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nuBSG fanfic "Battlestar Urantia"

BATTLESTAR URANTIA - "Will The Circle Be Unbroken" (EP. 013)

AND NOW... THE CONCLUSION OF BATTLESTAR URANTIA



OMIRON

The ships of what was once Urantia's ragtag fleet sailed slowly and silently in orbit, as if in anticipation of something, as if they were waiting to find out what would happen now.

GUNSTAR LIBERATOR

The small Colonial vessel sailed along the formation of ships, now the only known remaining Colonial vessel, besides Galactica.

LIBERATOR CORRIDOR

All else was silent throughout the small ship, as two people walked down the vacant corridor... Commander McAllister, and his XO, Robert Fisk.

"So Bob... you sure you want to do this? Things will be a lot different than you're used to." McAllister said, as they rounded a corner.

"Aye, Sir... I think it's only fitting that we join the Omironian Guard... after all they've done to help our fleet, when Urantia was around. It'll be a different way of doing things, but I think we can help their fleet, in some capacity." Fisk replied.

Finally, the two men arrived at the entrance to the hangar deck, pausing to face each other.

"You sure you want to live on Omiron, Sir?" Fisk replied.

"Aye... I think the Admiral had the right idea... people like us are getting to old for this kind of thing. A man needs to know when to step back, and say goodbye. This fleet has changed. Our family will soon be broken up, and we'll once again go our different ways. I'm going to settle down on Omiron... try to seek out Corporal Darow’s parents... let them know what happened, and try and assimilate into Omironian society." McAllister replied, as he placed the duffel bag he was carrying down, reaching up to his collar. "Which reminds me..." he began, removing his Commander's pips, and handing them to Fisk. "I think you deserve to wear these now." he said.

Fisk looked at them for what seemed an eternity, then removed them from his former CO’s hand, and affixed them to his collar, looking back up at McAllister, and saluting him, as McAllister returned the salute, before looking down to the deck below, and the assembly of Liberator's crew, standing in front of the Raptor waiting to take McAllister off the ship.

“ATTENTION ON DECK!” shouted the Deck Chief. “Commanders Darryl McAllister and Robert Fisk on Deck!”

The entire crew of the ship, save for the skeleton crew needed elsewhere, waited for the two officers as they made their way to the lone Raptor, until they reached the port wing step, and turned to face the crew.

"At ease!" Fisk called out, as everyone dropped their salutes.

McAllister regarded the sight of his crew, as he spoke.

“It has been my distinct honor and privilege to have served as your Commanding Officer. We have all struggled together with the loss of our home Colonies and our loved ones. We have all struggled together to defeat our enemies. We have all...lost together." he began. “Now as I have charged myself, I charge each and every one of you to find your own path, whether it is with the Omironian People, who have given us the opportunity to start anew, or with the Earth fleet. Be true to yourselves and those you place your trust and love in. Teach them what we have learned, and also where we made mistakes. Only in that way, will Human civilization continue to survive." he stated.

The crew absorbed his words, as Fisk finally looked back up to McAllister.

"So say we all!" he called, which prompted the crew to agree, and break out in the famous chant, repeating the phrase over and over again, as McAllister climbed into the Raptor, the hatch closing after him.

GUNSTAR LIBERATOR

The lone raptor emerged from the flight deck, and once it cleared the hull of Liberator, angled up, reaching a position above the fleet, which afforded a grand view of all the ships of the fleet.

As the Raptor angled towards the large blue globe of Omiron, the ships of the fleet began to noticeably break formation, moving away from each other in a slow drift, re-organizing into new groups, as the massive Wanderstar Orion crept into view, moving over the remains of the Earth fleet, as the ships that planned to leave Omiron slowly moved into position beside the goliathan Earth ship.

WANDERSTAR ORION

WANDERSTAR OBSERVATION LOUNGE

Captain Edwin Fox stood in front of one of the massive windows, gazing out at the globe of Omiron.

Suddenly, he noticed the reflection of someone standing behind him, and turned to see who it was. He did not recognize the man that he saw, who was facing him now, with a very slight smile.

"Hello. Something I can do for you?" the man asked.

"Umm, no... why?" Fox asked, puzzled at the request, since this man was not military.

"Well, you seemed to have a lot on your mid... you've been looking out that window for almost a full hour." the man said.

