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nuBSG fanfic "Battlestar Urantia"

They did not show or make mention of earth 1.0 having an over sized single moon.

I like the concept Bruce and I can fully see it. Just wanna see it mesh better with the RDM ending. "The plan" may lend more fodder to the Urantia epic. Fill in some blanks on the story telling side between here and there. What has Urantia been up to for the last 2 years? how does it go down with the father in law? Do what you do best, my man, tell us a story :techman:
 
They did not show or make mention of earth 1.0 having an over sized single moon.

I like the concept Bruce and I can fully see it. Just wanna see it mesh better with the RDM ending. "The plan" may lend more fodder to the Urantia epic. Fill in some blanks on the story telling side between here and there. What has Urantia been up to for the last 2 years? how does it go down with the father in law? Do what you do best, my man, tell us a story :techman:

Thanks... I appreciate the encouragement. On the matter of the moon...

They actually did mention it... remember in "He That Believeth In Me", when Starbuck was in Adama's cabin with Roslin, and they were looking at the recon photos Kara took of Earth... she did mention a "yellow" moon, and the recon photo showed the moon.

You do bring up a very good point with "The Plan"... I am well aware that when that movie comes out, a lot or all of what I have done here with Urantia may be rendered null and void. But I saw an opening, and took it.

NOTHING I have done here has in any way contradicted anything RDM has said, on the show, or in interviews. In fact... RDM did go so far as to hint that there is/was only ONE Earth. He said all along, that the fleet would find a planet that "they" were going to call Earth. The one-world thing fits perfectly into the cyclical nature of BSG. Consider the following...

- The path to Earth was somehow known, by those on Kobol, BEFORE they even ever visited Earth?

- The Temple of Athena shows the BSG people the constellations, as visible FROM Earth.

- The Colonies have the names of those 12 constellations, and the people somehow know of their "ancient", or Earth names.

- This has all happened before, and will happen again... the Earth Cylons (Clymians) look like a direct cross between TOS and nuCylons, AS DID the RAZOR Hybrid's Basestar.

- The RAZOR Hybrid was revered as a God, and is the ONLY male Hybrid seen, other than Sam Anders.

- The Book of the Word/Pythia tell that the 13th Tribe was human, yet the BSG people found humans with Cylon blood, on Earth... Hera is the only human known to have Cylon blood, and it just so happens, that she is destined to be known as Mitochondrial Eve.

I think that I have bridged the two stories together in a way that makes the most sense possible, for this is what I think happened...

All this is a paradox... a endless circle. In order for life to begin on Kobol, it must begin on Earth. The war on Kobol takes place, and the 13th Tribe is cast out. On the way to Earth, some stay behind, and form the 12 Colonies. Further along the way, others break off, and establish Emilon, and Omiron. The group that arrives at Earth, arrives to find what is left of the Galactica people, and Hera, who has Cylon blood.

Now, fast-forward MANY years... the Earth humans develop their own Cylons, the Clymians. A war is fought, and the old man Hybrid's ship jumps away. It drifts for many thousands of years in space, until the TOS Cylons encounter it, and take it over. They have never seen a Hybrid before, so they worship the old man, who instructs them to end the First Cylon War, which they do, as seen in RAZOR, when the armistice is declared, and the Hybrid's ship takes off from the ice planet.

Ellen said that in exchange for ending the war, the "Colonial" Cylons would be given resurrection technology. Now, since the old man Hybrid was now around... it is very likely that the Cylons used him as a model, and began to create their own Hybrids... the young female versions we see in the modern Base Ships.

By the time the old man Hybrid met his demise, in RAZOR, he had fulfilled his role in destiny... he had ended the First Cylon War, and ensured that the cycle began again, with the ignition of the Second Cylon War... the nuking of the Colonies. Without that, Galactica, Pegasus, and Urantia, would never have jumped away, to complete their destinies, and the cycle would have been broken... human life would have ended, once the people in Galactica and Urantia's fleets died, leaving only those left on Emilon or Omiron.

Again, I know I probably should have waited until after "The Plan", but I wanted to tell this story now. Again, ALL this IS fully possible... RDM has not yet said anything that can possibly contradict the possibility, at least.
 
RDM has not yet said anything that can possibly contradict the possibility, at least.
I think there's enough Fan interest in this subject matter to ask him to categorically state whether there is one Earth...or two.
 
BATTLESTAR URANTIA - "Will The Circle Be Unbroken" (EP. 013)

CONTINUED...

EMILON

WINNOW FAMILY RESIDENCE - NANCASSET TOWNSHIP

The cool early evening wind was blowing outside of the small house, as Tyler Standish walked back up to the door, his arms cradling a pile of chopped wood, as he pushed the door back open, and walked over to the small fireplace, setting the wood down, and taking a couple of the new logs, and placing them on the fire, as Lassen Winnow, Eliza's father, placed a hand on Tyler's shoulder, causing Tyler to look up at the old man, who smiled, as he took the pipe he was smoking out of his mouth.

"Heh... far cry, it 'tis... goin' from Commandin' a Battlestar, to tendin' a fire in a small house such as this." he offered, with a friendly chuckle.

