I liked the accents on the Romulans. Though I was getting strong ‘oh, Picards married/shacked up with this one’ vibes. I mean...she knew he was talking in his sleep, and fixed his shirt collar.
Yeah, that was my first thought, but I think the two Romulans are supposed to be the couple. You don't write "She heard you talking in your sleep!" if you DON'T want to imply two people are a couple. bad move.