"Aye, I suppose I have..." Fox began, softening somewhat. "I've just been thinking... wondering, really." he added.

"About?" the man asked.

"Just what's to become of all of this... all of us." Fox returned. "When I was on that Cylon ship, with Admiral Standish, the Hybrid said that all of this has happened before, and will happen again. If that's the case... how will it end? Will there come a point, where somewhere along the way, a generation will learn the mistakes of the past, and fix things, or is the cycle destined to repeat, forever and ever? We came from Kobol, to establish ourselves on Earth, and the Clymians killed us... the Colonials were killed by the Cylons. Over, and over again... nothing to show for the human legacy, but killing and war. Is that all there is, or is there a glimmer of hope somewhere? Will the circle be unbroken? Or is life goin' nowhere, and we're simply just existing... stayin' alive? Will the circle be unbroken?" Fox asked.

The man looked to Captain Fox with a look that was almost all-knowing, as he smiled, and offered his reply...

"I think..." the man began, as he thought about his words. "I think that the one thing we learn from history, is that we never learn from history." he began. "So, the thing we should do, is cast aside all that... and teach ourselves. We have two choices... accept what we've been dealt, and continue the cycle, or act, to change things for the better... alter the plan." he said.

"You know..." Fox began, looking back out the window. "They say that if you travel far enough, you'll eventually find yourself. Now, if all of this is one big endless cycle..." he said, as the man interrupted him.

"There are many copies?" the man asked, breaking a slight smile.

"Yeah... that's it, exactly..." Fox began. "You would think that at some point, we would have taught ourselves already... learned from ourselves." he added, as he again turned to face the man.

"I wouldn't worry..." the man returned. "I think that somewhere along the line, the Earth people might eventually learn the lesson of the Colonials." he offered.

"How would you know that?" Fox asked.

"I dunno... just a feeling I have." the man replied, as he turned to walk away.

"Hey..." Fox called after him, "I didn't get your name... have we met before?" he asked.

The man paused, and glanced back to Fox, offering a small smile.

"The name's Leoben." he said, as he proceeded to walk out of the room, leaving Fox to himself.



EARTH

UNITED NATIONS BUILDING - NEW YORK CITY

The flags of all the nations of Earth flew in front of the large building, fluttering in the breeze.

Inside, a small panel of people was seated, facing the U.N. General Assembly, as one man in particular, began to speak into the microphone on the desk before him.

The man was native to Earth, but bore a striking resemblance to one Admiral William Adama, as he leaned close to the mike, and began to speak.

"I detest what we've done to ourselves." the man began. "Out of a need to make ourselves different from one another, we've made the word race, a way of expressing culture. There's no such thing, and all you high school students, bless your heart for being here... you're a hundred champions right now, who are gonna go out understanding this. The adults in the room, will never understand it. Even though they'll nod their heads, and say you're right, they'll never be able to stop using the word race, as a cultural determinant. I just heard one of the most prolific statements done... by one of the great... humanitarians, he's really trying to organize, and bring us together... and he used the word race, as if there is a Latino race, an Asian race, an indigenous race, or Caucasian race. There's no such thing as a Latino race... there never has been. There never will be. There's only one race, and that's what the show brought out... that is the human race, period." the man stated.

Everyone in the room began to applaud, at the man's words, filling with room with the sound of clapping hands, as the man continued...

"Now, the pressure comes, WHY did we start to use the word race, as a cultural determinant? The truth is, that over six-hundred years ago, the Caucasian race, decided to use it as a cultural determinant, so that it'd be easier for them to kill another culture. That was the total understanding, to kill one culture from another culture, you couldn't kill your own race. So you had to make them the other. And to this day, I spent thirty-seven years of my adult life, trying to get this word out, and now I end up WELL prepared... to say it to ALL of you... there is but one race... and that is IT... SO SAY WE ALL!" he called out, pointing to the assembled masses before him. "SO SAY WE ALL!" he repeated, as now, the entire assembly began to chant the phrase with him.

"SO SAY WE ALL!"

"SO SAY WE ALL!"