"Believe me..." Tyler began, as he stood up, and looked at Lassen, "There's no place in this universe I'd rather be." he said, as the two men began to walk to the modest dinner table, where Eliza and Glynnis were finishing the table setting. "I've commanded a Battlestar for over twenty years... twenty years of the same thing... flying through space, fighting for dear life, jumping away, and doing it all over again. No... trust me, Sir... this is what I live for now... Eliza is what I live for now." he offered, as the two men sat at the table, across from each other.

Just then, Eliza and Glynnis walked to the table, and began to place the food down, before sitting down themselves, as Eliza shared a smile with her husband, as the two reached to hold hands for a moment, as Lassen lifted his glass, looking to the couple.

"Fair be it then!" he began, "Here's to my new Son-in-Law... the Admiral and commander, Tyler Standish, and his wife, Eliza Standish, who, if I may say, is not only my daughter, but THE most beautiful bride, in the universe! May your new life here be full of joy!" he called out, as Tyler began to lift his glass, as well.

"So say we all." Standish began. "I'll drink to that any day." he added, as everyone brought their glasses together in a toast, before drinking. As he finished his first gulps of his drink, Standish looked back to Glynnis, holding his half-empty glass up. "Mmm... I have to say, Mrs. Winnow... ever since Eliza introduced me to your spiced cider... I can't get enough of the stuff." he stated.

"That's the truth then?" Glynnis began. "When did you get the chance to sample Emilon spiced cider?" she asked, somewhat surprised, looking to her daughter.

"We had some stores of it on the Sepia Moon." Eliza began, modestly. "Jebra broke some of it out, during our short stay on Kobol." she added.

"And how is old Jebra, then?" Lassen asked.

"He's doin' fine... same ol' Jebra... as much of a quiet one as he is, he's still got that mischievous streak in his eye. He sends his greetings... told me to say hello for him, he did." Eliza stated.

Lassen chuckled, as he ate a bit of his food.

"Crazy ol' Jebra..." he said to himself, as he looked back up at Tyler. "So what of it, Son... what plans are ya fixin' for yer futures here?" he asked.

Tyler finished chewing some food, and swallowed, as he replied, looking to Lassen.

"Well, I've been thinking about building a small house... but not here." he began.

"Away from Nancasset... where, then?" Glynnis asked.

"I was thinking of Ponder's Ferry... ever since Eliza took me there, when Urantia was here, I've wanted to go back... it's so beautiful. So green, the hills, and you can just sit outside, and spend the whole day, watching the ships sail in to Gladmyston Harbor." Tyler offered.

"Well, then... looks as though you've got a plan." Lassen began, looking to his daughter. "What of you, Eliza... you thinkin' you could be happy over at Ponder's?" he asked.

"Aye, father, that I do... 'tis a beautiful place, and Tyler will be so happy there." she answered.

Lassen studied both Tyler and Eliza, before he replied.

"Fair be it, then." he said, going back to his eating, as Tyler smiled, also eating again.



BATTLESTAR URANTIA - BSG-53

The ship sailed though space, along with its large civilian fleet.

CIC

The whine of the DRADIS monitors filled the room, as Admiral Hindri looked up at them, as Colonel Azaire walked around the command table, restless, tapping a pencil on the edge of the table, as she made her rounds.

"I can't frakking take this anymore!" she began, as Hindri looked to her. "You're so frakking quiet tonight... Sir." she added.

"Is there something you'd like me to say, Colonel?" Hindri asked, somewhat amused.

Grae shrugged, at a loss as to how to reply, or what to say.

"I dunno... maybe how you're feeling about all this? I mean, after almost a whole two years, we're almost all the way back where we started... just one jump away from Omiron... I mean... how do you feel about that? We made it all the way to Kobol, just to reverse course, and head back the way we came?" she asked.

"Little late in the game, to be having doubts about the course we chose, isn't it?" Hindri shot back, before softening. "I'm fine with it... stopping at Omiron will give us a chance to replenish our supplies, and give the people of the fleet a chance to experience open fresh air again... stretch their legs." he added, as he looked to his XO.

Just as Grae was about to respond, both people were distracted, by the DRADIS alarm beeping, as they looked to the monitors, as Miss Zamfir called out the new readings...

"New DRADIS contacts... reading three, no, five... five Cylon Base Ships!" she called out, as Grae looked to Hindri with a look of total shock, as Hindri gazed at the DRADIS, his face a mix of emotion... fear, and surprise.

TO BE CONTINUED...
 
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BATTLESTAR URANTIA - "Will The Circle Be Unbroken" (EP. 013)

CONTINUED...



The massive volley of missiles sailed out into space, from each of the five Cylon base Ships, slicing tens of dozens of smoky white streaks across the starscape, as projectiles raced towards their target... the Battlestar Urantia.

BATTLESTAR URANTIA - BSG-53

CIC

The ship was violently rocked, with multiple weapons hits, as Admiral Hindri and Colonel Azaire held onto the table for balance, looking up at the DRADIS.

"All engines, maximum burn... bring us around, minus fifty degrees starboard... full long-range dispersion fire to target the closest Base Ship... launch Vipers!" Hindri shouted out, as Grae picked up the CIC phone.

