on 31 and its actions as Sci or Mr. Laser Beam, but there are also distinctions in our perspectives. As Rush said, the assumption that one form of killing or mass killing is inherently worse than another is a highly ethically questionable proposition, for all that many seem unwilling to consider this.

Actually, I was mostly just side-stepping that question by arguing that whether or not you think genocide is worse than mass murder, the killing of the Salt Vampire in "The Man Trap" could not have constituted genocide, since the species was already functionally extinct.

But....

I suppose here's my line of thinking:

I am a tribalist--or, rather, a tribalist lite. What I mean by that is that I recognize that even if the specific question of what constitutes a society varies from culture to culture and over time, the simple fact of the matter is that it is intrinsic to the overwhelming majority of human beings that they are social animals who need, want, and create group identities for themselves--who create societies for themselves to live in. Yeah, there are always going to be outliers who are quite literally anti-social, but they're always the extreme minority. Human beings need and want other human beings.

And I think that's legitimate. I think that the creation of group identities is a legitimate act. And, yes, I think that the group identity that is created subsequently has in and of itself certain rights, including the right to perpetuate itself as a group, and the right to defend itself from hostile foreign groups.

I also think that those groups benefit most when they are able to work together with other groups, to create feelings of loyalty and kinship between themselves. This is how tribes turned into clans, clans turned into cities, cities turned into nations, and (in the Star Trek Universe) how nations turned into unified worlds, and how unified worlds turned into Federations.

This is why I call myself a tribalist lite--it's not that I think my tribe, or any particular tribe, is inherently better than any other tribe. (At least, not consciously; I am of course as prone to falling into ethnocentric thought patterns as anyone else, and have to consciously work not to fall into those patterns that my racist, nationalist tribe has indoctrinated me into.) In that sense, I am not a nationalist. But I do think that tribes are a necessary component of human identity that can be forces for good instead of evil. And I think that each tribe is worthy of respect and value, of being seen as beautiful, even if it comes with some aspects that are objectionable.

So, to me, yeah, I do assert that genocide is, if not worse than mass murder, then wrong in a different sort of way, in a very unique sort of way. It's not that the lives of 600 national villagers in New Guinea are worth more than the lives of 1,000,000 Han in China. It's that the rest of humanity has, in addition to those individual human lives, also lost a culture, a language, a group identity whose uniqueness made the world a more beautiful place. Group identities are like colors on a painting -- they may not be "objectively" real, but they are real to human psychology, and losing one makes the painting less beautiful than it had once been.

The tribalist tendency to view reality in terms of the group structure is what leads, for example, to the assumption that killing large swathes of the biologically or socially "disposable" or "expendable" population is justified or at least lacking in note, so long as the tribal group as a whole survives.

Well, more to the point, the idea that killing huge swaths of a population is acceptable occurs when those people are made the victims of "Othering," of making them seem less like legitimate members of the tribe and therefore subject to the kinds of violence to which foreigners are subject.

Well, I don't know here. I mean, I think it's pretty clear that so long as there are nations who are foreign to you, you have to maintain a means of national defense, because there is always a threat of invasion. Large-scale political actors cannot be trusted if they do not feel a kinship to your large-scale political actor.

If Memory Omega's goal is to see itself dissolved, then the Commonwealth's goal would need to be to consensually unite every polity in the galaxy under its banner. Only then would national defense be defunct.

I wasn't suggesting that the Commonwealth give up its national defence; merely that a status quo maintained through implicit threats of annihilation if you cross them is incompatible with the Commonwealth's actual goals, and if Memory Omega is committed to ensuring a transition to a more peaceable and ethically palatable galaxy (which so far it's given every indication of being) then it should be aiming to wither as the Commonwealth grows strong. Aiming for Cardassia and Qo'noS and the others to change their attitudes so that Omega no longer feels the need to maintain the peace through implicit threat of fearsome retaliation. I probably phrased it poorly - it can still exist, but reduced in power and no longer the force it was. Spock's vision must surely call for the eventual abandonment of force as a legitimate policy in its entirety. Omega has, as you point out, essentially done so - we can question whether it would ever actually use its arsenal, and clearly doesn't want to - but by necessity there's a way to go.