OMIRON

WANDERSTAR ORION

The massive ship slowly broke orbit of Omiron, taking the remains of the ragtag fleet with her, as while breaking orbit, the rest of the ships of Urantia's ragtag fleet began to vanish, as the FTL flashrings washed over them, one by one, as the Wanderstar now sailed into open space, as the Omironian Sun began to emerge from behind the arc of the globe, its vast golden rays filling the sky around the globe, as the last of the smaller ships vanished into FTL.

Finally, the massive Wanderstar slowed down ever so slightly, as the final FTL wave washed over the ship, and the last of the fleet vanished from sight for good, leaving only empty space and a vast starfield behind.



PONDER'S FERRY - EMILON

STANDISH RESIDENCE

The thick fog left over from the Emilon night was now beginning to vanish, as the Sun rose, bringing the light of morning, as Tyler Standish sat upon a large rock, a few dozen meters in front of the stone house he had built, for him and Eliza, as he gazed out at the distant sailing ships, making their way into nearby Gladmyston Harbor, while the Sun came up, over the ocean.

Tyler Standish now looked his age. His face wore the lines of all the stress and drama he had felt over his life, but even with that, something was different... there was absolutely no trace of anger in his eyes anymore... no stress, anger, or rage. His eyes were now at ease, relaxed, as was his face, as he gazed out at the horizon, allowing the sunlight to warm and illuminate his face, as he sighed, taking a breath of the fresh morning air.

Behind him, Eliza emerged from the house, and made her way down to him, kneeling down behind him, and wrapping her arms around him, as she placed her head beside his, joining him, as the two looked out at the sunrise together, as Standish brought his left hand up, to hold Eliza's hand, on his shoulder.

"My old friend, Mister Hindri... I was happy to receive your letter. The news of Urantia's demise was saddening, but I must confess, that it did not strike me, in a profound way. We all have our time to say goodbye... we all have our roles to play in this life. I played mine, and so did Urantia. In a way, the news came as a relief of sorts... for in a way, it was meant to be, for to have Urantia go on, would have been to continue the cycle... to never change, and never grow. But to grow, we must shed the past, as I did, when I left Urantia. I would be lying, if I said it wasn't the best decision of my life. Never in my life, have I been so happy, as I am now, here on this world, with the woman I love... truly love. I never thought I could experience this kind of happiness... this kind of life. But here I am, sitting in front of my house, with my wife, and gazing out to sea, watching the Sun come up over the ocean. You should see this place, Mister Hindri... never have I seen a place so beautiful. You feel something you're not accustomed to here... you feel peace."

COLONIAL FLEET HEADQUARTERS - CAPRICA CITY, CAPRICA

17 YEARS AGO

Commander Standish looked down at the papers that Admiral Nagala had slid in front of him, gazing at that one line... all he had to do was sign it.

"Well?" Nagala asked.

"I don't know..." Standish began. "I've already commanded one Battlestar... I was kind of hoping for some time off, for a while." he stated, looking to Admiral Nagala.

"Battlestar Urantia is a beautiful ship, Tyler... brand-new, too. I know the divorce has hit you hard, and can understand your desire for escape, but what better way to forget that, than to get back out into space? A good space voyage would do you good... give you a chance to get focused again... get your bearings straight. Who knows... maybe you'll even meet another woman... maybe this time, one that will do right by you?" Nagala offered.

Standish let out a slight chuckle, as he leaned forward in his chair.

"Yeah... I doubt that's gonna frakkin' happen." he began, looking to Nagala. "Look... I sign this frakkin' thing, and you get another ten years out of me, that's it... after that, I'm retiring, and that's the end of it. And I don't want any frakkin' surprises, either... just a routine, calm, command. Deal?" he added.

"You drive a hard bargain, you frakkin' bastard, but yeah, we have a deal. And you now have yourself the newest Battlestar in the fleet, Tyler... enjoy her." Nagala announced, as Tyler signed his name, and slid the paper back to the Admiral, as both men got up, and shook hands. "Congratulations." the Admiral said.

"Thank you, Admiral." Standish softly replied, saluting Nagala, as the Admiral returned the gesture, as Standish began to walk away, before turning back to face Nagala again. "Oh, one other thing... I better not get anyone on my ship who confuses me for Adama... I'm growing frakkin' sick of that little joke." he added.

"I'll see what I can do... dismissed, Tyler." Nagala said, shaking his head in amusement, as Standish left the room.