"Launch... launch them all." she began, speaking into the phone. "All civilian vessels, initiate FTL jump to emergency jump coordinates." she said, placing the phone back down, and looking up to Admiral Hindri. "What do we do now, Sir?" she asked.

"Now... we fight." Hindri replied, with steely resolve, and fire in his eyes.

BATTLESTAR URANTIA - BSG-53

The pair of Pan-Galactic liners, known as "The Twins", sailed alongside the large Battlestar, as two FTL flashrings swept over them, vanishing them from sight, just as the mighty Urantia came about, opening full cannon fire, and filling the sky once again with ammunition tracers, just as the many squadrons of Urantia Vipers began to come screaming out of their launch tubes, racing towards the Cylon ships.

CIC

The desk shook with another missile hit, as Miss Zamfir called out some data to Hindri.

"Sir, the fleet's away!" she called, as Hindri looked back to the monitors.

"Tell Ironstar and Starfreeze they're clear to throw everything they've got at those bastards! Bring us in as close as we can get... forward Viper wings, concentrate on disabling the main Cylon guns... we'll handle the Raiders!" Hindri ordered.

BATTLESTAR URANTIA - BSG-53

The mighty Battlestar began to sail forward, flanked by the massive Omironian Warships, Ironstar and Starfreeze, as all ships began to let loose on the Cylon Basestars, their bullets and missiles sailing towards the massive black Cylon ships, and striking their hulls.

LEAD CYLON BASESTAR

HYBRID CHAMBER

In the illuminated pool of milky liquid, the young female Hybrid looked up towards the ceiling, her eyes open, as her lips recited the thoughts and command streaming through her mind...

"The children of the one reborn shall find their own country... no ceremonies are necessary. Back in the stream that feeds the ocean that feeds the stream. All this has happened before, and will happen again..."



EARTH

The proud and tall statue towered over the water, it's right hand proudly holding up a torch, to beacon newcomers to the land, as it clutched a book close to its side, in its left arm.

Suddenly, in the distance behind the statue, a series of massive clouds began to rise up... mushroom clouds, that began to grow ever taller, expanding, as they filled the sky.

As the wakes of the many thermonuclear blasts began to reach the statue, causing it to break apart and obliterate, a voice could be heard... the voice of an old man...

"So is the nature of the cycle. So is the nature of the plan. For life to begin out there, it must first begin here... and for it to begin here, it must begin out there..."



CAPRICA

The dozens of thermonuclear clouds rose ominously above the skyline of Caprica City, from the mountains, as the shockwaves expanded outward, leveling everything in their wakes, reducing the whole of what was once a vast and majestic city, to nothing but mere rubble and dust, as another voice could be heard... a woman's voice...

"The city devours the land, the people devour the city... The children of the one reborn shall find their own country. Throughout history the nexus between man and machine has spun some of the most dramatic, compelling and entertaining fiction..."

BATTLESTAR URANTIA - BSG-53

The Urantia led the trio of warships ever onward, towards the Cylon ships, firing all thew way, with everything they had, as the Hybrid's voice continued to make itself heard...

"But now the time is nigh to close the book. The final chapter is written. End of line."

LEAD CYLON BASESTAR

HYBRID CHAMBER

Inside the pool, the Hybrid's eyes grew wide, and she thrust her body upwards a bit, as her face wore a look of both total pain, and complete ecstasy, as she gave her final command...

"JUMP!" she cried out, the volume of her yell filling the room.



In space, two of the Cylon Basestars were engulfed by the FTL flashring, vanishing, but for a moment, for they soon returned...

The two Cylon Base Ships emerged from FTL, in a fast drift, DIRECTLY in front of the two Omironian Warships.

Instantly, the four ships began to collide, impacting with one another, the hulls of the ships intermingling with one another, as the colliding ships began to slowly break apart...

Suddenly, all four ships exploded violently apart, in twin mammoth explosions, that sent not only massive chunks of debris and fire out into space, but also produced twin shockwave spheres, which quickly expanded outward...

BATTLESTAR URANTIA - BSG-53

The mighty ship began to slowly come about, just as the twin shockwave spheres began to wash over the ship, the impact causing vast amounts of hull panels to be stripped from Urantia, as numerous open gashes began to appear on the sides of the hull, as bits of the ship were stripped away.

CIC

The various alarms blared in the CIC, as sparks erupted from almost every console and station, and numbers of sickening groaning sounds could be heard, working their way through the walls and bulkheads, as the DRADIS fritzed on and off.

"GODS!" Grae shouted out, looking to what was left of the DRADIS. "Both warships... frakking gone..!" she exclaimed, as Hindri looked to her.

"Can we jump?" Hindri called out.

"Aye, Sir... for the moment!" Miss Zamfir called back.

"Recall our birds... we're getting out of here." Hindri said to Grae, as she nodded, shellshocked, and picked the phone up, to deliver the orders...

"All birds, come on home... combat landings... repeat, all birds, come on home, on the double... prepare for combat jump!" Grae called.

