FWIW Richard Arnold commented on it in an interview for a German non-fiction book and basically said it was rewritten because the character of Lord Rodney Harbinger was an obvious attack on Roddenberry and because Margaret used some "hidden codes" to insult him and Roddenberry and mentions one scene were Margaret allegedly wrote: "Korf, Drahcir, Dlonar - who cares?" as an example. Which if you read the words backwards reads "Fork Richard Arnold".

I have read Music of the Spheres, but don't specifically remember that. If someone can confirm for me that "Korf, Drahcir, Dlonar" is actually in the manuscript, then I am going to add that to my signature.