"You really should see it here, Mister Hindri... it's beautiful." Standish said, as Eliza and him watched the Sun rise up above the horizon, as its golden rays filled the entire sky with light.

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THE END







BATTLESTAR URANTIA







-BolianAdmiral
 
YAY! What a GREAT Ending! I can't thank you enough for allowing us to participate and experience the voyage together!
 
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Thank you, very much. And you're very welcome.

I hope now that the story is over, some of the people who have read it, but kept silent, will come forward, and at the very least, tell me if they enjoyed it or not... that would mean a lot to me, considering I just spent over a year and a half writing this story.
 
Well Done Bruce, Thank you for one hell of a ride!
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From the Shipyard....

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To the Wanderstar....

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Well, done Mr Standish, Well done...
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I was hoping that the "unknown man" would be baltar...:angel:
 
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Thank you, Radiogod, for the very kind praise. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the story.

Now, I get to begin work on the FINAL version of the story, and smooth out all the rough points in the story. BTW... for anyone who wants to see the design I chose for the FINAL version of Urantia... check out the Urantia artwork thread, in the Trek Art forum here. :)

The first run of the story may be over, but the project is not... even as I type this, the effort is going forward, to realize the Urantia story on film. We already have both 2D and 3D artists, musical talent lined up, and hope to soon add more team members.

-BolianAdmiral
 
nuBSG fanfic "Ragtag Family"

The Urantia's story may have ended, but there's still more story to be told...

Coming soon, to this thread... the next chapter in the BSG Urantia saga... the story of the civilians of Urantia's ragtag fleet...

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-BolianAdmiral
 
Ragtag family, right on! Seems that Skiffy has given you a bigger window for weaving you tales, Bruce, "The Plan"'s TV release has been pushed back to after the Caprica premier.

Tell me a crazy strory :techman:
 
Re: nuBSG fanfic "Ragtag Family"

The Urantia's story may have ended, but there's still more story to be told...

Coming soon, to this thread... the next chapter in the BSG Urantia saga... the story of the civilians of Urantia's ragtag fleet...

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-BolianAdmiral

Are these going to be stand alone stories? or arc?

Rob
 
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Thanks, guys.

Yeah, I'm gonna post the story as a "miniseries" arc first, and see how long it can sustain itself... if I feel I can keep it going, I will.

I'm gonna post the "pilot" soon... I'm just working on the opening for it now... trying to make it as emotionally powerful as possible, yet give it a new and unique feel of realism to it.
 
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Thanks, guys.

Yeah, I'm gonna post the story as a "miniseries" arc first, and see how long it can sustain itself... if I feel I can keep it going, I will.

I'm gonna post the "pilot" soon... I'm just working on the opening for it now... trying to make it as emotionally powerful as possible, yet give it a new and unique feel of realism to it.

Well, Gods, I hope so. This was a great story and you know what? I actually want to see where you could take this. But are you going to make stand-alone stories? Or will it be arcing???

Rob
 
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Thanks, guys.

Yeah, I'm gonna post the story as a "miniseries" arc first, and see how long it can sustain itself... if I feel I can keep it going, I will.

I'm gonna post the "pilot" soon... I'm just working on the opening for it now... trying to make it as emotionally powerful as possible, yet give it a new and unique feel of realism to it.

Well, Gods, I hope so. This was a great story and you know what? I actually want to see where you could take this. But are you going to make stand-alone stories? Or will it be arcing???

Rob

Thanks... I'm so glad you liked the story, and how it ended!

The "Ragtag Family" stories will be arcing, just as Urantia had a set arc.
 
Okay... I want people's feedback on this...

For a while now, I've been toying with an idea in my head, and a few of my friends are telling me I should go ahead, and attempt it...

I am toying with the idea of basically writing a "RDM-ized" version of "Buck Rogers in the 25th Century"... essentially, a nuBR. It would not necessarily be dark per se, but it WILL do what nuBSG did... take the original concept seriously, in both writing and presentation. If I did this, almost all of the original would remain the same, with the exception that the BR universe would be made much more realistic, and believable. I would be writing the descriptions of the ships and Thunderfighters the same way I wrote for the ships and Vipers in Urantia... to convey the feeling of the same visual style, and filming techniques.