BATTLESTAR URANTIA - BSG-53

In space, the Cylon missiles continued to sail towards Urantia, striking the hull, and breaking large sections of hull away, as countless flak bursts filled the area around the ship, as it tried with all its military might left, to fend off the attack long enough for the Vipers to return home, as wing after wing shot back towards the flight pods.

CIC

Grae looked up to the DRADIS, as she reported to the Admiral.

"All our birds are back, Sir!" she stated, as the Admiral looked to the monitor.

"JUMP!" he called out.

Just then, everything in sight seemed to collapse in upon itself, as a brilliant flash of golden light filled everything in sight.



OMIRON

With a brilliant flash of golden light, and a very loud bang, the Battlestar Urantia emerged from FTL, into normal space again. But all was not well...

Instantly, upon emergence, the ship began to visibly convulse, and twist, pieces of the hull breaking off, as the entire ship began to wobble... the structural framework of the ship had been compromised.

CIC

On the command deck, the entire room was in almost total darkness, as fires began to engulf almost every station, as people tried to extinguish them, as the loud alarms filled the room, as the smoke began to rise and fill the air.

Suddenly, a massive series of groaning/quaking sounds was heard, and with a loud snap, Hindri and Grae looked up at the supports for the DRADIS stack, as suddenly, one set of supports broke off, and the entire DRADIS cluster dropped down almost a foot.

Across from Hindri, Grae put the phone down back onto the table, and looked to the Admiral, her face ghostly white, and her eyes wide.

"What... what is it!" Hindri asked.

"Sir... that was the Chief... there's a buildup in the FTL core... he can't circumvent it. And we have lost ALL of our structural frame from Section Beta through to the aft lateral supports... Sir... we've just lost over half the ship... all decks within that area have caved in on themselves." she said, softly, yet with total fear.

Admiral Hindri slowly looked to Grae, the light of the fires reflecting in his glasses, as he absorbed her words... slowly and silently standing straight, as he looked to the command table.

Slowly, his features began to darken somewhat, and his lips began to quiver into a grimace, as he clenched his teeth, balling his hands into fists.

"FRAK! GODSDAMMIT... FRAK!" he shouted, as loud as he could, as he slammed both fists onto the table, as hard as he could.

He then put all his effort into calming himself, and after a few deep breaths, looked back to Grae.

"Then it's over... this is where we jumped, and this is where we stay." he stated.

"Sir?" Grae asked.

"This ship is broken. Urantia is dying. We're in orbit of our new home... Omiron. This is where it ends. We have a world here with established industry, and technology." Hindri said, staring Grae in the eyes.

"Aye, Sir." she replied, softly, as the Admiral picked up the phone.

"To anyone on Urantia who can hear me, this is the Admiral. We're abandoning the ship. All hands, to evac Raptors and escape Shuttles. I repeat... we're abandoning Urantia... all hands to evac stations, on the double." Hindri ordered, as he looked down to the table in sorrow, placing the phone back down.

Grae began to lead everyone out of the CIC, as she turned to face Hindri, calling to him.

"Sir... you're coming!" she shouted out, as flames suddenly erupted up, in front of her.

Admiral Hindri slowly looked up, and turned to face Grae, pausing for a moment, as he finally began to walk to her, slowly.

As he began to clear the central area of the CIC, a loud series of snaps was heard, and he turned, just in time to see the entire DRADIS cluster come smashing down onto the command table, falling through the table in a shower of sparks and glass, as fire erupted all over the room, causing glass panels to shatter and blow out.

As Grae motioned for Hindri to follow her, Hindri paused, and stood tall, facing the command table, and saluted the ship that he had called home for so many years, as his mind began to replay a flood of memories...



BATTLESTAR URANTIA - BSG-53

PORT HANGAR DECK

10 YEARS AGO

A young and beardless Mister Hindri led the formation of Urantia crewmembers assembled on the flight deck, as the main hatch to the Colonial Shuttle opened, allowing Commander Standish to exit the craft, and step onto the flight deck, as Hindri and the crew saluted him, while Standish returned the salute.

"At ease." Standish stated, as he walked over to Hindri, who just now began to break his salute.

"Welcome aboard, Commander Ada-- I mean, Commander Standish, Sir!" Hindri stated, silently cursing himself for frakking up the Commander's name. The XO had been right... Tyler Standish really did bear a striking resemblance to Bill Adama.

"Tell me who you are, and where my XO is, and I'll forget you made that mistake." Standish offered, looking Hindri in the eyes.

"Sir... of course, Sir... sorry, Sir." Hindri began, like a schoolchild put on the spot. "The name's Hindri, Sir. I'm your new Officer of the Watch. Colonel Styles is still on Virgon, visiting family, Sir." he stated.

"I see..." Standish began, nodding. "You got a first name, Mister Hindri?" he asked.

"Aye, Sir... that I do, Sir. But if you don't mind, Sir... I prefer just Hindri." he replied.

Standish's features softened slightly, as he turned, and began walking, with Hindri at his side.