Well, I mean, essentially what I'm saying is that all national defense agencies carry with them the implicit threat of attempting the annihilation of an enemy nation, or at least of possessing the potential for overwhelming violence. The essential goal of any national defense agency is to create a fear in foreign nations that hostile action against them will lead to that agency becoming either an existential or, if not that, an overwhelming, threat to that foreign nation, and that it is therefore in the self-interest of the foreign nation to pursue peace.

In the past, the threat was usually more about the attempt than possessing the actual means; no matter how many times England may have invaded France, the French still existed. But of course in the modern era, the potential for national annihilation has become all to real. Thus, the tension has for most of the last century been built on the contrast between wanting foreign nations to fear that you will annihilate them if they attack you, yet it being unclear if you would actually be willing to follow up on that threat.

(There's a really great scene in the old 80s show Yes, Prime Minister where the Prime Minister's advisers are basically talking him through numerous scenarios of Soviet aggression that could hypothetically lead the P.M. to order a nuclear strike -- yet Harker keeps walking back on where that line actually is. It was both funny and spooky.)

This is true even of the Federation. Yeah, the UFP knows it would never use its quantum slipstream technology as a first-strike weapon. And yeah, it wants its neighbors to know it never would. But they sure as hell don't want others to have that weapon, and they sure as hell want to keep the power this monopoly on slipstream gives them to have the ability to hurt their neighbors just in case.

Large-scale political actors cannot be trusted if they do not feel a kinship to your large-scale political actor.

Ah, Tribalists. :lol: Again, everything is about group structure and membership and subordination and control.

Well, no--sometimes it's about group structure and membership, but subordination and control aren't factors because your tribe is internally egalitarian. ;)

But, yeah, that is the basis of most human psychology--and of most humanoid psychology in the Trekverse. The simple fact of the matter is that human beings evolved from social animals that organized themselves into groups in order to survive and reproduce, and that these groups inevitably had to compete with one-another for resources. This meant that those tribes composed of individuals with a propensity to feel alienated from members of foreign tribes and loyal to members of their own, and willing to use violence against the former in pursuit of the economic interests of the latter, would be more likely to survive and reproduce. Thus, evolution selected for tribalism, pure and simple. And as near as we can tell, the same is true of every other humanoid species in the Trekverse -- from the Vulcans to the Andorians to the Klingons to the Cardassians to the Bajorans to the what-have-yous.

But all hope is not lost! Tribalism is not inherently incompatible with peace and egalitarianism. There is, so to speak, a way to hack tribalism so that it engenders peace instead of war: You've got to create feelings of kinship and loyalty between groups. In essence, that's the story of Star Trek--from the nations of Earth learning to create feelings of kinship and loyalty to one-another in creating United Earth, to the worlds of the Federation creating kinship and loyalty to one-another in creating the Federation, to even the Federation and its former adversaries creating feelings of loyalty and kinship (both on the macro and micro-levels -- the UFP and Klingons fighting wars together against the Dominion; Worf having Human parents; etc.).

Tribalism is just human(oid) nature. It's not going away. The trick is to hack it so it works for peace, justice, equality, and liberty instead of against them. :)
 
I would LIKE to think that this novel will lead into the "fall of Section 31" story that we know must come. Hope springs eternal...

Oh, and if there's a "Control", is there a Robert McCall? ;)

Indeed, while we have disagreements about many things, we are in agreement about the legitimacy of the classically liberal political order espoused by the philosophers of the Enlightenment. :)

Which is not some farcical aquatic ceremony.
 
A very reasonable piece, Sci. I thank you for taking the time to respond, and outline your position like this.

I am a tribalist--or, rather, a tribalist lite. What I mean by that is that I recognize that even if the specific question of what constitutes a society varies from culture to culture and over time, the simple fact of the matter is that it is intrinsic to the overwhelming majority of human beings that they are social animals who need, want, and create group identities for themselves--who create societies for themselves to live in. Yeah, there are always going to be outliers who are quite literally anti-social, but they're always the extreme minority. Human beings need and want other human beings.