Twiki would remain absolutely the same, in every way, as we remember him, from season one of the TV show. I just cannot bring myself change Twiki in any way whatsoever. He will be the same, right down to the "Bdbdbdbd".

But a few things would change... mostly, the story of how Buck ends up in the future, because 1987 has come and gone, and next year, our Shuttle fleet will be retired. I have a few different ideas I'm playing with, for Buck's origin story. I am also going to explain the war Earth faced, in a believable way, and tie that in to the formation of BR's computer council.

As of yet, I have not decided if nuBR will use physical or energy weapons. I am really laboring over this choice. What do you think, and why? The same thing for aliens. I am debating if I can make this story about humanity, or if I absolutely have to bring aliens into the mix. Again, I'd like some thoughts on this.

But above all, let me know if you'd be even interested in a remake of Buck Rogers. As far as I know... there has never been an attempt made to create a nuBR, and I might be the first. But if there is no interest, I'm not going to invest the time and energy for nothing. So please let me know... is this something you would like to see, and would read?

-BolianAdmiral
 
hmmmm, interesting concept. Of course I'd want to see Pegasus come through a super gate from the Ori galaxy on the way to fight the death star with Romulans, but hey...that's just me. :lol:
 
Whaaaaay cool Bruce, totally digging it. As to your side story, I do like it, but let me suggest this:

Rather than a companion story to the fine yarn you're weaving now, how about a story of the the 1st cylon war? Seeing as caprica has been picked up, the next logical progression would be the 1st cylon war. TOTALLY virgin territory and if your ultimate goal is to have something picked up or published, that's the way to go IMHO. I'd love to see the promos for the 1st cylon war seires cranking up just as Caprica readies for it's series finale.

Food for thought.

And a good thought it is...perhaps the family could be placed in the 1st war, but we're ALL dying to know about that one, and I do NOT see us getting anything from RDM about it...and personally I like your writing better than his - so, RADIOGOD, GOOD THINKING!!!:bolian:

More random thoughts, Tigh got to keep Ellen on board, married couples got to keep their babies. And you are SO frakkin' good as the voice of command. :adore: your writing. Why not have the kid raised on a battlestar, son of the CO...during the 1st war? That way you'd have a variety of stories going on...war, love, parenthood, command, space battles, shiny toasters! Sounds like a real crowd pleaser. IMHO.:angel:
 
Whaaaaay cool Bruce, totally digging it. As to your side story, I do like it, but let me suggest this:

Rather than a companion story to the fine yarn you're weaving now, how about a story of the the 1st cylon war? Seeing as caprica has been picked up, the next logical progression would be the 1st cylon war. TOTALLY virgin territory and if your ultimate goal is to have something picked up or published, that's the way to go IMHO. I'd love to see the promos for the 1st cylon war seires cranking up just as Caprica readies for it's series finale.

Food for thought.

And a good thought it is...perhaps the family could be placed in the 1st war, but we're ALL dying to know about that one, and I do NOT see us getting anything from RDM about it...and personally I like your writing better than his - so, RADIOGOD, GOOD THINKING!!!:bolian:

More random thoughts, Tigh got to keep Ellen on board, married couples got to keep their babies. And you are SO frakkin' good as the voice of command. :adore: your writing. Why not have the kid raised on a battlestar, son of the CO...during the 1st war? That way you'd have a variety of stories going on...war, love, parenthood, command, space battles, shiny toasters! Sounds like a real crowd pleaser. IMHO.:angel:

I agree with this idea..and Bolian's take on BSG has been far more fullfilling that RDMs. He said he will be doing some 'one off' stories based on this..here's hoping he keeps up with that...or does your idea about what happened in the 1st war...

Rob
 
Whaaaaay cool Bruce, totally digging it. As to your side story, I do like it, but let me suggest this:

Rather than a companion story to the fine yarn you're weaving now, how about a story of the the 1st cylon war? Seeing as caprica has been picked up, the next logical progression would be the 1st cylon war. TOTALLY virgin territory and if your ultimate goal is to have something picked up or published, that's the way to go IMHO. I'd love to see the promos for the 1st cylon war seires cranking up just as Caprica readies for it's series finale.

Food for thought.