"Well then, Mister Hindri... as I'm sure you've been told, and have noticed... people in the fleet seem to get a kick out of saying I look like Adama. Let me tell you... I'm not Adama. I'm Tyler Standish... Commander Tyler Standish, of this Battlestar Urantia. So long as you remember that... we'll get along fine." he said, pausing, as he turned to Hindri, offering his hand. "Welcome to Urantia, Mister Hindri. She's a grand old lady, and you'll love her." he offered.

"Sir... Thank you, Sir!" Hindri said, smiling, as he shook Standish's hand, as Standish now began to walk away again, as Hindri added something. "I uh, like the mustache, Sir... looks like the one Ad--" he began, but then realized his mistake, and cut himself off, biting his own lip, as Standish stopped in his tracks, and broke a slight grimace, at the near-mention of Adama.

"It looks like the one Adama had?" Standish said, facing away from Hindri, as Hindri looked to Standish, from behind him.

"Aye, Sir... sorry, Sir." Hindri offered, truly apologetic.

"Frak." Standish whispered to himself, as he began to walk away again.



Admiral Hindri finally broke his salute, giving one last look to the CIC.

"Here's to a grand old lady... she truly was your ship, Tyler." he said, as he turned, and followed Grae out of the room, as fiery beams came falling to the ground, where he had stood, moments before.



BATTLESTAR URANTIA - BSG-53

In space, the proud old Battlestar sailed through space, as hordes of evac Raptors and Colonial Shuttles came racing out of the flight pods, and began to scatter amongst the fleet, away from the dying Battlestar.

As the Battlestar rid herself of all the evac ships, the Urantia finally gave in to all the abuse she had taken for so many years, and as she sailed over and past the vast formation of civilian ships that she had so bravely protected for so long, as a massive series of internal explosions worked their way to the outer hull, and with a bright flash of white light, her FTL core went critical, and the Battlestar Urantia blew apart, in a colossal explosion, sending the flight pods, and massive chunks of the ship hurtling out in space, in every direction, over the blue and green globe of Omiron below.

TO BE CONTINUED...
 
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They did not show or make mention of earth 1.0 having an over sized single moon.

I like the concept Bruce and I can fully see it. Just wanna see it mesh better with the RDM ending. "The plan" may lend more fodder to the Urantia epic. Fill in some blanks on the story telling side between here and there. What has Urantia been up to for the last 2 years? how does it go down with the father in law? Do what you do best, my man, tell us a story :techman:

Thanks... I appreciate the encouragement. On the matter of the moon...

They actually did mention it... remember in "He That Believeth In Me", when Starbuck was in Adama's cabin with Roslin, and they were looking at the recon photos Kara took of Earth... she did mention a "yellow" moon, and the recon photo showed the moon.

You do bring up a very good point with "The Plan"... I am well aware that when that movie comes out, a lot or all of what I have done here with Urantia may be rendered null and void. But I saw an opening, and took it.

NOTHING I have done here has in any way contradicted anything RDM has said, on the show, or in interviews. In fact... RDM did go so far as to hint that there is/was only ONE Earth. He said all along, that the fleet would find a planet that "they" were going to call Earth. The one-world thing fits perfectly into the cyclical nature of BSG. Consider the following...

- The path to Earth was somehow known, by those on Kobol, BEFORE they even ever visited Earth?

- The Temple of Athena shows the BSG people the constellations, as visible FROM Earth.

- The Colonies have the names of those 12 constellations, and the people somehow know of their "ancient", or Earth names.

- This has all happened before, and will happen again... the Earth Cylons (Clymians) look like a direct cross between TOS and nuCylons, AS DID the RAZOR Hybrid's Basestar.

- The RAZOR Hybrid was revered as a God, and is the ONLY male Hybrid seen, other than Sam Anders.

- The Book of the Word/Pythia tell that the 13th Tribe was human, yet the BSG people found humans with Cylon blood, on Earth... Hera is the only human known to have Cylon blood, and it just so happens, that she is destined to be known as Mitochondrial Eve.

I think that I have bridged the two stories together in a way that makes the most sense possible, for this is what I think happened...

All this is a paradox... a endless circle. In order for life to begin on Kobol, it must begin on Earth. The war on Kobol takes place, and the 13th Tribe is cast out. On the way to Earth, some stay behind, and form the 12 Colonies. Further along the way, others break off, and establish Emilon, and Omiron. The group that arrives at Earth, arrives to find what is left of the Galactica people, and Hera, who has Cylon blood.

Now, fast-forward MANY years... the Earth humans develop their own Cylons, the Clymians. A war is fought, and the old man Hybrid's ship jumps away. It drifts for many thousands of years in space, until the TOS Cylons encounter it, and take it over. They have never seen a Hybrid before, so they worship the old man, who instructs them to end the First Cylon War, which they do, as seen in RAZOR, when the armistice is declared, and the Hybrid's ship takes off from the ice planet.

Ellen said that in exchange for ending the war, the "Colonial" Cylons would be given resurrection technology. Now, since the old man Hybrid was now around... it is very likely that the Cylons used him as a model, and began to create their own Hybrids... the young female versions we see in the modern Base Ships.