Oh, there’s no argument on that point. I would suggest, though, that it's a common misconception that the choices available are "structured tribal identities" or "anti-social", with no other options. That dichotomy isn’t by any means the entirety of the matter. Non-tribalists are not necessarily anti-social at all; in fact, I'd argue that they're usually naturally cooperative, and most comfortable in loosely affiliated but truly extensive collectives. If one automatically assumes themselves to be part of a group, then they have no need to construct or join one (and therefore no need to place their own individuality second to group identity). It’s the individualist who happily exists within the structure of the shared rules, because community is intrinsic, while the tribalists outwardly rebel and agitate because all communal interaction is a negotiation (you’ll rarely see a true individualist waving a placard or joining a march, even though they're the first to have private issues with the status quo).

(Most politics is essentially relational aggression or implied threat of such, to varying degrees. The true individualist has little grasp of such things, and therefore isn't very effective at it. Or so I'd argue).

One doesn’t need to construct (or join with) a structured identity in order to achieve sociability. Picture instead a sense of community that exists as a continuum - a sphere perhaps, encompassing all, and within that sphere are individual entities who all float as unique drops. Through various currents and swells they interact, brush against or latch on to each other, sometimes briefly, sometimes all but permanently. The desire for emotional connection, a sense of belonging - these are indeed intrinsic to most humans. It doesn't follow, though, that this involves group structure, at least as a matter of actual psychology and not a constructed law or societal contract.

I think that the creation of group identities is a legitimate act. And, yes, I think that the group identity that is created subsequently has in and of itself certain rights, including the right to perpetuate itself as a group, and the right to defend itself from hostile foreign groups.

I understand this. Most people, I think, would agree with you. After all, as you note, that form of group dynamic is intrinsic to the sense of identity and the evolutionary hard-wiring of most humans. Indeed, although I find it questionable myself, I'm not trying to say it's illegitimate - I don't think that would be at all justified of me, any more than saying that one’s sexuality, say, is illegitimate. It’s simply the way people are. I just like to stress at times that it's not the only way, and that plurality is not a natural tribalistic concept, so alternatives are often unlikely to be considered.

I also think that those groups benefit most when they are able to work together with other groups, to create feelings of loyalty and kinship between themselves. This is how tribes turned into clans, clans turned into cities, cities turned into nations, and (in the Star Trek Universe) how nations turned into unified worlds, and how unified worlds turned into Federations.

This is why I call myself a tribalist lite--it's not that I think my tribe, or any particular tribe, is inherently better than any other tribe. (At least, not consciously; I am of course as prone to falling into ethnocentric thought patterns as anyone else, and have to consciously work not to fall into those patterns that my racist, nationalist tribe has indoctrinated me into.) In that sense, I am not a nationalist. But I do think that tribes are a necessary component of human identity that can be forces for good instead of evil. And I think that each tribe is worthy of respect and value, of being seen as beautiful, even if it comes with some aspects that are objectionable.

So, to me, yeah, I do assert that genocide is, if not worse than mass murder, then wrong in a different sort of way, in a very unique sort of way. It's not that the lives of 600 national villagers in New Guinea are worth more than the lives of 1,000,000 Han in China. It's that the rest of humanity has, in addition to those individual human lives, also lost a culture, a language, a group identity whose uniqueness made the world a more beautiful place. Group identities are like colors on a painting -- they may not be "objectively" real, but they are real to human psychology, and losing one makes the painting less beautiful than it had once been.

Again, I respect and understand this perspective. I would say myself, though, that losing an individual makes the painting less beautiful, and it is always the individuals that matter, overshadowing any secondary effect of the simultaneous removal of a shared culture (a simple result of my default worldview being essentially that of individual people within a shared community rather than structures, which I have difficult recognizing as “legitimate” on the same level). I'd argue that individuality is the only real measure of diversity. It's certainly not the case that I wouldn't feel or acknowledge the loss of any cultural, ethnic or linguistic bloc (I myself think that having individuals marinated in so many distinct customs, cultures and languages is unendingly delightful, and attempts to quash them or remove them from the tapestry are indeed distasteful in the extreme. Indeed, I'd act to preserve any in danger of being lost like most anyone else) but unlike most people I don’t see a cultural, national, political, ideological or religious identity as intrinsic. Most people protect such things as they would protect their own self – indeed, they see them as all but synonymous with the self, another consequence of that tribalist need to dig in the claws and never let go. Again, though, I accept that this is an area where I’m in a distinct minority. As you say, most people perceive a group identity as a form of corporate personage, with its own intrinsic rights. I imagine it would be difficult for most people to have it any other way.

