If anything, what I find implausible is the idea that an interstellar civilization as enormous as the Federation would be so inconvenienced by moving just 900 million people.
I actually do think McCormack does a good job explaining some of the concerns of some people in the Federation on that front. It'd be easier for her to reduce it all to simple racism. Federation citizens just don't like Romulans. And there is a bit of that present, as would be expected. But she does raise some issues that might be realistic concerns by elements in the Federation. Just because someone has concerns doesn't mean they don't want to help. Some of it is how do we best help the Romulans in this situation? It just seems Picard too easily dimisses those concerns as 'my goal is to save lives'. It's the singular focus that's bothering me. You can answer those concerns and still have your top priority to save lives. There may be cases where you can do both. When Bordson says maybe they can mention how this might advance shipbuilding technology for the future benefit of Starfleet Picard basically all but says he could care less. Old Picard would exploit that advantage when pressing his point, without sacrificing his top priority to save lives. There are times you can have your cake and eat it to. Helping the Romulans leading to advances that can later help the Federation is not something I would so easily dismiss.
I got the opposite impression, that Picard was inclined all along to ask Geordi to join the operation but Geordi offered before he got around to asking.
It just seemed he was unsure. Geordi all but said he was almost offended that Picard didn't ask him first. It seemed a bit ham handed to me. And his conversation with Beverly as well. If he wanted Beverly on his team he would have asked, while making it clear the decision was hers and he would fully support it. Picard is typically pretty sure footed. Maybe not about a relationship with Beverly, but when it came to mission parameters and who he wanted on his team, he knew what he wanted.
And of course, as Brendan said, this book is written to tie into Picard, not to be a sop to TNG nostalgia.
I agree, there is a danger of being TNG-lite, and I know the showrunners want to break from that (though I'm concerned the new show might be too reflective of the world today--IMHO it'd be nice to have a show with a positive outlook--it doesn't have to be a TNG copycat, but I kind of wished it reflected at least the atmosphere of TNG).
This book is a prequel to Picard, and sort of a sequel to TNG. I suppose it just would have been nice in some ways for it to be more transitioning. It was such a sharp cut off. Barely a nod to TNG and the Enterprise to start and right into Picard. Maybe something a bit more gradual--as the years pass it transitions more from TNG era to the Picard era would have helped. Say he had Beverly on his team for the first year or so--or a communique with Riker here and there. While it's probably more realistic from a military point of view, I see no reason there couldn't be a friendly chit chat with someone like Riker from time to time, even if it was just once or twice.
It seems to me that many of the objections being raised in this thread are not to the creative choices of the book per se but to the creative choices of Picard and to the ways it’s a distinct thing from TNG or from the litverse.
Yes, in fairness to McCormack, some of these issues are above her pay grade, as it were. Some of the issues I have are more show related.
And I'll admit, as an avid litverse reader, and someone who liked the narrative created in that continuing story, I find thus far I prefer where things are at currently in the litverse. There have been challenges and difficulties, but as of Collateral Damage things are looking up. The Federation has come to terms with Section 31 and is working to fix the sins of its past, Captain Picard is back doing what he does best, commanding the Enterprise on a mission of exploration. I don't know how better to put it other than it feels right for where Picard is at this moment in that universe. I'm having a hard time reconciling this new version of Picard, and a moment where things look grim for the Federation. I always liked Star Trek because of it's positive outlook for the future. It's not without its challenges and mistakes. But humanity (and the Federation at large) is working towards moving in the right direction up to and including the litverse. I'm just not sure I like the idea of a Federation that's reactionary and depressing as it seems to be in Picard.