By the time the old man Hybrid met his demise, in RAZOR, he had fulfilled his role in destiny... he had ended the First Cylon War, and ensured that the cycle began again, with the ignition of the Second Cylon War... the nuking of the Colonies. Without that, Galactica, Pegasus, and Urantia, would never have jumped away, to complete their destinies, and the cycle would have been broken... human life would have ended, once the people in Galactica and Urantia's fleets died, leaving only those left on Emilon or Omiron.

Again, I know I probably should have waited until after "The Plan", but I wanted to tell this story now. Again, ALL this IS fully possible... RDM has not yet said anything that can possibly contradict the possibility, at least.

And for all we know, the Plan may not be that good. I LIKE what you have done with BSG, and you know what? I think the PLAN has a lot to live up to. (I am still four segments behind but plan to catch up in the next couple days...)

Rob
 
BATTLESTAR URANTIA - "Will The Circle Be Unbroken" (EP. 013)

PREVIOUSLY, ON BATTLESTAR URANTIA...


As Grae watched, Standish reached down to his desk, and picked up a small lighter, and flicked it open, igniting a small flame, as he held the lighter to the folder, allowing the documents to start burning, as Grae watched, utterly shocked.

"Sir... wha... what the frak are you doing?" she asked.

"Giving you a clean slate." Standish replied. "Who will know any different? Do you see Admiral Nagala here? Do you see Admiral Cain? Admiral Lorenz? Nobody gives a frak... there's no more Colonial government... no more military board. Just me, Admiral Hindri, and you." he stated, as he now threw the rapidly burning papers into the waste bin beside his desk, as Grae watched her rocky past burn away.

At her former Admiral's words, Grae began to tear up, as Standish walked around the desk, to meet her, as the two embraced, Standish holding her tight, as Grae cried on his shoulder.

"Thank you, Sir." she replied, pulling away, and looking at him, as she wiped her tears.

"Don't call me Sir." Standish began, smiling as he looked at her. "I'm your father, and you're my daughter." he added.

- - -

"Of course, Admiral... I'll order Miss Zamfir to prepare a course for the fleet back to--" Hindri began, as the Admiral cut him off.

"No... not the fleet... me. I'm going. Me and Eliza." Standish replied, walking around the table to stand in front of his XO, and face him.

"Sir?" Hindri asked, puzzled.

Standish reached up to his uniform collar, and took his Admiral's pips off, and held out his hand, holding them out for Hindri to take.

"Congratulations, Admiral Hindri." he began, "The Battlestar Urantia, and the civilian fleet, are yours." Standish added, waiting for Hindri to respond.

With a mouth open is disbelief, Hindri slowly took the pips from Tyler, as Standish stood straight, and snapped to a proud salute of his former XO, now the Admiral of the fleet.

Slowly, Hindri looked his former Admiral in the eyes, and returned the man's salute, looking to Tyler with respect and pride.

"Thank you, Sir... I shan't let you down Sir." Hindri stated.

"I know you won't." Standish replied, offering his hand to Hindri, as the two men shook hands. "Take the fleet... find a new home."

- - -

"ADMIRAL AND MRS. STANDISH, ON DECK!" he shouted out, his voice booming through the room.

All eyes on deck were trained on the couple, as every single person stood straight, each one saluting Standish with pride.

Standish looked around, at the people at the aft stations, and on the mid and upper-level stations, as everyone remained in a frozen salute. Slowly, his eyes made their way to the command table, and the large DRADIS cluster that hung over it. Admiral Hindri and Grae were there, both now in full proper uniforms, also saluting him.

Standish held Eliza's hand tightly, as he returned the slaute, with his right hand, paying his final respects to the people who had given so much to both him, and the ship, and whom he had had the privilege and honor of serving with.

- - -

Tyler and Eliza sat at the two forward seats, as Standish flew the shuttle along, looking out the window, as he did, taking in the sight of his ship, the Urantia, and the ships of the fleet.

The Urantia was a beautiful ship, even as battle-scarred as she was. And what had begun as a mere dozen small civilian ships, was now an entire fleet of hundreds of civilians ships, from various worlds, all of them a new home of humanity. Tyler looked to his upper left, to see Grae's Viper sail into formation alongside him, as her com voice filled the cabin.

"You're clear for FTL jump, Sir." she began. Good luck, Sir... and thank you... for everything." she added.

- - -

"You believe I am a god..." the old man began, as the gold Leader looked up to him, while still kneeling. "Perhaps that is true." he continued. "I have seen the cycle complete, and begin again. Life, death, resurrection. For thousands upon thousands of years, I have roamed, through the cold dark of space, awaiting the time when I would play my role, in completing the cycle. That time is now. But my guardians are now fallen... the Cylons of old have passed, and the Cylons of new stand before me." he added.

The gold Leader now stood up, as the other Cylons also began to stand upright again, as the Leader spoke.

"We will be your guardians." it stated, as its scanner again began to rove from left to right.

The old man Hybrid looked to the gold Leader with his eyes.

"The cycle must complete." he began.

- - -

The Urantia led the trio of warships ever onward, towards the Cylon ships, firing all thew way, with everything they had, as the Hybrid's voice continued to make itself heard...

"But now the time is nigh to close the book. The final chapter is written. End of line."