This also causes occasional problems, in that I respect individuals but not group identities, whereas many people consider membership under an umbrella identity to be a defining aspect of their individuality. They're also likely to hold the group sacrosanct and the individual as the legitimate target of attack, where I'm more likely to view it the other way around.

Well, more to the point, the idea that killing huge swaths of a population is acceptable occurs when those people are made the victims of "Othering," of making them seem less like legitimate members of the tribe and therefore subject to the kinds of violence to which foreigners are subject.

I'm not sure I agree. Unless the idea is that one's own soldiers are illegitimate to the tribe. The tribe’s defensive ring often has great esteem and cultural regard, sometimes to the exclusion of almost any other segment, depending on how one looks at it (there are many valid angles of perspective here, I think); that doesn’t stop leaders and governments, or even sometimes whole populations, from cheerfully sacrificing them in droves.

The point you make, though, acknowledges the idea that a "foreigner" - one not subordinated within the structure to which the individual has affiliated - is somehow external to the community; they and you are not part of the same continuum, and yet they are nonetheless an irritant or an intolerable provocation. It’s essentially the opposite of what I’d define as the non-tribalist view, wherein everyone is part of the same continuum, but there is (usually) no inherent relationship between you and the other – unless you merge with them in an augmentation of the similarity/unification pole of empathy to the exclusion of the difference/distance pole, which is always a danger.

As for killing, well, the “modern” extrapolation of war (which curbs the prior excesses, for better or worse) is based around the notion that it is acceptable to kill or attempt to kill individuals – often in reasonably large numbers - but not to destroy groups or the structures to which those individuals are subordinated. (Incidentally, I would argue that this is why no modern tribalist culture has a coherent sense of young adult or late adolescent males as a distinct socio-political grouping, even though it clearly often acts as though they are, because to recognise them as such would be to illegitimate the basis for warfare, threatening to turn war itself into something in contravention of modern sensibilities). No-one ever bothered preventing warfare so long as only individuals were killed. Once it got to the point that a war could conceivably destroy the tribe – when planes began bombing the cities far from the front – only then did it give many people pause, because the tribalist viewpoint defines the world in terms of blocs and structures, not individuals, which are subordinate pieces of those structures. The loss of a certain structure, unless an actual straightforward goal (I.E “exterminate that filthy tribe, as is our right by vengeance!”, etc., etc.), shocks and disturbs tribalists on a level that killing an individual, or a million individuals, does not.

Large-scale political actors cannot be trusted if they do not feel a kinship to your large-scale political actor.

Ah, Tribalists. Again, everything is about group structure and membership and subordination and control.
Well, no--sometimes it's about group structure and membership, but subordination and control aren't factors because your tribe is internally egalitarian.
Ah, well, the people within such a tribe may be on equal footing, but all are subordinate to the tribal identity. The reason I added the amused laugh there is because – and I say this in salute to what I see as your perceptivity, not as a criticism – you summarized the tribal perspective for me quite perfectly in that sentence. It’s indeed the need for kinship. Unless a being feels that the other being is subordinated into the shared group identity of which they are a part – that (s)he has, essentially, a claim on them - then the tribalist can never rest easy, because (s)he cannot tolerate anything which doesn’t work for their betterment (a shared good of which their own good is included) for fear that the other person might then be working in opposition to their betterment. Unless one's claws are dug into the others around them, the fear is that one faces a rival/competitor.

I don't really see the world like that. This is why I often find myself on the same general page as other people, regarding various opinions on social or political matters, but resisting them regardless (which I imagine can be frustrating). For example, I’m very big on socialist programs and the lure of unifying alliance. But I’m also sharply aware that for me to pursue such ends is different from many others pursuing it. It’s not quite the same thing, because the basic assumptions on which it rests are distinct, and the end result will not be the same. Which is why I’m also very sympathetic to many criticisms and concerns regarding the sort of policies and ideas that I’m actually inclined to support. A global government as I imagine it, for example, would not be the reality that emerged. The difficult question, I find, is that of whether my ideas and opinions are actually workable outside the limited context of my own pondering. Can they actually apply usefully or legitimately in wider practice? But that’s how all people work, of course. Their ethical assumptions are outgrowths of their natural instincts; as you have noted here, the evolutionary pressures that produced the tendency to a tribal identity in humans inform the mindset of most people.