And a good thought it is...perhaps the family could be placed in the 1st war, but we're ALL dying to know about that one, and I do NOT see us getting anything from RDM about it...and personally I like your writing better than his - so, RADIOGOD, GOOD THINKING!!!:bolian:

More random thoughts, Tigh got to keep Ellen on board, married couples got to keep their babies. And you are SO frakkin' good as the voice of command. :adore: your writing. Why not have the kid raised on a battlestar, son of the CO...during the 1st war? That way you'd have a variety of stories going on...war, love, parenthood, command, space battles, shiny toasters! Sounds like a real crowd pleaser. IMHO.:angel:

I agree with this idea..and Bolian's take on BSG has been far more fullfilling that RDMs. He said he will be doing some 'one off' stories based on this..here's hoping he keeps up with that...or does your idea about what happened in the 1st war...

Rob

Again, thanks everyone, for the kind words. Let me just clarify my position, regarding why I don't want to use the first war...

If I have a story set during the first war, it doesn't have the same weight and tension to it, because during the first war, all the Colonies are still around... humans still have someplace new to run to, and start over at. I don't want that.

I want to have the feeling of desperation and hopelessness that comes from having your home, and everything you know destroyed, and taken from you, suddenly. When that happens, your entire perception of what your life was changes. the ragtag fleet of Urantia is stuck out in the depths of space, all alone, with no food ships, and no fuel ships. Everything they have known is GONE. For good.

On a Battlestar, the crew can cope somewhat better, because the military duties and structure give them something to occupy their time and energy. But the people on the civilian ships don't have that... they're stuck for YEARS on end, in the same confining ships, breathing the same stale air, and sitting in the same cramped seats. It's MUCH more of a pressure-cooker situation, than on Urantia.

I wanted to do this story, because this is ONE thing I wish BSG would have done... showcase the feelings of the civilian fleet more... show how claustrophobia, restlessness, and vices come to establish a grip on the civilians of the fleet, and how, if at all, they coped with it, or overcame it.

I just can't tell a story like this during the First Cylon War.
 
And a good thought it is...perhaps the family could be placed in the 1st war, but we're ALL dying to know about that one, and I do NOT see us getting anything from RDM about it...and personally I like your writing better than his - so, RADIOGOD, GOOD THINKING!!!:bolian:

More random thoughts, Tigh got to keep Ellen on board, married couples got to keep their babies. And you are SO frakkin' good as the voice of command. :adore: your writing. Why not have the kid raised on a battlestar, son of the CO...during the 1st war? That way you'd have a variety of stories going on...war, love, parenthood, command, space battles, shiny toasters! Sounds like a real crowd pleaser. IMHO.:angel:

I agree with this idea..and Bolian's take on BSG has been far more fullfilling that RDMs. He said he will be doing some 'one off' stories based on this..here's hoping he keeps up with that...or does your idea about what happened in the 1st war...

Rob

Again, thanks everyone, for the kind words. Let me just clarify my position, regarding why I don't want to use the first war...

If I have a story set during the first war, it doesn't have the same weight and tension to it, because during the first war, all the Colonies are still around... humans still have someplace new to run to, and start over at. I don't want that.

I want to have the feeling of desperation and hopelessness that comes from having your home, and everything you know destroyed, and taken from you, suddenly. When that happens, your entire perception of what your life was changes. the ragtag fleet of Urantia is stuck out in the depths of space, all alone, with no food ships, and no fuel ships. Everything they have known is GONE. For good.

On a Battlestar, the crew can cope somewhat better, because the military duties and structure give them something to occupy their time and energy. But the people on the civilian ships don't have that... they're stuck for YEARS on end, in the same confining ships, breathing the same stale air, and sitting in the same cramped seats. It's MUCH more of a pressure-cooker situation, than on Urantia.

I wanted to do this story, because this is ONE thing I wish BSG would have done... showcase the feelings of the civilian fleet more... show how claustrophobia, restlessness, and vices come to establish a grip on the civilians of the fleet, and how, if at all, they coped with it, or overcame it.

I just can't tell a story like this during the First Cylon War.

Cool..and I totally understand. Whatever you next, you have us all waiting with anticipation!!! And I ain't talking ketcup!!!

Rob
 
nuBSG fanfic "Ragtag Family"

RAGTAG FAMILY

Created & Written By: BolianAdmiral

Based Upon "Battlestar Urantia", Created By BolianAdmiral


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The massive gas giant loomed over its vast family of moons, the closest two of which, both boasted vast blue oceans, green and brown continents, and wispy white clouds.