LEAD CYLON BASESTAR

HYBRID CHAMBER

Inside the pool, the Hybrid's eyes grew wide, and she thrust her body upwards a bit, as her face wore a look of both total pain, and complete ecstasy, as she gave her final command...

"JUMP!" she cried out, the volume of her yell filling the room.

- - -

The two Cylon Base Ships emerged from FTL, in a fast drift, DIRECTLY in front of the two Omironian Warships.

Instantly, the four ships began to collide, impacting with one another, the hulls of the ships intermingling with one another, as the colliding ships began to slowly break apart...

Suddenly, all four ships exploded violently apart, in twin mammoth explosions, that sent not only massive chunks of debris and fire out into space, but also produced twin shockwave spheres, which quickly expanded outward...

- - -

With a brilliant flash of golden light, and a very loud bang, the Battlestar Urantia emerged from FTL, into normal space again. But all was not well...

Instantly, upon emergence, the ship began to visibly convulse, and twist, pieces of the hull breaking off, as the entire ship began to wobble... the structural framework of the ship had been compromised.

- - -

"To anyone on Urantia who can hear me, this is the Admiral. We're abandoning the ship. All hands, to evac Raptors and escape Shuttles. I repeat... we're abandoning Urantia... all hands to evac stations, on the double." Hindri ordered, as he looked down to the table in sorrow, placing the phone back down.

- - -

The proud old Battlestar sailed through space, as hordes of evac Raptors and Colonial Shuttles came racing out of the flight pods, and began to scatter amongst the fleet, away from the dying Battlestar.

As the Battlestar rid herself of all the evac ships, the Urantia finally gave in to all the abuse she had taken for so many years, and as she sailed over and past the vast formation of civilian ships that she had so bravely protected for so long, as a massive series of internal explosions worked their way to the outer hull, and with a bright flash of white light, her FTL core went critical, and the Battlestar Urantia blew apart, in a colossal explosion, sending the flight pods, and massive chunks of the ship hurtling out in space, in every direction, over the blue and green globe of Omiron below.

- - -


CONTINUED...



OMIRON

The ships of what was Urantia's ragtag fleet, sailed slowly and quietly over Omiron, almost as if in mourning, as the world turned slowly below, while Viper CAPs flew alongside the ships.

CASTILLON CITY - OMIRON

The large and modern city stood tall and proud, partially shrouded by layers of thick haze, as the more distant parts of the vast city seemed to almost vanish in the haze, in the distance, as the ground vehicle traffic marched ever onward, on the busy city streets.

OMIRON SPACE GUARD HEADQUARTERS

The tall glass skyscraper towered above most of the other buildings, as Admiral Hindri, and Colonel Azaire walked up the steps, and into the lobby of the building, the glass doors closing softly behind them.

ADMINISTRATIVE SUITE C

Admiral Hindri and Grae sat beside each other, across from an Omironian Admiral, who slid some papers across his desk, over to Hindri.

"You know... the Government of Omiron completely sympathizes with your problem... but I'm afraid we just don't have the immediate resources on our world, to accommodate a population the size of the one in your fleet. You're talking about well over fifty-thousand people, that would be entering our population all at once. Some of whom, you say don't even how to use modern technology... how would we begin to integrate them into our society?" the man asked Hindri.

Hindri wore a look of dismay, looking to the floor, before turning, and facing out this window, to the vast cityscape outside.

"Don't... you can't do this. You can't tell me a world with cities of this scale, can't handle a few thousand immigrants." Hindri plead, facing the man again.

The man drew back into his seat, and began to rock slightly, as he looked to Hindri.

"Look," he began. "Have you thought about how we would handle housing a sudden influx of over fifty-thousand new people? Where would they stay? How would they pay for accommodations? And then there are the ships... where would they land? We don't have the facilities to hold that number of ships. And what of those Emilon people you told me about... where would they stay? Why can't they just go back to Emilon?" he asked, as Hindri looked to him, with only his eyes. "Look... why don't we meet again tomorrow... go back to your fleet... talk to your people. Tell them what our position is, and see if you can work out a compromise. For what it's worth, I'll speak with Command again." he offered, standing up from his seat, and looking to Hindri, somewhat apologetically, as hindri and Grae began to get up.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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BATTLESTAR URANTIA - "Will The Circle Be Unbroken" (EP. 013)

CONTINUED...

OMIRON

The large ragtag fleet maintained orbit over the blue world, as various shuttles made their way to and from various ships.

WANDERSTAR ORION

VIP QUEST QUARTERS

Admiral Hindri continued packing away papers and a few small personal effects into a duffel bag, as Colonel Azaire stood beside him, watching what he was doing.

Hindri slid an open folder of forms over in front of Grae, and pointed to a line.

"Here..." he began. "Read this... and then fill it out... then sign your name." he added, as Grae's eyes widened a bit, as she looked up slightly becoming lost in a distant memory, from long ago...



BATTLESTAR URANTIA - BSG-53

COMMANDER STANDISH'S CABIN

15 YEARS AGO

"Sign your name here." Tyler Standish's voice stated, softly, as Grae lowered her pen to the line, and gave her signature, sliding the papers to Standish, who regarded her signature for a moment, as he then looked up to face her.