But, yeah, that is the basis of most human psychology--and of most humanoid psychology in the Trekverse. The simple fact of the matter is that human beings evolved from social animals that organized themselves into groups in order to survive and reproduce, and that these groups inevitably had to compete with one-another for resources. This meant that those tribes composed of individuals with a propensity to feel alienated from members of foreign tribes and loyal to members of their own, and willing to use violence against the former in pursuit of the economic interests of the latter, would be more likely to survive and reproduce. Thus, evolution selected for tribalism, pure and simple.

Indeed, this is entirely true. But evolution isn't a zero sum game. Remnants of the non-tribalists remain. Those who would no doubt be considered liabilities in prior times of struggle, though I believe that in the modern world it’s the tribalism that is the disadvantageous trait (but that’s a matter for another debate!)

I’m always reminded of the fable of the bat and the war between the beasts and the birds. It’s often interpreted as being about righteous distaste for deceit and self-serving amorality, with the bat switching sides to its current political advantage and therefore rightfully earning the disdain of all. However, I’m more partial to the interpretation that paints the bat sympathetically (removing the idea that it was motivated by deceitful gain or was mercenary in its allegiance, instead suggesting that it simply didn't have one). The bat can find itself at home in either group, and equally doesn’t truly belong in either. It is the only animal that doesn’t instinctively assign itself to a group identity or subordinate itself to their ownership, nor requires others to do so before it can relate to them. It can move between the groups, making half-hearted efforts to respect their ways by trying to fit itself to their tribe. Of course, the birds and beasts succumb to tribalist squabbling and go to war with one another, and then decide that the bat is the evil one for refusing to commit to a tribe. And now they’ve stopped pointlessly warring, and are united in hating and shunning the one being who was immune to their silliness. It’s a very telling story, really). Several other sub-species of human didn't survive to the modern era, according to some accounts I’ve read possibly because they didn't adopt certain behaviours that our kind did, so I’ve long accepted that what was, was, and it is foolish to really moan about it. Or indeed condemn it.

Tribalism is just human(oid) nature. It's not going away. The trick is to hack it so it works for peace, justice, equality, and liberty instead of against them.

Oh, indeed. I've long had to accept that there’s nothing to be done but to live with it. It's part of the reason why I try not to be too judgemental. Also, why I'm wary of announcing my own positions on most matters, since I don’t believe the worldview I’m describing is really useful in general. (This is why I’m sure I can seem to support a position at length and then suddenly swing out to undermine it, or dive into the same thing I'm apparently defending like a marlin into a bait ball. I wouldn’t be a very good political ally at all, because I can’t be trusted in that context ;). Not that such would bother me ;))
 
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I would LIKE to think that this novel will lead into the "fall of Section 31" story that we know must come. Hope springs eternal...

Mack often seems to plan long-term, or at least to lay seeds that can be made to organically blossom into logical continuations of existing arcs in later novels, so I wouldn't be surprised if he eventually spun this into the Section 31 Exposed story promised by The Good That Men Do.

I also suspect that if the novels continue long enough we'll have a Breen revolution story, based on the seeds that have been laid across several novels to date.
 
My first impressions so far:
Too many sacrifices needed to tell this story. Too reminiscent of Star Trek V. The bad guy(s) need(s) a starship. The premise looks good on paper, but the fish-out-of-water bad guy(s) really don't have a chance against a full crew no matter how much(tactical or telepathic) superiority they think they have. So the writer reduces the good guys on the victim starship to a skeleton crew unable to fully defend themselves. Frankly, it's a bit much for the viewer/reader, so, like The Final Frontier, there had better be a good moral/message in order to redeem itself.
 
I would LIKE to think that this novel will lead into the "fall of Section 31" story that we know must come. Hope springs eternal...