After a few seconds, in the far distance, many dozens of blips of golden light could be seen, near the closest of the two moons.

At the position where the flashes had been, was a large fleet of space vessels, led by one gigantic ship...

WANDERSTAR ORION

The mammoth ship led the formation of ships along, as squadrons of fighters flew CAP alongside the vessel, as it began to creep into view, over the first of the Caprica-like moons.

BRIDGE

The green sweep of the RADAR washed over the icons of the fleet, as the ships drew closer to the moons, as a hand reached down, to lift up the phone from its cradle.

The hand continued up, until it arrived at the face of Captain Edwin Fox. The man had aged considerably, and now wore a face full of the signs of age, and eyes that had seen much. He wore a sizable beard of white, as he activated the ship-to-ship intercom, and began to address the fleet.

"Attention men and women of the fleet... this is your Captain." he began. "It has been a long time, that we have been in space... over twenty-five years, since we left those from Urantia, Emilon, and Omiron behind, and elected to set out, in search of a new home. Our journey has been long, and weary. But no longer. Men and women of the fleet... we are now in orbit of a gas giant, containing not one, but two new homes for us... our long journey, has come to an end. We are home." Fox announced, setting the phone on the table, as all around him, everyone on the Bridge began to erupt into joyous cheers, jumping up and down, hugging each other, etc, as Captain Fox looked up, and out the Bridge windows, to the sight of the first of the two Earth-like moons in front of his ship, as a set of tears began to emerge from his eyes, and run down his face.



PAN-GALACTIC FLIGHT # 840

The large fishlike Colonial liner began to descend through the atmosphere of the first moon, along with dozens of other civilian ships, as the dark of space began to give way to the light blue of sky, as the ships passed through layers of clouds, flanked by fighter escorts, as they broke through the cloud layers, and the vast continental landscape was revealed to them, with vast grassy valleys, and low mountain ridges, lined with wide rivers.

Inside the liner, a middle-aged man looked out the widow by his seat, to the landscape below, as a fighter passed by, taking in the sight of his new home, as tears lined his face, as well. They were tears of great relief.

The man turned to the man sitting beside him... his father, who was quite older than he. The father regarded the sight of his son, and reached over to hold his hand.

"Can you believe it, dad? It's over... it's really over! We're home!" the son said.

"I know, son... I know..." the father began, also looking out the window, to their new home.

The father began to wonder... now that they were here, how would they live? For over thirty-one years, they had lived on this ship... the Pan-Galactic had become their home, after the Cylons destroyed the Colonies. His son was only a few years old, when that had happened. His entire perception of what was a normal life, was defined on the Pan-Galactic, and Urantia's fleet. To everyone in the fleet, the routine of life on a planet was but a distant memory. Would the people of the fleet be able to assume such a life again? It all seemed so long ago...



BAY QUAY SPACEPORT - CAPRICA CITY

BEFORE THE FALL

The row of large starliners sat docked in their berths along the harbor, as the vast gleaming skyline of Caprica City rose tall and proud behind them.

A large group of people hustled down the wide concrete steps, to the landing where the starliner was to be boarded, as a pair of boarding agents greeted the group.

Among the people, was a small family... a husband, wife, and small boy. The boy ran down the steps eagerly, leaving his father behind, as his mother tried to chase after him, as the father called out.

"Ryan, wait! Julie, stay within sight! Slow down, the both of you... we'll make our flight in good time... it's not the end of the world!" the man called out.

TO BE CONTINUED...
 
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Thanks! I was waiting to see if anyone was still here, lol. Now that I know you are, I'll continue. :)

I also thought I'd announce the next thing I'm developing... instead of doing a nuBR, I'm going to do another BSG story, but this time, nothing like anything I've seen posted before...

I do NOT like to do stories about things we have seen before, like the First Cylon War, a world like Caprica, etc. I want to do something fresh, original, and something nobody has yet done. So... I'm going to tell the story of how the Colonies were established... the Colonial Wars. I'm still setting up the characters/basic plotlines, but I think this will be a very rewarding story to write, and to read. I'll post updates, as they come.

-BolianAdmiral
 
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