She didn't like being here, with this man... she had only met Tyler Standish a mere two days ago, and was already afraid of him... his penetrating, icy stare, and his soft and rough voice... she was intimidated by him. Word throughout the fleet was that Commander Standish was every bit as strict as Bill Adama, but with twice the temper.

Yet, somehow, Standish had asked for her... for HER, specifically. She couldn't understand why. Her disciplinary file was already three pages thick, and would have been four pages, if her former CO hadn't intervened in her flight class, and placed her with another flight instructor, after her fight with a certain Kara Thrace.

Like a scared child about to be yelled at by a parent, Grae stood tall in front of Standish's desk, dreading what his words to her would be, until finally, they came...

"So, I see Commander Ferrin thinks quite highly of you... of your flight aptitude skills." Standish began, looking to Grae with only his eyes.

"Aye, Sir... I suppose, Sir..." Grae stammered.

"Mmm-hmmm." Standish began. "Yet somehow, he agreed to give you up, and transferred you from Battlestar Carillon, to this ship. He thinks you have what it takes to maybe make CAG someday." he added.

"I... dunno. Maybe... Sir." Grae offered, awkwardly.

"Heh..." Standish began, as he leaned back in his chair, and reached for his glass of brandy, taking a drink, as he grew a smirkish smile, looking up to face Grae. "Well, I don't think you do... not yet. Too many pilots have stood where you are now, their heads full of dreams... but very few end up putting in the hard work it takes to get there." he added, taking another drink.

"With all due respect, Sir... that's not me. I WILL do whatever I need to do, to make it here, Sir. I've worked hard to get where I am." Grae replied.

Standish drained the last of the brandy in his glass, as he stood up, looking right at Grae.

"Well, I certainly hope so, because this is the Battlestar Urantia... and I demand the very best. Question is... are you the very best?" he asked.

"No, Sir... I would not claim to be the very best, Sir. But I am Grae Azaire... and I know that if I try my very hardest, I can and will learn to be the very best... Sir." she offered.

Standish's features softened slightly, as he allowed a small smile to grow on his face.

"Now THAT, Miss Azaire... is the best answer to that question I've ever been given." he said, extending his hand to her. "Grae Azaire... welcome to the Battlestar Urantia." he added, as the two shook hands.



Colonel Azaire looked down at her signature on the paper, as Hindri took it from her. Finally, she looked to the Admiral, a question in her eyes.

"Are you sure you want to do this, Admiral?" she asked.

"I suppose there's no other way... the fleet will be broken up. The Omironians are willing to take most of us now, but not all. Those of us staying here, will leave for the surface in the morning. Everyone else... well, it's up to them now, where they go. The civilians from Earth are staying here. The Orion is leaving with the others... to safeguard the new fleet, during its journey." Hindri stated.

"Do you think the others will find a new home?" Grae asked.

Hindri looked to her, as he gave his answer.

"Who knows? I hope so. In any event... we now have ours." he said, as he slung the duffel bag over his shoulder, and turned to walk out of the room, Grae following close behind.

TO BE CONTINUED...
 
Here's some new artwork... Atolm's awesome design for the Clymian Centurion (Earth Cylon). IMO, he did a perfect job! :)

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great drawing!

I am curious to see the cylon reaction to the loss of the hub and the loss of their beloved colony.....:drool:
 
Thanks.

I'm not going to mention either the Hub or the Colony, for a few reasons...

One, We are already over two years in the future after "Daybreak", so those events already happened. Two, those events were integral to the Galactica's storyline, and not so much Urantia's.

IDK if a way can or will be found to bring up either the Hub or the Colony, in the final version of "Urantia", but if it does get mentioned, it must make perfect sense. Even though the flight paths of Galactica and Urantia were similar, and intersected at points, IDK if the Urantia would have ever gotten close to where the Hub or the Colony was.

In any case, I have decided what the next story here will be... I'm going to go ahead, and try to tell the story of the families on the civilian ships, "Ragtag Family". IDK how long I can play with the premise, so what I'll do, is present it as a "miniseries" fanfic, and see how long it floats.
 
BTW, Radiogod... can you accept PM's? I got your message on the Urantia blog, and I sent you a PM reply here. Did you get it?
 
In any case, I have decided what the next story here will be... I'm going to go ahead, and try to tell the story of the families on the civilian ships, "Ragtag Family". IDK how long I can play with the premise, so what I'll do, is present it as a "miniseries" fanfic, and see how long it floats.
Would that be aboard Urantia's fleet, or Galactica's?
 
Okee dokee Gailen, back off the APS.

Was just curious, one might think that The Cylonskis losing the ability to ressurect thus facing extinction and the loss of their home since the 1st cylon war might tend to change their "world" view. drive on Admiral! :techman:
 
Okee dokee Gailen, back off the APS.

Was just curious, one might think that The Cylonskis losing the ability to ressurect thus facing extinction and the loss of their home since the 1st cylon war might tend to change their "world" view. drive on Admiral! :techman:

Totally agree!!! Wow..I didn't think you'd be able to do this with out running out of steam, I was wrong!!! ..and I like the miniseries idea!!!

Rob
 
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