Mack often seems to plan long-term, or at least to lay seeds that can be made to organically blossom into logical continuations of existing arcs in later novels, so I wouldn't be surprised if he eventually spun this into the Section 31 Exposed story promised by The Good That Men Do.
If the fall of Section 31 comes in 2016, then I would find that to be a fantastic event for the 50th anniversary. But on the other hand, it would feel a bit rushed as David Mack only rejuvenated the Section 31 novels this year, 2014.

I also suspect that if the novels continue long enough we'll have a Breen revolution story, based on the seeds that have been laid across several novels to date.
I wonder how it would be if David Mack did a Myriad Universes story set in Admiral Benjamin Sisko's reality. The one of seven alternate Siskos in Fearful Symmetry who in 2377 is a "widower and hero of Wolf 359, whose Federation had long ago absorbed the Klingons, the Romulans, the Cardassians, even the Tzenkethi and the Breen."
 
My first impressions so far:
Too many sacrifices needed to tell this story. Too reminiscent of Star Trek V.

:vulcan: :cardie:

The bad guy(s) need(s) a starship. The premise looks good on paper, but the fish-out-of-water bad guy(s) really don't have a chance against a full crew no matter how much(tactical or telepathic) superiority they think they have. So the writer reduces the good guys on the victim starship to a skeleton crew unable to fully defend themselves. Frankly, it's a bit much for the viewer/reader,

I think it's completely plausible that a regiment of highly-trained special ops forces could overwhelm a conventional crew. God knows the crews of the Enterprise, Enterprise-D, and Voyager managed to have their ships boarded and hijacked multiple times over the course of the show, against foes far less impressive than the Breen equivalent of SEAL Team Six.
 
Sci, lovely post! I'm not sure how to respond due to time - but I get what you are saying. And for as long as I've known you on these boards you have been stridently strongwilled and optimistic about how we should view the world - which I applaud.

I'm not sure I agree in how you interpret S31 as fascist - in that case organisations like militaries, intelligence services and even things like civilian organisations tied to state identity like the Boys Brigade or Orange Order as 'neo-Fascist'. ON the fictional aspects of the story, we nothing about Control - until now he or she didn't exist - and we have no idea how he or she really works. I'd rather wait til we have more than a few lines before deconstructing how their role works.

As for political theory - very interesting - but outwith my ken. Perhaps also being European - and from a country sans constitution - means I view things slightly differently. I would say that MO's actions I were thinking about - the most abhorrent - was not the Genesis device but the rather lovingly-formed telepathic rebellion murders - from Rise I always remember the bioweapon release most horribly.

I'll need to - at some distant point - reread A Time to Heal! Although I still hope R is Control!

But thank you for addressing my points!
 
I wonder how it would be if David Mack did a Myriad Universes story set in Admiral Benjamin Sisko's reality. The one of seven alternate Siskos in Fearful Symmetry who in 2377 is a "widower and hero of Wolf 359, whose Federation had long ago absorbed the Klingons, the Romulans, the Cardassians, even the Tzenkethi and the Breen."

I really liked those glimpses in Fearful Symmetry of other realities with distinct forms of the Federation. War hero Admiral Sisko's is certainly one of the most fascinating. It seems to suggest a Federation that is more militaristic and aggressively expansionist than the familiar one, and likely in some manner suspect by the standards of the prime UFP, but presumably still a force for good. Ironically, it may be that stressing the "military strength" virtue of unity over the "trade and cultural enrichment" virtue that defines our Federation has made their version more successful - more comprehensible and palatable to many of their neighbours. A Federation that has bridged the values gap between the prime UFP and nations like the Romulans, Cardassians and Breen.

"Together, we enrich each other and support one another in bettering ourselves" is a vaguer and less substantial message than "together, we stand firm against Borg incursions".
 
We're in need of a Myriad Universes revival that tackles some of the Sisko-verses and those from Q&A. :drool:
 
Very enjoyable read. I have to admit going into the novel I wasn't keen on the inclusion of the Mirror Universe because I had become weary of the whole storyline, especially with being interwoven with several Deep Space 9 novels. However, everything clicked for me about two-thirds in and I ultimately enjoyed their inclusion, particularly the fundamentally different take on the Dominion (as well as the notion that our Odo may have come from the Mirror Universe).

That being said, I'm more interested in what the future holds. This novel directly sets into motion Bashir and Sarina's attempts to take down Section 31 by any means necessary. As others have said, it's refreshing to see that the Section 31 operatives see completely through Bashir and Sarina's ruse and are fully prepared to handle. It certainly raises the stakes a bit. I hope that in Control we'll see more than just those two fighting against them. We know that there are plenty of other people who know about their existence and it seems to me it would be more plausible for a few others involved (it's a damn pity Vaughn is no longer alive to help).

Speaking of Control, Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy just happened to be the last novel I read, so I grinned like a bloody fool upon reading the final page. If Control turns out to be someone we don't know, he's (assuming Control is a he) automatically cast as John Hurt in my mind. Hell, even if Control is a she. :p

Lastly, I'm surprised no one else has mentioned this, but I loved the double Jason Bourne reference: David Webb and Ken Kitsom. :D
 
(as well as the notion that our Odo may have come from the Mirror Universe).

Really? That's odd. So if our Odo is from the MU, then is the mirror Odo from the regular Trekverse? And how'd they manage to switch places?

I guess it would fit, though, since MU Odo was such an arrogant jackass - like most Founders of the RU were.
 
(as well as the notion that our Odo may have come from the Mirror Universe).

Really? That's odd. So if our Odo is from the MU, then is the mirror Odo from the regular Trekverse? And how'd they manage to switch places?

I guess it would fit, though, since MU Odo was such an arrogant jackass - like most Founders of the RU were.

I certainly didn't read it as suggesting that such a switch had actually taken place, only that it was as if it had, given the nature of the two Odos and how each was more suited to the other universe's Changeling culture. An observation, nothing more. That said, I guess you could take it as a literal hypothesis, since both Odos came through the wormhole on their way in from Gamma Quadrant, and as this book stresses several times the wormhole is the surest "natural" way to cross between the realities. So, maybe they did switch. Although I didn't assume the novel was saying they had.
 
(as well as the notion that our Odo may have come from the Mirror Universe).

Really? That's odd. So if our Odo is from the MU, then is the mirror Odo from the regular Trekverse? And how'd they manage to switch places?

I guess it would fit, though, since MU Odo was such an arrogant jackass - like most Founders of the RU were.

I certainly didn't read it as suggesting that such a switch had actually taken place, only that it was as if it had, given the nature of the two Odos and how each was more suited to the other universe's Changeling culture. An observation, nothing more. That said, I guess you could take it as a literal hypothesis, since both Odos came through the wormhole on their way in from Gamma Quadrant, and as this book stresses several times the wormhole is the surest "natural" way to cross between the realities. So, maybe they did switch. Although I didn't assume the novel was saying they had.
I don't think there was an actual switch. I merely meant that I liked the notion of it happening because it would have made sense.
 
Very enjoyable read. I have to admit going into the novel I wasn't keen on the inclusion of the Mirror Universe because I had become weary of the whole storyline, especially with being interwoven with several Deep Space 9 novels. However, everything clicked for me about two-thirds in and I ultimately enjoyed their inclusion, particularly the fundamentally different take on the Dominion (as well as the notion that our Odo may have come from the Mirror Universe).

That being said, I'm more interested in what the future holds. This novel directly sets into motion Bashir and Sarina's attempts to take down Section 31 by any means necessary. As others have said, it's refreshing to see that the Section 31 operatives see completely through Bashir and Sarina's ruse and are fully prepared to handle. It certainly raises the stakes a bit. I hope that in Control we'll see more than just those two fighting against them. We know that there are plenty of other people who know about their existence and it seems to me it would be more plausible for a few others involved (it's a damn pity Vaughn is no longer alive to help).

Speaking of Control, Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy just happened to be the last novel I read, so I grinned like a bloody fool upon reading the final page. If Control turns out to be someone we don't know, he's (assuming Control is a he) automatically cast as John Hurt in my mind. Hell, even if Control is a she. :p

Lastly, I'm surprised no one else has mentioned this, but I loved the double Jason Bourne reference: David Webb and Ken Kitsom. :D

The Bourne reference amused me too.
 
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